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Hilary Walker

Fri 12th Jun 2020 20:10

In a perfect world I would agree with you. However, at the moment I find that every time I go running I'm thinking of Ahmaud Arbery and what 'allegedly' happened to him and feel uncomfortable in my white skin if I don't speak of this in some way, even if only within the smallness of a poem. Take care.

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John Coopey

Fri 12th Jun 2020 19:35

It is one of my many failings that I tend to do my research afterwards. I have now discovered the reference was to “Breaking Down The Walls of Heartache” and not “Tearing...” The original was done by Johnny Johnson and the Bandwagon.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=I29K-gRUJM8

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kealan coady

Fri 12th Jun 2020 19:11

Thanks Po

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John Coopey

Fri 12th Jun 2020 18:03

Many thanks, each.

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Zimbili Shezi

Fri 12th Jun 2020 17:56

Sadness beautifully penned. You are good.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 12th Jun 2020 16:48

HW - your point is taken. But that is also too facile for those who
have sacrificed much in the cause of the law. Each case deserves
detached deliberation and we fail each other and society if we
assume rather than ferociously and fearlessly examine. ?

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 12th Jun 2020 16:42

Lashings of good fun here!
If flagellation is your thing
Dial this number and let it ring.?

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 12th Jun 2020 16:38

Ha-ha. She must be a loving wife indeed to permit such an edifice in the first place ! Did your image have feet of clay, I wonder? ?

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 12th Jun 2020 16:29

A comprehensive consideration of the dichotomy prevailing in attitudes today. It is difficult to resist joining a fashionable
passing parade that deploys righteous indignation as its cause.
Who doesn't enjoy participating in virtue in action? In truth, the
hardest thing is to retain a detached view of difficult contentious
circumstances until ALL the aspects have been examined in detail
"in the cold light of day"..Unfortunately, by that time judgements
have been arrived at, not by the above but by hearsay, assumptions, agendas - and prejudice itself, inflamed by politicial demagoguery and media demonisation.
We hear much of the term "police brutality". It is such a
familiar mantra, slipping off the tongue so easily yet hardly comprehensive when it fails to address the complete scenario that
led to the need, let alone the extent of its employment. This sort
of emotive issue is essentially for the determination of the courts.
Let the witnesses be called and their testimony tested! Then let
us be satisfied that the law has taken its proper course.

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Ian Whiteley

Fri 12th Jun 2020 16:11

Thanks so much everyone for commenting on this and those who 'liked' it. I appreciate you all taking the time to comment
Ian

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 12th Jun 2020 16:00

A deserved tribute for all that HRH has meant to Her Majesty and for
what he himself achieved in his life of public service. Never one to
hold back on his opinions, the tongue was as often as not very firmly in the royal cheek - a realist who knew life at the sharp end of war
and understood the value of recognising the worries of ordinary folk.
- the personification of Kipling's man who could walk with kings yet
keep the common touch.
He is a man, my son!

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Hilary Walker

Fri 12th Jun 2020 11:38

The poem is looking at the argument that says silence on racial injustice allows oppressors to continue to oppress. Surely the point is that we are not confident that circumstances will ever be fully established and verified ‘beyond a reasonable doubt’ in the first place.

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Dr. Kishore R. Nikam

Fri 12th Jun 2020 09:56

Thank you, Julie Callaghan, for hitting a like!

Dr. Kishore

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Dr. Kishore R. Nikam

Fri 12th Jun 2020 08:57

Thanks, Moon.girl, for a like!

Dr. Kishore

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Nigel Astell

Fri 12th Jun 2020 01:19

I like your poems when you look back at these special times

For getting it wrong
please write a hundred lines
Five foot two and I use the Ladies Loo!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 11th Jun 2020 21:59

"White noise" describes unintelligible sound. Silence is surely
appropriate to circumstances until these are fully established and
verified "beyond a reasonable doubt" and the verdict rendered
for the public's information and opinion. It does not, of itself, mean
acquiescence or approval.

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David F. Freeman

Thu 11th Jun 2020 21:42

Thanks to you both. I remember a party when one celebrant made a big deal of savoring every sip. I'm one of those people
who just like what they get.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 11th Jun 2020 21:38

I note that Farage's LBC contract wasn't renewed.
Well, shut my mouth and call me dumb! ?

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David F. Freeman

Thu 11th Jun 2020 21:36

Thanks. It took some sleuthing to get the info, then it was fun to write..

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David F. Freeman

Thu 11th Jun 2020 21:34

Tom and Anna, We were married for 66 years. My feet stayed warm all that time.

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David F. Freeman

Thu 11th Jun 2020 21:32

Here it's June and I'm just finding out how to comment. This poem came from memories of a great loss.

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David F. Freeman

Thu 11th Jun 2020 21:29

Anna, It's nice to know that you can get my poems this way too.?

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David F. Freeman

Thu 11th Jun 2020 21:27

Your and my poems must be stories of romantic love remembered after years. Memories are so precious.

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David F. Freeman

Thu 11th Jun 2020 21:23

Anna, It was fun watching the ravens in the Grand Canyon or our trip out west years ago.

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Anna Freeman

Thu 11th Jun 2020 21:18

What a beautiful moment to capture. Thank you for sharing this!

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Tom

Thu 11th Jun 2020 18:57

Thanks M.C. I wanted to try and be pragmatic rather that reactionary. And I agree with you completely that we should not get swept up in trends. But once your eyes have been opened to something, it's best not to shy away from taking the necessary action.

And thank you for stopping by and reading my work, I really appreciate it.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 11th Jun 2020 18:12

Well put, Ian. It's a vexing situation, on both sides of the 'history ' coin. I totally agree with M.C.'s comment, one not often mentioned.

I can only conclude that this 'glorious arena' of British history is best served with statuary in institutions like museums, where a choice is made to view and review, or not. History is always complex, and manipulated for purpose. How can we possibly ignore that it happened? Or the very complex results, globally?

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Nicola Beckett

Thu 11th Jun 2020 17:18

A great poem Mr Morgan x

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Greg Freeman

Thu 11th Jun 2020 17:14

We feel your pain, Becky. Well, some of us anyway ... Hope you felt better after you'd written it!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 11th Jun 2020 17:10

Remembering this made ME smile. So,I thought somebody else might get a chuckle too. I enjoyed bringing it into 'being', as 'narrative poetry', quite blithely following no particular rules of construction, just fun with words. Yes, I KNOW, it's long!

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Greg Freeman

Thu 11th Jun 2020 17:09

Exhilarating times, Ian, when a dramatic gesture such as this is made. Some throw their hands up in horror; others, such as me, applaud. What is actually happening is change. And then we hear that Nigel Farage has lost his job at LBC. A good day.

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John Coopey

Thu 11th Jun 2020 17:04

Thanks, MC. How she gets the power into her voice from that little frame beggars belief.

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Brian Wake

Thu 11th Jun 2020 16:57

Philip Wroe is an astonishingly accomplished artist living in Manchester. His work has appeared everywhere and it is a huge compliment to me and my work that he agreed to illustrate my circus poems.

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raypool

Thu 11th Jun 2020 16:35

Graham, Tom Brian and Stephen, much appreciated.

Thank you Ghazala. I have to own up to you that this a deviation of the Walt Disney song When you wish upon a star. So I have altered some words to denote irony, and mostly the lyrics are not my own. If only!! It is a beautiful song in its own right....

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 11th Jun 2020 16:21

Ah - an exploration into the reality of "difference".
Protest about what you feel is wrong
Join a crowd and string along
Enjoy the freedoms that others gave -
So far from tyranny and its mass grave.

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Nicola Beckett

Thu 11th Jun 2020 16:19

Sweetheart we will see blue skies again and so will Ma xx

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Nicola Beckett

Thu 11th Jun 2020 16:18

Alan you are on my mid, rest xx take a leaf out of my book rest x ?

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Black Jezus

Thu 11th Jun 2020 16:18

Hey wanna have a meeting if the minds how u been Queen

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Nicola Beckett

Thu 11th Jun 2020 16:17

If only there was a way to help you, I can only give advice, that's my downfall I guess ?

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 11th Jun 2020 16:13

A sensible considered approach to a contentious topic. As I have
remarked elsewhere, I think of the statues as markers of a time and
place that should be available, like books, for historical reference in agreed conditions.
But history is not always universally comforting and we must tread
warily if we are not to be seen as cultural vandals knee-jerking to
the pressures of a forceful factional demand "of the present".

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Tom

Thu 11th Jun 2020 16:09

I love this.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 11th Jun 2020 16:01

We mustn't neglect inclusion of the role played by tribal Africa that
saw its own people participate in what occurred...not addressed
within or beyond the black community two hundred years after Parliament outlawed that odious trade "of its time". Enslavement
has been a global feature of history. Was any "empire" free
from its practice and its financial benefits?. And it is still a
practice that occasionally gets a mention in the wider context
of immigration from lands that have a history of it - as occasional
police investigations into allegations of its existence seem to show...
The statues are merely markers of a time and place and like books
should be kept "available" in agreed conditions for historical reference..
If "truth" and "accountability" are the aims, then let "the truth, the
whole truth and nothing but the truth" be the result.

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Abdul Ahmad

Thu 11th Jun 2020 15:27

Po

You make a good analogy between the blacked out windows of prison transport vans, limos and those inky eyes.

One is unable to penetrate the reflecting mirror coating the outside of those enigmatic eyes.

But OMG how they do reel you in!

Thanks for the like Po.

Abdul

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 11th Jun 2020 15:18

I'll quote Old Will Shakespeare
To make my view quite clear
Measure for measure
You're a WOL treasure
Guaranteed to bring us cheer!
Bon chance, mon ami.
P.S. Thanks for the Piaf clip -superb. It also reminded me of my fondness for another
French song used to great effect in the film "Das Boot" - "J'Attendrai" (I Will Wait For You").

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David F. Freeman

Thu 11th Jun 2020 15:16

Tom,
We actually lived for 44 years in Chapel Hill, NC in a house we dreamed and had built. The house had an office we both worked in. We sold it in 2007. The cottage is at Kerr Lake, an hour's drive away. Many memories came from there. We had to sell it in 2015

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RoseMary

Thu 11th Jun 2020 15:09

Beautifully expressed write. Sounds and feels amazing.

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Tom

Thu 11th Jun 2020 15:02

? We seem to be on a similar track at present. Nice one Ian!

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Thu 11th Jun 2020 14:27

Ray this is beautifully fantastic.

"Though your heart is in your dream

some requests are too extreme

when you wish upon a star

as dreamers do."

Too deep a meaning, one can relate. Loved it!!

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Tom

Thu 11th Jun 2020 14:27

Fantastic and evocative. I have written one quite similar recently called Chalk-White Moonlight. Though, I think yours is more romantic.

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Tom

Thu 11th Jun 2020 14:24

Wow, David what a great life to have led (and are continuing to lead). I'm going to really enjoy working through your writing and finding more treasures. I'd love to build my own home and live by the water. Seems like an impossible dream here in modern-day UK but... we'll have to see. ?

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