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Hazel ettridge

Thu 21st Jun 2018 20:57

Clever. Love the mixed metaphor of building roots and planting walls.

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Danny G.

Thu 21st Jun 2018 20:29

Thanks for the positive feedback Anya! I appreciate it!

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Colin Hill

Thu 21st Jun 2018 19:32

cheers Darren - I don't really think of myself as a political writer but every now and then I seem to find myself in that groove. Thanks for stopping by. Col.

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Colin Hill

Thu 21st Jun 2018 19:29

Hi Ian, thanks for the explanation about 'Strange Fruit'. Glad to hear you had a relaxing internet free holiday. It's good to switch off every now and then but I have to admit I find it hard. All the best, Col.

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Darren J Beaney

Thu 21st Jun 2018 18:57

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John F Keane

Thu 21st Jun 2018 18:13

Grim Norse poem about the disappointments of life. However, some of us didn't even get as far as disappointment. Great stuff.

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Big Sal

Thu 21st Jun 2018 16:36

Great format and piece of art.👍

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Don Matthews

Thu 21st Jun 2018 16:05

Damnit. I'm sure I saw a dog popping it's head up in the back seat...

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 21st Jun 2018 16:05

Thanks for the comments on 'strange fruit' Colin - as always I welcome your feedback.
I wrote it as a 2 perspective poem - so the 'fault' you are identifying is deliberate - i.e a narrative twist in the middle of the poem to move from personal perception to third party perspective. So needs to retain that format to work.
Glad you found it interesting though - and apologies for slow reply - been away on holiday with minimal/no internet access - sheer BLISS 😃

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Don Matthews

Thu 21st Jun 2018 16:03

Could it be Keith annoying you ? Does he drive a white car ?😎

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 21st Jun 2018 16:02

Thanks for your comments on 'strange fruit' Keith - sorry the reply has been slow - been away on holiday with no internet access 😃 BLISS

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Brian Maryon

Thu 21st Jun 2018 16:01

Take a flask Dazza...take a flask.

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J R Harris

Thu 21st Jun 2018 15:23

Wonderful words Frances...

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keith jeffries

Thu 21st Jun 2018 15:02

Darren,
This is a masterpiece of vitriol delivered in full blast. I would love to hear you recite it. I enjoyed this primarily because I know of someone who I would like to deliver this to in person.
Well done and well said
Thanks
Keith

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DESMOND CHILDS

Thu 21st Jun 2018 12:11

Thank you Binte, for the like.



All the best des

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Darren J Beaney

Thu 21st Jun 2018 11:56

Not sure pressing "like" fits this - but you know what I mean....

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Thu 21st Jun 2018 11:34

What a joy to find the 'likes' of Colin and Darren, Keith saying 'thanks' and you Hazel; off to work zinging.
You've all made my day!
😃

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keith jeffries

Thu 21st Jun 2018 11:33

Jan,
A poem of nostagia, re living the past with thoughts to match. I enjoyed reading this
Thank you
Keith

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keith jeffries

Thu 21st Jun 2018 11:28

Brian,
I have a Bus Pass, but we do have a bloke here with a BMW. Do you think he travels the continent? Inland Revenue? Benefit Fraud Investigation Agency?
Keith

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Darren J Beaney

Thu 21st Jun 2018 10:57

Serious shivers!!!

great piece Col and a great reminder of such an important time in world history!

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Darren J Beaney

Thu 21st Jun 2018 10:53

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John Coopey

Thu 21st Jun 2018 10:53

There are still remnants of its railway past on the Trail, Ray. Former platforms, a Station house and, almost ghost-like, darkened striations in the track-bed where the sleepers would have lain.

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Darren J Beaney

Thu 21st Jun 2018 10:52

Great - I love the thought of

being a hoarder of unused love

i get that....

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Darren J Beaney

Thu 21st Jun 2018 10:50

WOW!

and wow again....

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Darren J Beaney

Thu 21st Jun 2018 10:49

Lovely!

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Darren J Beaney

Thu 21st Jun 2018 10:47

Do we live on the same street? It happens a lot round here!

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raypool

Thu 21st Jun 2018 10:20

It's me with my old steam head on again John! I recall us exchanging details re this line a while back. My esteemed other half and I visited the station where a road now runs at the back. Luckily I dug out a 60s photo of pre- beseeching days. Great place for cycling! In the day you'd have had to get a ticket for pooch I suppose so that's one beneficiary.
We saw a herd of cattle going through Brockenhurst incidentally.

A real goodie this one.

all the best, Ray

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Anya

Thu 21st Jun 2018 09:58

The bravest always see enlightment despite the darkness. Couldn’t agree more x

Thank you!

Anya x

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Anya

Thu 21st Jun 2018 09:55

Hi Hannah,

Heartbreaking!!! So much pain.
So many children go through despair when parents split up...

Thank you xxx

Lots of love 😘

Anya xxx

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Brian Maryon

Thu 21st Jun 2018 09:34

Keith - do you drive a white BMW?

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keith jeffries

Thu 21st Jun 2018 09:10

Brian,
I never thought you were the type who twitches the net curtains to spy on your neighbourhood. I shouldn´t worry as he was probably one of the Thought Police. Maybe you have been reported for inappropriate political behaviour.
The poem did generate a sense of tension
Keith

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John Coopey

Thu 21st Jun 2018 09:06

We only do rides that are downhill both ways, Colin.

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John Coopey

Thu 21st Jun 2018 09:04

I once asked my kids if they’d like it if I didn’t work away from home. “Yes, daddy” they said. “But wouldn’t you miss the chocolate I brought you on a Friday night?”. “You keep on working away” they said.

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John Coopey

Thu 21st Jun 2018 08:58

The bastard does the same thing at my house, Brian. Watch him!

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Nicola Beckett

Thu 21st Jun 2018 08:39

Much love x

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Colin Hill

Thu 21st Jun 2018 08:38

my pleasure Brian 😉

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Colin Hill

Thu 21st Jun 2018 08:37

I met Timothy West once - at my cousin's wedding. He was something to do with the Oxbridge college my cousin studied at. When I say I met him I didn't actually meet him. I just kinda stared at him every now and then. We all did. Didn't see Pru or any Irn Bru either. I seem to remember it was quite a dull affair and the marriage didn't last. TW's presence obviously hadn't provided enough special magic to make it last. Is Irn Bru a remedy for dementia . . ?
Col.

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Brian Maryon

Thu 21st Jun 2018 08:35

Thanks all for the interest shown.

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keith jeffries

Thu 21st Jun 2018 08:34

Good Morning Frances,
A glorious fusion of love and reconciliation. Beautifully expressed.
Thank you for this.
Keith

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Brian Maryon

Thu 21st Jun 2018 08:33

Knight - I can see from your profile you are 23, yet your poem suggests that life has passed you by. It hasn't...you've got your whole life ahead of you. Put things behind you and move forward with hope and optimism.

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keith jeffries

Thu 21st Jun 2018 08:28

Your words are very touching but rest assured that you are not alone with such feelings. You might not realise it or ever even know but to someone else your life may be of great value. Something you have said or will say may be what a distreesed soul needs to hear. We all have value. Often we never recognise it.
Thank you
Keith

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Colin Hill

Thu 21st Jun 2018 08:27

the places we vacate are quickly filled

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Colin Hill

Thu 21st Jun 2018 08:26

note to self - must get out on bike more often.

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Colin Hill

Thu 21st Jun 2018 08:19

thanks for your comments Graham, Keith and Rachel - I was reading up on some 'facts' about Tiananmen and according to Wikipedia 'the number of civilian deaths has been estimated variously from 180 to 10,454'. I wonder if we will ever get to hear the true facts of what happened during those few weeks of protest.

thanks Anya and Brian for your Likes. All the best, Col.

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Hazel ettridge

Thu 21st Jun 2018 07:40

What a joy to read this before heading off to work this morning. Thrumming, zinging and rhyming with roses.

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Hazel ettridge

Thu 21st Jun 2018 07:37

Beautifully written, as ever.

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Hazel ettridge

Thu 21st Jun 2018 07:35

The veil is thin- nice line.

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Hazel ettridge

Thu 21st Jun 2018 07:34

Thanks for posting and reminding.

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Thu 21st Jun 2018 03:55

I've also been to Lisdoonvarna but haven't written anything yet, you've reminded me about the match-making too.
A stroll down memory lane...

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keith jeffries

Wed 20th Jun 2018 23:50

Hannah,
This heartfelt poem speaks of a deep unhappiness which many children go through, but you have given words to these powerful emotions. One of your very best works.
Thank you for this
Keith

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