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Tempting smile

be not seduced

by her inky smiling eyes

that ignite her scarlet lips

to whisper sweet

alluring promises

 

gaze into

those dark eyes

at your own peril

lest you drown

in her tears

and disappear 

into the deep recesses

of those black eyes.

 

◄ Rain turned into wine

Soul and body purified ►

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Abdul Ahmad

Thu 11th Jun 2020 15:27

Po

You make a good analogy between the blacked out windows of prison transport vans, limos and those inky eyes.

One is unable to penetrate the reflecting mirror coating the outside of those enigmatic eyes.

But OMG how they do reel you in!

Thanks for the like Po.

Abdul

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Abdul Ahmad

Thu 11th Jun 2020 09:33

Philipos and Tom

Thank you both for your comments on this piece. Smiling dark eyes are beguiling.

Appreciate you hitting the like too.

Abdul

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Tom

Wed 10th Jun 2020 21:55

I love this one Abdul. A gentle warning. Great stuff.

Philipos

Wed 10th Jun 2020 21:04

I think I know who you are talking about, or someone so like her. Enjoyed. P ?

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