Pete Crompton

Fri 29th May 2009 22:59

LoVe ThIs YoU aNd Me BuSiNeSs

great double wammy.
great summer scorcher.


blinding blowtorch = thumbs up
skin and the salt of you = thumbs up

super work.

Im a fan of this (not sure insert poetic term here) this....er " the xyz of me" I too have used similar so this poem or these poems ring a bell for me.

they err ring the bell of me.

"slide down the leg of me"
"dredge the dregs of me"
"sledge the sludge of me"

scmashin IsObEla
im always looking forward to reading your poems, im poppin ya on my fan list

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Isobel

Fri 29th May 2009 22:17

Thanks for your comment Andy - I am always dead nervous putting up a new one - no I haven't performed it - it is hot off the press. Not sure if you ever read my Mixer Tap Madness one - it is several blogs ago but it was inspired by your 3x short poems and seemed to get good comments - your name came up a lot! Cheers for reading. Isobel x

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Andy N

Fri 29th May 2009 22:11

good stuff, Steve.. I thought it was quite subtle when you read it out the other day... I must admit it is even more subtle on page.

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Andy N

Fri 29th May 2009 22:03

Interesting stuff, Isobel.. Would be interested learning more about this as I think you really have something there.. Have you performed this yet?

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Andy N

Fri 29th May 2009 21:55

Love the ending in particular, Cynthia.. Good to see both you and your other half at W.O.L. Sale on Tuesday.. I still can't believe you read out the poem you did... And people call me a rebel! lol

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Andy N

Fri 29th May 2009 21:52

Nice Dermot.. Enjoyed it at Inn Verse too

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Andy N

Fri 29th May 2009 21:52

Good stuff, Chris. Enjoyed your stuff at W.O.L. in Sale the other week! With the quality you clearly you have in your writing - am generally surprised I hadn't seen you perform before in the 'Manchester Scene' (lol). Are you doing any other readings? You should..

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John Darwin

Fri 29th May 2009 15:52

Great stuff George! I'm sure even better performed live, possibly in South London cheeky chap stylee.Sorry for the regional stereotyping!

cheers
John

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George Stanworth

Fri 29th May 2009 15:08

Hi Tomas, Thanks for your comments. Much appreciated. I love the Haikus. I particularly enjoyed reading Haiku number 12.
Cheers,
George

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darren thomas

Fri 29th May 2009 11:32

"Let me show you how we do it 'The Mancunian Way".

In a word - brilliant.

Great melody - Great lyrics. It's an -'ear-worm'. I'll be singing the chorus to myself all day!

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Fri 29th May 2009 10:24

Your writing is extremely powerful Steve. Thanks for your support on facebook - it may be early days but one day all the worlds I am in will come together :-) thank you

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Fri 29th May 2009 10:03

Winston , I have to say that is the loveliest thing anyone has said to me on here. Thank you . Likhtey raho......keep writing

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Francine

Fri 29th May 2009 03:56

You have a way of expressing yourself with such candor that is so appealing...

Tu sais ce que je pense de toute façon...

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Francine

Fri 29th May 2009 03:44

You definitely make your point in this audio of 'bearded Killers'...
your delivery is full of passion and I can feel the extent of your disgust and anger...

Je partage les mêmes sentiments...

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Isobel

Fri 29th May 2009 01:27

Maybe 10 pints of beer had something to do with the manipulation of your aperture.

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Thu 28th May 2009 23:56

Hello again Winston, thankyou so much for your welcome and chat. Have to admit i was nervous, ridiculous really. Off to beddy- bies now, will read your stuff here tomorrow. Thanks again.
Suzy

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Thu 28th May 2009 22:07

wonderful ;-)

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Noetic-fret!

Thu 28th May 2009 22:03

Easy there Nabila! Nice work chris. I went to a speakeasy at the green room. Cannae afford to get there the now but it was pretty good. One of the glories of manchester still surviving.

Be well

mike

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Noetic-fret!

Thu 28th May 2009 21:59

Streuth man - jam you can blam a curse for verse and worse than that damn a can can sand sand tic tock rythym shock glock n heckler reversed, run a gob shop for assassins. Who who beyond you can pale the helter skelter mission mind not blind by all the politics of this capitalistic world, word, you speak truth man.

*Gone*

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Thu 28th May 2009 21:48

I know al of Dike's work ;) not worry

Your Poem is good - as alwayswas just overwhelmed a little by photo - u know how it is

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Noetic-fret!

Thu 28th May 2009 21:43

Absolutely fan-tastic. Had me giggling and laughing like a bot bot at the terra pixel hot spots in this ever decreasing culture that would claim a yellow van.

Must crack on, got more of your work to listen to that is, just ear and mind candy.

be well blue

Mike

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ChriSJaM

Thu 28th May 2009 20:21

ezaY nabilla just checking that your dont think that the piece is dike tiz me jus thought I would use that lovely photo of him. hope you well

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Thu 28th May 2009 20:09

Do people know who this is? It is Dike Omeje .....this has taken me back years Chris and I'm missing him right now.

Thanks for sharing. God bless his soul

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Thu 28th May 2009 12:33

Oh how clever of you Isobel, love this chucky egg. Suzy

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Thu 28th May 2009 12:08

aah Barrie, thankyou for my little poem, you are so sweet. Still enjoying reading your poetry here, ''Of beds'' and ''No refuge'' are particularly good. Oysters always slide down ones gullet so easily don't you think? Suzy

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Thu 28th May 2009 11:49

Hello Stephen, i'm not sure for the reason, if there needs to be one to comment. I am compelled by the sheer depth of this, almost propelled to read it several times. You leave me mesmerized. Suzy

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Isobel

Thu 28th May 2009 10:41

I like your new structure for the shit fuck wank theme, Winston. But why not just replace the whole thing with just the one word 'shit'. Go back to writing poems like 'Flirting' Sebastian - it was uncontroversial but very beautiful. And can you see what I am doing? Getting dragged into it all over again. Some dogs never learn new tricks! LOL
Isobel x

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winston plowes

Thu 28th May 2009 10:27

Hi stephen - Liked some of your words and ideas here. Welcome to WOL. Winston

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winston plowes

Thu 28th May 2009 10:24

Here are some ideas to show you what I am rabbiting on about! Win


Shit!!
Fuck!!!
Wank!!!!
Fuck!!!
Shit!!


Bastards!
Cunting Punting!
Whoring Scoring!
Bastards!

Shit-Fuck!!
Shit-Fuck!!

AAAAARRRRRRGGGGGH!

That's better.

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winston plowes

Thu 28th May 2009 10:14

Hi Sebastian. I guess I feel it need something else to make it a better more poetic piece. e.g. Rhyming / some cleaver twist / interesting shape on the page.Win

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winston plowes

Thu 28th May 2009 10:01

Hi Isobel.Particularly liked the Winter bites section. Great rhythm to it. Far from Skcollob. win x

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Thu 28th May 2009 09:33

Yeah Graham... because I think about Sir Matt just before a spontanious outburst.

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Isobel

Thu 28th May 2009 08:55

Why don't you type the title in the Blog Title and just copy and paste the poem excluding the title - it would look prettier then.

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Isobel

Thu 28th May 2009 08:51

I interepreted it so differently. The frustration and outrage arising from the fact that there is nothing to watch on the box but football. You're at it again Sebsastian.

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 28th May 2009 06:31

Sir Matt Busby would be proud of you?

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Thu 28th May 2009 01:12

A litany of swear words can be poetic and capture the emotion of the moment, even better than a "normal" poem would.

It is the outburst of anger/dissapointment of a man who really should be more concerned with getting married this summer.

Says it perfectly, I think.

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winston plowes

Thu 28th May 2009 00:45

Graham, true. This is not a poem! Win

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Wed 27th May 2009 23:54

Well Graham, do you like it?

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Wed 27th May 2009 23:29

You are entitled to be utterly wrong, but it IS a poem.
It fully sums up the feelings of a frustrated football supporter, after an inept/heartless display. In fact, you'd struggle to say it any better or with more emotion.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 27th May 2009 23:24

No it isn't. It's a litany of swear words. you would have achieved more doing it in Spanish.

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Wed 27th May 2009 23:15

This IS a real poem

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Wed 27th May 2009 23:09

Hi Stephen

You were very helpful with your comments on the 1947 short story- I have re-drafted and was wondering if you could read and feedback on its development? by email or shall I blog again

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barrie singleton

Wed 27th May 2009 21:03

Thanks Francine. Truth is it takes a lifetime to read the whole manual and learn the controls. Then, just when you think you might make a fist of it, you become a Dalek. (A bit dim, with a silly voice and can't do stairs.)

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Wed 27th May 2009 20:26

I have to say I am very impressed - so well structured and thought out - look forward to hearing one day :-)

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Wed 27th May 2009 20:18

wow Steve!

agree with Bill too

read many times and love the rhythm :-)

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Francine

Wed 27th May 2009 19:36

Your comment about my poetry put a smile on my face...
Oh my! How perceptive you are...

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Francine

Wed 27th May 2009 19:07

Très bien...
First and fourth verses are my fave...
Adventures and dreams...

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Jeff Dawson

Wed 27th May 2009 17:21

Thanx Steve, and thanx again for asking me, I really enjoyed it. It was a great audience and I enjoyed interacting, think that went really well and remembered my words! Appreciate the feedback I got from you, Dom and few others.

It was a great night, well done, thought your compering was excellent too, good timing and poems, cheers see ya soon Jeff

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Wed 27th May 2009 16:04

Yo Barrie you did it!
You blogged! Well done. Good poem. Super rhyme. Suzy.

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Wed 27th May 2009 16:02

Hi Sebastien.
I know the feeling -guilty- all too often !

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