Do.RoThy

Tue 26th Nov 2019 17:21

Yes Robert.....indeed!! You got it right. Thanks ?

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Do.RoThy

Tue 26th Nov 2019 17:19

Love myself sans him
It's not even possible in imagination
I ain't feeling bad to loving him
Cos it's the best thing ever happened to me
The love, trust, honesty and a prayer come true
A friend for life i found in you
A lover right with deep insight
The qualities i seek was within my reach
I fell for you so beautifully
I love this sickness of separation growing in me
This love for you is beautiful even if separation makes me sick
I ain't in the least wanting never to have it experienced
Only wishing for us to be together till eternity

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Hamzah Aslam

Tue 26th Nov 2019 16:48

I felt that ?

You're the navigator of your own heart and soul.

Don't depend on anyone to fill these gaps in you.

Even your own shadow leaves you in darkness..

Love yourself first and foremost my friend ?

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Hamzah Aslam

Tue 26th Nov 2019 15:56

Robert please accept my deepest condolences, it's a painful truth we all have to deal with from time to time.

The important thing is we find joy in the beautiful things we have in life.

Tomorrow is never promised, this post I recalled on my memories of the losses in my life.

Theres many positives and beauty to capture too!

Do.RoThy, thank you for your encouragement. Alot of memories went into it

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Hamzah Aslam

Tue 26th Nov 2019 15:42

Thank you for your kind words, it's encouraging ?

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Do.RoThy

Tue 26th Nov 2019 15:00

Extremely emotional!!! A child's journey to growing up n parents play an important part in their journey in every way. Well written piece!!

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Do.RoThy

Tue 26th Nov 2019 14:56

Yes they are, i don't know what they searching for, highly stupid beings making their own life messy.....hehehe ?

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 26th Nov 2019 13:35

I recall that it was WSC who remarked that democracy wasn't perfect but it was preferable to all the alternatives on offer.
Voting is a personal choice but it should be an informed one as far
as humanly possible. Too many are ignorant of what has gone before and what is faced in the future and both need proper consideration above and beyond just the "I like him/her" term of
reference. Politics is no game for saints and those with one foot
in the gutter and the awareness of how life is and can be are likely to be of
more use to improving its reality than the high-minded dreamers and despisers.

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Do.RoThy

Tue 26th Nov 2019 13:27

Hey Donny dear, i missed those lines untill you highlighted them in your comment....i second Don's views.....nice n deep words!!!?

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Do.RoThy

Tue 26th Nov 2019 13:24

Hey Don, freedom of speech well expressed in your words....acceptance and invitation both!! Sometimes your kiddish rhymes have lots of truth n holds gravity....keep writing!!! Rinky, sat with Dinky and both did Dink.....hehehe ?

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Do.RoThy

Tue 26th Nov 2019 13:21

A beacon of glad tidings!!! ?

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 26th Nov 2019 13:14

A sorry state of affairs indeed. "Randy Andy", to borrow his youthful
nickname, has shown poor judgement in his choice of friends and
his hubris has not helped. I recall his arrogance when challenged
by security in the gardens of Buck House - instead of smiling
graciously and accepting their apparent lack of recognition with a
little grace and good humour. The institution of The Crown always
exceeds the "value" of its individual members and he would have
been wise to have kept that in mind. My sympathy is for his mother -
a devoted public servant who has seen her offspring let her down
more than once when it mattered - and damaged all that she has
served so well in her own lifetime.

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Do.RoThy

Tue 26th Nov 2019 13:12

Beautiful poem!! Inspiring, thought provoking and soul searching!!! ?

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Do.RoThy

Tue 26th Nov 2019 13:07

May their pious souls rest in peace!!

A heart wrenching write. Lots of tears in the words....lots of brave hearts in the words and lots of sorrows now fossilized in yourr poem for generations to read after we are gone.

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Do.RoThy

Tue 26th Nov 2019 13:03

Hi Ruth, No real letters in paper, and the photographs from moonshine and sunshine are reflections of him sent to me, no real pictures in paper, just a poem of my imagination..... I read the words, feelings and emotions in the beautiful words sent as letters in the form of poems and prose and see the pictures as in memory I hold of him in my soul and heart.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 26th Nov 2019 12:16

Fuel for thought Ruth
I might order myself a trip into space - - -
now to change my will!

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Nigel Astell

Tue 26th Nov 2019 12:06

Into One

A spark of inspiration
a draw of breath
a timeless reminder of intense imagery
taking both artist and poet
into the works of one.

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Tom Doolan

Tue 26th Nov 2019 11:56

Greetings Ruth - Whatever the queen watches - She will not be amused lol.
sláinte - Tom ?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 26th Nov 2019 11:29

Good pre Christmas poem Tom. I wonder what does the Queen watch at 3pm on Christmas Day...herself maybe?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 26th Nov 2019 11:26

There's a fuelled up rocket ready to beam us up to the great beyond! Not yet though. Maybe there's a new business idea in this... Futuristic Funerals Inc ?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 26th Nov 2019 11:22

Special Thanks to Po, Do, Don, Vautaw and Nigel for reading.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 26th Nov 2019 11:20

Ooh Don sounds like you are verbally vomiting here!

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 26th Nov 2019 11:16

Real letters are still such a fantastic thing definitely Do.Ro.Thy

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 26th Nov 2019 10:44

Thanks Po, I really wasn't sure about this one. So thank you.

J. x

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Hugh

Tue 26th Nov 2019 08:10

Brilliantly written,a joy to read.I was there listening to the howl of the wolf under the light of the moon.Unique.

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 26th Nov 2019 06:52

Thank you, Po. If you get a chance go to see the film 'Sorry We Missed You' by Ken Loach. Loved it.

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Don Matthews

Tue 26th Nov 2019 06:06

I've just read this again Cait and recognised the importance of what you say.....

'the way I value myself should not be dependent on whether or not you love me'

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Cait Abbott

Tue 26th Nov 2019 03:06

Thank you Don (your comments always keep me going no matter how simple) and thank you Hamzah☺️

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Do.RoThy

Tue 26th Nov 2019 00:23

Beautiful poem!! ?

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Hamzah Aslam

Mon 25th Nov 2019 23:33

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Rick Varden

Mon 25th Nov 2019 23:13

Cheers for your comments. I recorded the tracks in a really great studio with an experienced sound technician. The whole 21 track album ‘is there a poet in the house? Is on Sound Cloud. ?

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afishamongmany

Mon 25th Nov 2019 22:37

Hi Cynthia - an interesting read.
An understanding of 'understanding' - may it not also come from above, that is from that - under - which we stand? And if it comes from that - on- which we stand does all ground give right understanding? Of course we all understand that we are not talking here about geology or meteorology. ?
Go well
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John Marks

Mon 25th Nov 2019 22:11

You are a musician and music is the highest of the arts, because the most abstract. It is the musicality of poetry - its rhythm, metre, assonance, alliteration, rhyme, half-rhyme - which allows it its gravitas. Words put to measure. I admire your dogged optimism Fish. But I do not wish to share it. We certainly do NOT live in the best of all possible worlds. And, yes, Ray, it was brave of the Stones to use a minor key, but it works, gloriously. Incidentally, the title is taken from Plath's poem 'Tulips' about her experience in hospital after an unsuccessful suicide attempt:

My body is a pebble to them, they tend it as water
Tends to the pebbles it must run over, smoothing them gently.
They bring me numbness in their bright needles, they bring me sleep.
Now I have lost myself I am sick of baggage——
My patent leather overnight case like a black pillbox,
My husband and child smiling out of the family photo;
Their smiles catch onto my skin, little smiling hooks.

John

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afishamongmany

Mon 25th Nov 2019 21:50

Thank you Po. I'm glad your getting something from my scribbling and keyboard tapping.
Not sure about your Baal Peor reference unless it's refering to the fact that we reap what we sow? But even with that there is grace, grace, amazing grace.
Go well
Yea keep our feet on the ground and our head in the clouds (depending of course on which clouds we mean).
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Don Matthews

Mon 25th Nov 2019 21:46

This is good Cait.....

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afishamongmany

Mon 25th Nov 2019 21:33

Po, Don, apropos "ryhme" I repost this from a few months back:-

Zebedi nonchalantly sipping his tea said rhyme can be sublime but sometime a chime a chant a twisting slant that ignores you can't can be the plant that bears the rarest fragrantest flower that rears the shining climbing tower that awakens sleeping weeping cowards to see and say hooray hooray today came some really cool communication surprising inspiration such a sweet and strange sensation and please let's not forget in the creative sweat every asset by which the poet is beset alliteration personification metronomic syncopation and oh yes punctuation said Zebedi pouring another mug of best builders tea.
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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th Nov 2019 21:05

I see this three letter ending so often now that it begs for comment.
Invariably, it is used to announce an accusation of discrimination from a variety of origins according to its perceived advantage to the user who takes refuge in righteous indignation at the attitudes and/or
behaviour of others.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th Nov 2019 20:56

The more usual term is probably "knocking shop". As for brothels
and sin, let's not forget that a certain Mary Magdalen was not
perfect according to religious teachings but JC had time for her...
sending us back to that admonishment "Let him (her) who is without sin cast the first stone."

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th Nov 2019 20:51

Simple yet profound - the one true "constant" in life when love takes
various forms with its demands - and sex is often part of those
forms and demands.

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 25th Nov 2019 18:56

Thank you Brian and Dorothy

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A Peterson

Mon 25th Nov 2019 17:58

Wow. You are a poet, an astrophysicist, and a chemist. How do you find the time haha

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Mon 25th Nov 2019 17:25

Good quality rhyming Trev!

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Raj Ferds

Mon 25th Nov 2019 17:06

Thank you Po. Om Shanti.
Always good to connect with people like yourself.
You find your tribe with your vibe, is what I chant now.

Stay tuned.
Raj

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Nigel Astell

Mon 25th Nov 2019 16:21

Explaining a topic
without revealing too much
poetry can do
without causing any offence
to those involved.

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d.knape

Mon 25th Nov 2019 13:05

true story. well, kinda.

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Don Matthews

Mon 25th Nov 2019 12:24

The poem 'Knock Knock' appeared on WOL ages ago and when I Iooked closer discovered it referred to Knock House in Knock village. I couldn't find the poem or writer. May have left?....

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Do.RoThy

Mon 25th Nov 2019 12:18

I believe in the existence of God...so for me there's logical acceptance.

Thnx for elaborating it. N yes.....welcome bk!!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 25th Nov 2019 12:16

This just 'came' from the flash thought that 'understand' is virtually 'under where you stand'. Out of the blue it was. So obvious! But not considered before. And you know me! 'Well, isn't that interesting!' And I was OFF.

You WOLers put up with a lot.

Bless you, Dorothy.

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Do.RoThy

Mon 25th Nov 2019 12:16

The picture says it all....so u clicked it??? Where on earth u got knocked out......hehehe ?

Seriously you get such things before us which we really never knew....not a topic where i mus comment...cos it's a boyzone...still...thnx for telling...for v mus know.?

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keith jeffries

Mon 25th Nov 2019 12:15

Jason,

What a poem! You have found your precious jewel.

Thanks
Keith

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