Do.RoThy
Tue 19th Nov 2019 10:56
Hahaha!!! I'm happy you got this one on time before new one was posted, and last one gone.
My sleep went moon walking
Making me twist and turn
The night was extremely long
As my sleep went walking for too long
I hope tonight it shall return
And be right in mind where exactly it's suppose to be
I know want Donny means
By saying this poem sounds like his
I feel honoured to join you dear
Now book a bed in ur rehab
Cos i think i too have a double gear
Hahaha!!!!! ?
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Do.RoThy
Tue 19th Nov 2019 10:43
Much to learn from you.....m following your poems?
Comment is about KAMCHATKA TRAILS (blog)
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Do.RoThy
Tue 19th Nov 2019 10:41
Oh Donny dear
Thalia has been away from you??
What just went wrong
Between you two
Love n fun was your type
Bore, doomy, gloomy isn't fine
Retreat to what your're like
Cos that gives woler's a high
Gloomy doomy saddy write!! But dilly dear i do like?
Comment is about I Like My Gloomy Doomy (blog)
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Nothing wrong with being a miserable old git, Don.
Comment is about I Like My Gloomy Doomy (blog)
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I’ve got to that stage of life, Hugh, when I enjoy a good funeral much more than a wedding.
Comment is about Weddings and funerals (blog)
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Like-Minders Society Muse Thalia says go Don....
Lucy L (Head of Publicity) says ditto (downing her drink of choice - double whisky)....
?
Comment is about I Like My Gloomy Doomy (blog)
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This hearse I see is modified
All fired up for a race
Debase a hearse like this friend Nige
To me's a right disgrace
vroom vroom
?
Comment is about We Will All Get There in the End (blog)
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Clever. As usual Nigel....
Comment is about We Will All Get There in the End (blog)
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hi Graham
They're mostly split because, tho similarly themed, they came from two seperate trains of thought.
So I guess they're split for fun.
Thank you for reading : )
Comment is about bent stalks I (11/16/2019) (blog)
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Hannah,
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment
Jeannot
Comment is about Selves (blog)
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Carpe Diem! The song would have fitted in with the Mark Knopfler
music for the film "Local Hero".
Comment is about Good Days (blog)
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It seems unlikely that history records anything remotely similar
anywhere to this extraordinary set of coincidences. For once, the
word "uncanny" seems inadequate.
Comment is about TWO PRESIDENTS (blog)
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This is not like you Do. Different, and so good. It's very much after my own way of thinking...if you know what I mean
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<Deleted User> (18118)
Mon 18th Nov 2019 21:20
Mon 18th Nov 2019 21:04
Criticism for his interview Prince Andrew has met,
It was almost impossible for him to sweat.
Pizza Express in Woking has achieved Royal fame,
Used as an alibi to protect his good name.
An adviser had told him to remain in the shade,
To partake in the interview an error he has made.
Plaudits to rescue his reputation he did not receive,
In the interview he came over as being naive.
To persecute him too much is really mean,
The son of our Royal highness the Queen.
We all have family members who make a mistake,
The Royals are human like us, with much more at stake.
Comment is about Pizza (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18118)
Mon 18th Nov 2019 20:59
Very strong, moving.
Hannah
Comment is about The Girl I Used To Be (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18118)
Mon 18th Nov 2019 20:57
<Deleted User> (18118)
Mon 18th Nov 2019 20:57
Being alone in the crowd seems to be the loneliest of all.
Hannah
Comment is about Selves (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 18th Nov 2019 20:48
Your past is vital in shaping your future.
Comment is about The Girl I Used To Be (blog)
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I agree Tom! We often take life for granted. Embracing the moment keeps the magic alive! ?
Comment is about Good Days (blog)
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Thank you Dorothy! I adore that song too, anything by Van Morrison!
Comment is about Good Days (blog)
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I never knew this, MC. Remarkable.
Comment is about TWO PRESIDENTS (blog)
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A steady 56, Graham. It’s not match day.
Comment is about TWO NATIONS (blog)
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Thanks for your like Do.RoThy
anyone following this hearse - - - keep well back!
Comment is about We Will All Get There in the End (blog)
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Do.RoThy
Mon 18th Nov 2019 15:51
Hey John, thank you so much... I'll make the necessary changes. ?
Comment is about Flight to freedom (blog)
Hi Do.RoThy
Not a comment on the poem itself which seems to be a kind of psychological allegory (?) but I'd suggest you look over this again as there's a typo in line five and in line ten.
I never really understood why some poets begin every new line with a capital letter (but some good ones still do). You've chosen this style and yet consistently written your I's everywhere else in lower case. Can't fathom the thinking behind this.
There are a few little words and repetitions that could be edited out but I do like 'turmoiled balancing'. Poems get better with multiple re-workings and the time to marinate a bit.
Comment is about Flight to freedom (blog)
I like a big pan pizza
sizzling hot with melting cheese
trouble is I order too many - - -
When I phone up they answer
Hi Nigel ten to fifteen minutes
before I can say - - - same again please!
Comment is about Pizza (blog)
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open a drawer
old photographs seen
special memories return.
Comment is about When I remembered (blog)
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Sorry Zach, but I read II before I
It's left me wondering why they are split? I like your expressions in these two pieces 'home cooked hope' clever.
Comment is about bent stalks I (11/16/2019) (blog)
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Thanks Don maybe a couple of spaceships up there as well
Thanks Ruth outside our world stars invite us into theirs
Comment is about Signs that Light up the Star Lit Sky (blog)
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Some lovely words and sentiments in this piece Zach. Really impressed with this.
Comment is about bent stalks II (11/17/2019) (blog)
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Absolutely; recognise the good days and enjoy every moment.
Comment is about Good Days (blog)
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Leave me be in dreamland, Graham. This is too good to wake up.
Comment is about TWO NATIONS (blog)
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Mon 18th Nov 2019 12:58
catch & kill
until there is nothing left
to kill.
Comment is about Behold The Whale (blog)
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Do.RoThy
Mon 18th Nov 2019 12:57
Such a beautiful prayer n warm wishes.....thank you for this write!! ? lovely song to complement your lovely poem.
Comment is about Good Days (blog)
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Do.RoThy
Mon 18th Nov 2019 12:53
I'm coming......to hv ☕ coffee today.....cappuccino will do me fine....i don't hv any muse accompanying so we can do some musing together...hehe!!! Coffee with Don.
Comment is about Cafe (blog)
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Fun! We could do with more of it in this life.
Comment is about Tired of living in a tyre (blog)
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Thanks Kate❣️ I appreciate you reading and taking time to leave feedback. ?
Comment is about Good Days (blog)
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John John John! It’s all a bad dream! Wake up!
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<Deleted User> (22444)
Mon 18th Nov 2019 10:11
Thankyou Kate. I wanted to try something different, with a minimum of words which gave a sense of feeling.
Comment is about Cafe (blog)
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Always thinking, me, Kate. Always thinking.
Comment is about TWO NATIONS (blog)
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<Deleted User> (22444)
Mon 18th Nov 2019 09:39
Horses are the most wonderful creatures. Thanks for reminding me and very sorry for your loss.
Comment is about My Horse (blog)
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raypool
Tue 19th Nov 2019 13:27
Beautifully understated and meandering listlessly along taking our thoughts for the ride Tom. We are privileged to be privy to what youre wanting to impart and it almost strays into fantasy. A poetic journey with a strong image towards the end.
Ray
Comment is about The African Queen (blog)
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