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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 26th Nov 2019 11:20

Ooh Don sounds like you are verbally vomiting here!

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 26th Nov 2019 11:16

Real letters are still such a fantastic thing definitely Do.Ro.Thy

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 26th Nov 2019 10:44

Thanks Po, I really wasn't sure about this one. So thank you.

J. x

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Hugh

Tue 26th Nov 2019 08:10

Brilliantly written,a joy to read.I was there listening to the howl of the wolf under the light of the moon.Unique.

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 26th Nov 2019 06:52

Thank you, Po. If you get a chance go to see the film 'Sorry We Missed You' by Ken Loach. Loved it.

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Don Matthews

Tue 26th Nov 2019 06:06

I've just read this again Cait and recognised the importance of what you say.....

'the way I value myself should not be dependent on whether or not you love me'

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Cait Abbott

Tue 26th Nov 2019 03:06

Thank you Don (your comments always keep me going no matter how simple) and thank you Hamzah☺️

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Do.RoThy

Tue 26th Nov 2019 00:23

Beautiful poem!! ?

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Hamzah Aslam

Mon 25th Nov 2019 23:33

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Rick Varden

Mon 25th Nov 2019 23:13

Cheers for your comments. I recorded the tracks in a really great studio with an experienced sound technician. The whole 21 track album ‘is there a poet in the house? Is on Sound Cloud. ?

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afishamongmany

Mon 25th Nov 2019 22:37

Hi Cynthia - an interesting read.
An understanding of 'understanding' - may it not also come from above, that is from that - under - which we stand? And if it comes from that - on- which we stand does all ground give right understanding? Of course we all understand that we are not talking here about geology or meteorology. ?
Go well
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John Marks

Mon 25th Nov 2019 22:11

You are a musician and music is the highest of the arts, because the most abstract. It is the musicality of poetry - its rhythm, metre, assonance, alliteration, rhyme, half-rhyme - which allows it its gravitas. Words put to measure. I admire your dogged optimism Fish. But I do not wish to share it. We certainly do NOT live in the best of all possible worlds. And, yes, Ray, it was brave of the Stones to use a minor key, but it works, gloriously. Incidentally, the title is taken from Plath's poem 'Tulips' about her experience in hospital after an unsuccessful suicide attempt:

My body is a pebble to them, they tend it as water
Tends to the pebbles it must run over, smoothing them gently.
They bring me numbness in their bright needles, they bring me sleep.
Now I have lost myself I am sick of baggage——
My patent leather overnight case like a black pillbox,
My husband and child smiling out of the family photo;
Their smiles catch onto my skin, little smiling hooks.

John

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afishamongmany

Mon 25th Nov 2019 21:50

Thank you Po. I'm glad your getting something from my scribbling and keyboard tapping.
Not sure about your Baal Peor reference unless it's refering to the fact that we reap what we sow? But even with that there is grace, grace, amazing grace.
Go well
Yea keep our feet on the ground and our head in the clouds (depending of course on which clouds we mean).
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Don Matthews

Mon 25th Nov 2019 21:46

This is good Cait.....

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afishamongmany

Mon 25th Nov 2019 21:33

Po, Don, apropos "ryhme" I repost this from a few months back:-

Zebedi nonchalantly sipping his tea said rhyme can be sublime but sometime a chime a chant a twisting slant that ignores you can't can be the plant that bears the rarest fragrantest flower that rears the shining climbing tower that awakens sleeping weeping cowards to see and say hooray hooray today came some really cool communication surprising inspiration such a sweet and strange sensation and please let's not forget in the creative sweat every asset by which the poet is beset alliteration personification metronomic syncopation and oh yes punctuation said Zebedi pouring another mug of best builders tea.
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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th Nov 2019 21:05

I see this three letter ending so often now that it begs for comment.
Invariably, it is used to announce an accusation of discrimination from a variety of origins according to its perceived advantage to the user who takes refuge in righteous indignation at the attitudes and/or
behaviour of others.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th Nov 2019 20:56

The more usual term is probably "knocking shop". As for brothels
and sin, let's not forget that a certain Mary Magdalen was not
perfect according to religious teachings but JC had time for her...
sending us back to that admonishment "Let him (her) who is without sin cast the first stone."

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th Nov 2019 20:51

Simple yet profound - the one true "constant" in life when love takes
various forms with its demands - and sex is often part of those
forms and demands.

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 25th Nov 2019 18:56

Thank you Brian and Dorothy

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A Peterson

Mon 25th Nov 2019 17:58

Wow. You are a poet, an astrophysicist, and a chemist. How do you find the time haha

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Mon 25th Nov 2019 17:25

Good quality rhyming Trev!

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Raj Ferds

Mon 25th Nov 2019 17:06

Thank you Po. Om Shanti.
Always good to connect with people like yourself.
You find your tribe with your vibe, is what I chant now.

Stay tuned.
Raj

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Nigel Astell

Mon 25th Nov 2019 16:21

Explaining a topic
without revealing too much
poetry can do
without causing any offence
to those involved.

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d.knape

Mon 25th Nov 2019 13:05

true story. well, kinda.

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Don Matthews

Mon 25th Nov 2019 12:24

The poem 'Knock Knock' appeared on WOL ages ago and when I Iooked closer discovered it referred to Knock House in Knock village. I couldn't find the poem or writer. May have left?....

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Do.RoThy

Mon 25th Nov 2019 12:18

I believe in the existence of God...so for me there's logical acceptance.

Thnx for elaborating it. N yes.....welcome bk!!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 25th Nov 2019 12:16

This just 'came' from the flash thought that 'understand' is virtually 'under where you stand'. Out of the blue it was. So obvious! But not considered before. And you know me! 'Well, isn't that interesting!' And I was OFF.

You WOLers put up with a lot.

Bless you, Dorothy.

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Do.RoThy

Mon 25th Nov 2019 12:16

The picture says it all....so u clicked it??? Where on earth u got knocked out......hehehe ?

Seriously you get such things before us which we really never knew....not a topic where i mus comment...cos it's a boyzone...still...thnx for telling...for v mus know.?

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keith jeffries

Mon 25th Nov 2019 12:15

Jason,

What a poem! You have found your precious jewel.

Thanks
Keith

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Do.RoThy

Mon 25th Nov 2019 12:12

Thought provoking write!! ?

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Do.RoThy

Mon 25th Nov 2019 12:10

Beautiful thoughts!! Well described.... Cute connection.... Mighty love together. ?

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Do.RoThy

Mon 25th Nov 2019 12:04

Do u mean Alien's or ghosts?? I'm scared..don't wanna go bk to Jupiter... Sobs!!!

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Don Matthews

Mon 25th Nov 2019 11:50

Do

Janet and I are waiting on Po to enlighten us. I'm sticking to my Manifold in Back but someone whispered it should be Manifold in Black. Typo Do....


Hello. Do? Deep-Space-Centre-Aus just texted me and said it might be connected to some strange science fiction thing. Beats me Do..

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Do.RoThy

Mon 25th Nov 2019 11:09

What are MIB's?? Whose interpretation is more likely??

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Don Matthews

Mon 25th Nov 2019 11:06

Succinct, sardonic, satirical
Superbly sounding bite
Edgar Alan Poe at work
Po you're Poe'ing right

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Hugh

Mon 25th Nov 2019 10:21

The politicians are out there after our vote,
Making lots of promises to keep our country afloat.
But politicians please stop and think ,
Unite, otherwise our country will sink


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Don Matthews

Mon 25th Nov 2019 07:20

I am a little rhymer
A rhymer happy me
What am I gonna rhyme about
Dunno. Wot's on for tea ?

Clap...clap....

Thankyou Po.....

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Don Matthews

Mon 25th Nov 2019 06:14

Clever MC....

I'm disappointed-gruntled
Hopeless as can be
Disaffected disillusioned
Silly ditty me

Disadvantaged-imilar
Hopeless still you see
Disputatious wot's that mean?
Silly ditty me

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Don Matthews

Mon 25th Nov 2019 05:56

blip...blip.....

Po Janet says what's an MIB? It's not in her Earthspeak Dictionary. I would suggest Manifold in Back but knowing Janet she wouldn't know the front from the back of her ship let alone what a manifold was. No Janny I'm talking to Po

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Marie Alyza

Sun 24th Nov 2019 23:53

@afishamongmany & poemagraphic - Thank you so much for your comments! ❤️

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afishamongmany

Sun 24th Nov 2019 22:09

Thanks Po - ah a poem without a rhyme is still a poem for o' that and some 'poems' with a ryhme a line just ain't.
A fish who fishes men- now Po there's an idea for a poem.
Bed time, go well ><>

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afishamongmany

Sun 24th Nov 2019 21:45

Hi Aly - beatifully and bravely writen. Psalm 147 verse 4.
Go well
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afishamongmany

Sun 24th Nov 2019 21:32

Hi dk - a clear, uncomplicated, true, true write. A counter voice to the thinking that people who live the whole of their life in some country backwater are to be distained as having somehow 'missed out'.
Thanks
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afishamongmany

Sun 24th Nov 2019 21:14

John , a fine poetic expression of heartfelt depression.
But no not 'certainly'. Light is always the antidote to darkness.
Look for the dawn
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raypool

Sun 24th Nov 2019 20:51

This is my favourite of all their tracks, John. It inspired me when I was first out there as a musician. It has a feel like a gypsy dance to me being resoundingly in the minor key! This is a poem which stretches the imagination and flirts with a sort of inevitable sense of fear, magnetically attractive. I like the fact you put this innocuous question in there; It gives it a childlike innocence.

I challenge anyone there not to be drawn by this. Am I a rare spirit being attracted to work of talent?

Ray

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afishamongmany

Sun 24th Nov 2019 20:23

Hi Stuart V - heartfelt with rhyming, running, rythm. Yea don't we all wish so much and so many things. But seeing and hoping are mutually exclusive as are wishing and believing.
Go well
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Tommy Carroll

Sun 24th Nov 2019 20:13

p o r t r a i t

by Tommy Carroll
Wednesday 20th November 2019 9:52 pm

Cheers Ray

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afishamongmany

Sun 24th Nov 2019 20:12

Hello A Peterson - A well written, heartfelt prayer letter.
I can tell you that He is found by those who seek Him. It isn't Him who is far away. It is us who are facing the wrong way.
He is only a (humble) prayer away.
Go well
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John Coopey

Sun 24th Nov 2019 19:37

I enjoyed this, Stuart. But be careful what you wish for! (Unless it’s the winner of next year’s Grand National, of course).

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