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Don Matthews

Thu 15th Aug 2019 00:30

I have no children (school age)
They've all packed up (fled/gone)
They couldn't stand their parents
They've gone, fed up, they're done

I whimper whimper (Trevor)
Why did they so us hate?
They didn't even sup with us
Before they shut front gate

I've suddenly seen light (Trevor)
Their noise caused so much grief
They wanted to relieve us of
So left for our relief.....?



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Don Matthews

Thu 15th Aug 2019 00:15

Food lover here responding
Ocean? Whatever's that
I come here for to shovel down
Me food and dat is dat

Ocean lover responding
Belinda, just dipped toes
I felt this feeling way deep down
We both know how it goes

I see this foodie shovelling
He's doing selfie shot
Bloody useless human
Of which I'm glad I'm not......

Thanks for this Belinda. I remember crab delicacies at Fishermans Wharf on visiting San Francisco. But I have an avid dislike of selfies (Shame on you Don. We Aussies invented the term 'selfie'....?)

Comment is about Ocean City Marland (blog)

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John Marks

Wed 14th Aug 2019 23:54

Thanks Devon, Don and Ruth. Knew what I wanted to say - yes, the awkwardness and pretension that characterise so many social (none) interactions at the core of it Ruth - but took a while to get the right words in the right order. Following a traditional form helps in this. John

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Don Matthews

Wed 14th Aug 2019 23:49

Clever. Ruth
Neighbours. Friends
When will it
Ever end?

And where?......

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Don Matthews

Wed 14th Aug 2019 23:44

So good Lisa. And so sad. Far too many people sell their souls for greed....

And you would know I like the rhyming....

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Don Matthews

Wed 14th Aug 2019 23:39

I really like this John......

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Don Matthews

Wed 14th Aug 2019 23:34

Devon

Devon my friend don't touch the stuff
It's full of MSG
Its flavour's upped and hence/therefore
True flavour it not be

I will condone diluted use
E.g. a 'beer 'n clam'
I think it is a Yankee thing
Can't buy it here, oh damn!

Not that I've looked hard....?

Comment is about Poet's Blight (blog)

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Ruth O'Reilly

Wed 14th Aug 2019 23:27

Beautifully encapsulates the awkwardness of interaction!

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Don Matthews

Wed 14th Aug 2019 23:24

Adam

Backpacking did you no good my friend
You're Blighted with rhyme to the seams
'each word stated
with rhyme quickly mated'
See what I mean, what I mean?

Don't start me on New-Age free verse stuff......?

Comment is about Poet's Blight (blog)

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Don Matthews

Wed 14th Aug 2019 23:19

Lisa

My heart goes out to you
I'm feeling bluesy too
Catharsis also plagues me
Toodle-oodle-oo....?

Comment is about Poet's Blight (blog)

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Don Matthews

Wed 14th Aug 2019 23:15

MC

I really need this jab
To stop it getting worse
I think it's branded 'STOPITNOW'
Shit! this is a curse!

grizzle grizzle.....?

Comment is about Poet's Blight (blog)

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Devon Brock

Wed 14th Aug 2019 23:15

John, love how the third stanza supports the premise of the second. Each line both a question and a statement. "Language" to "Languish" to "Anguish" in the final line, a profound syllabic progression.

As always,

D

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Belinda Sue Kiser

Wed 14th Aug 2019 23:11

Stuffed flounder, ahhh stop...Good food, all around there!

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Don Matthews

Wed 14th Aug 2019 23:10

Do.RoThY
Your soliloque
Made perfect sense
To little me...?

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Don Matthews

Wed 14th Aug 2019 23:07

Hey Rose?

What's going on? I'm beginning to suspect this 'prunny rose' problem of yours is causing more trouble than you're letting on. Come on, don't be shy girl. Don't tell me? You're comfortably entrenched at our Poet's Blight Motel rehab establishment but you're out of it. Smashed. Told you to take it easy. Ah well, when you've come out of the haze hit their free phone to WOL and update us.

Your friendly WOLer (in Blight-warning-mode)

Comment is about Poet's Blight (blog)

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Devon Brock

Wed 14th Aug 2019 22:54

Oh, it's the blight, is it?
I thought it was the clamato!
I appears I bought the wrong ointment.

D

Comment is about Poet's Blight (blog)

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Devon Brock

Wed 14th Aug 2019 22:24

Phillips serves a mean Crab Stuffed Flounder topped with blanched almonds and plenty of melted butter for drizzling or dipping!

D

Comment is about Ocean City Marland (blog)

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Adam Rabinowitz

Wed 14th Aug 2019 20:19

Poet's blight?
sounds all right
each word uttered
matched with one muttered
each word stated
with rhyme quickly mated
and while others may hate it
I'll never be sated
and if rehab I need
to stop this rhyming screed
I'll check in soon
and drink in my room
until all rhymes are gone...though it could be worse
if the blight were free verse.

May we all recover. My backpacking trip helped....maybe.

Comment is about Poet's Blight (blog)

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John Coopey

Wed 14th Aug 2019 17:47

The reality for me, MC, is that I can’t tell if they work. You can’t take and not take them as a control measure at the same time. I think I go to the toilet about the same number of times as before I took them but the flow is a bit stronger so I’m stood pointing for less time each time. But whether this would have happened without them... who knows.
The push-me-pull-me technique seems to help too.
And thanks for the “Likes”, Lisa and Ghazala.

Comment is about RITES OF PASSAGE (blog)

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Trevor Alexander

Wed 14th Aug 2019 17:22

Written with deepest sympathy to those 'lucky' people who have young children of school age! ?

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Nigel Astell

Wed 14th Aug 2019 17:20

Thanks Ruth for your two likes on - - -

A Pot of Gold and The Waiting Game

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Nigel Astell

Wed 14th Aug 2019 17:09

Guy- A heart like yours is worth saving

My best suit is still at the dry-cleaners.

Comment is about A Dating Conversation (blog)

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Nigel Astell

Wed 14th Aug 2019 16:52

nebulous and other poems
by Andy Millican

Once turning
first page
each poem
holds you
before moving
onto next.

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Lisa C Bassignani

Wed 14th Aug 2019 16:46

Yes.

I too have the blight.

Hopefully soon things will be right.

And tho its true its not contagious

I am in a definite state of catharsis.

Hope everyone escapes the blues

And reports back soon with happy news.

Comment is about Poet's Blight (blog)

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Nigel Astell

Wed 14th Aug 2019 16:41

All aboard this poetry ship
we have named her Madness
S.O.S e-mails are sent
as you read on
please join us drowning
all lost at sea.

Comment is about August 2019 Collage Poem - 'Washed Out to Sea' (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 14th Aug 2019 15:47

Thank you for the "likes"....one and all.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 14th Aug 2019 15:40

Probably. "Repeat after me"...? ?

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 14th Aug 2019 15:36

When overwhelmed by its sensation...
This insidious interest in verse,
Get a jab from a vacation
To stop it getting worse. ?

Comment is about Poet's Blight (blog)

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Adam Rabinowitz

Wed 14th Aug 2019 14:53

Thanks Keith and Devon. You are too kind ...hope you are having wonderful journeys as well.

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Amanda Steel

Wed 14th Aug 2019 14:43

Haha, that's funny.

Comment is about A Dating Conversation (blog)

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Don Matthews

Wed 14th Aug 2019 12:50

dk you have a problem
(Or else your wife has one)
You gotta sort your differences
And feel you both have won

Now take this lack of hearing
The simple answer's aids
And at your age they should be free
(Unless no Medicaid)

She gives you firm direction
But you turn left not right?
dk you've got a problem
Your neurons are uptight

I feel like I'm a doctor
Working out what's wrong
Using a rhyme prescription
To bounce your life along

Boing boing boing......?

Comment is about Problems (blog)

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Andy N

Wed 14th Aug 2019 12:50

Good to see you on here Ruth.

I'll tell Amanda in a moment (We are both on here) and will be checking out your work later..

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Don Matthews

Wed 14th Aug 2019 12:36

Rose?

Are you holed out in rehab at the Poet's Blight Motel afflicted with 'prunny rose'? (enjoying life there?). Don't be shy.....they provide a free phone to WOL...?

Comment is about Poet's Blight (blog)

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Don Matthews

Wed 14th Aug 2019 12:31

dk

This is a particularly virulent Blight-form I fear which has floored me.
Your alcohol-cure may just do the trick. I think though your w/v either/or prescription may need a little 'upping' ( I think a doctor would say 'increased'). So I'm gonna try a deadly mix of both. 'Twill either knock the little Blighter bang! or knock me ' nōn compos mentis'

If my daily posts dry up for a few days you can assume the latter happened. But, like the little Aussie battler I am, I will arise (struggle up) from the ashes like a phoenix. How's that for crash hot prose?...?

Comment is about Poet's Blight (blog)

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keith jeffries

Wed 14th Aug 2019 12:28

d.k.,

I never realised you were so recalcitrant but such a trait is often found amusing than an irritant. Keep taking out the trash and don´t rock the boat.

Thanks for this

Keith

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Don Matthews

Wed 14th Aug 2019 12:16

I wonder Jason if Rose is suffering 'prunny rose'? She may be too embarrassed to admit the Blight has struck her with a dangerous mutant strain. Knowing Rose she doesn't give a toss what she reveals. We shall all wait with bated breath for her utterance ....?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Wed 14th Aug 2019 11:55

Thank You For Your Kind Comments Ghazala, I'm glad that you liked my poem

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Jason Bayliss

Wed 14th Aug 2019 11:39

Don't worry, not infected with poet blight, although I have got a runny prose!???.

J. x

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Ghazala Lari

Wed 14th Aug 2019 11:11

This is a short but effectively beautiful poem. a poem can convey feelings more than a normal conversation that happens between people.

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Ghazala Lari

Wed 14th Aug 2019 11:09

loneliness kills many more than cancer. although suicide isn't any remedy but a hopeless person doesn't really care. A very sad poem. MAY THE SOUL REST IN PEACE!!

Comment is about A BOTTLE-NECK BLUES (blog)

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Ghazala Lari

Wed 14th Aug 2019 11:06

This is so heart crushing sad provoking Excellent piece. such an honest confession, such deep and genuine sacrifice. true words flowing from deep within.

Comment is about Family Man (blog)

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Ghazala Lari

Wed 14th Aug 2019 11:01

Thank you for a warm welcome Cynthia.?

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Devon Brock

Wed 14th Aug 2019 10:54

Yep, Keith said it all. Thanks for taking us along.

D

Comment is about Olympic Mountains (blog)

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d.knape

Wed 14th Aug 2019 10:32

use alcohol!
whisky or vodka.
your choice!

Comment is about Poet's Blight (blog)

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keith jeffries

Wed 14th Aug 2019 10:04

Adam,

no editing or alterations are necessary. Better left unvarinshed in its natural form.
Keith

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keith jeffries

Wed 14th Aug 2019 10:03

Adam,

A masterpiece of descriptive poetry at its best. I feel as if I have been taken on a journey and left in awe by the experience.

Thank you for this
Keith

Comment is about Olympic Mountains (blog)

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Alexandra Parapadakis

Wed 14th Aug 2019 09:03

Ah, I really enjoyed reading these comments. Thank you all!

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John Coopey

Wed 14th Aug 2019 08:33

I was aware of that side effect, MC, but the guff on the box warned me of the possibility of this, which, I’m pretty sure, you have commented on before.

https://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=88532

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Adam Rabinowitz

Wed 14th Aug 2019 06:10

So this is pretty fresh penned from the recent trip. I hope to edit it down...suggestions?

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Raj Ferds

Wed 14th Aug 2019 05:10

I meant Ruth.
Can't wait for the energy of the full moon.

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