A Dating Conversation

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Girl- We're on a date

         You arrived late

          And look at the state 

         Of You


Guy- I'm 20 years older

         I should have told ya

         But you were kinda 

         Sold on

        My Soldier stories

       I know you're going beserk


      Maybe we can still make this work

Girl- What was he thinking?

         My heart's clearly sinking

humourous poetrylove gone wrongpoem. funny

◄ *Tramsendental Love*

Moth in Moonlight ►


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Ruth O'Reilly

Thu 15th Aug 2019 12:40

I recently went to a Comedy Writing Workshop Andy, and it sparked me to try and write something a bit humorous?

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Andy N

Thu 15th Aug 2019 12:27

This made me smile too, Ruth.

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Don Matthews

Thu 15th Aug 2019 04:18

I'm now clearly thinking
Should I be date drinking?
With this guy who's causing
My heart plummet/sinking?.....?

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Nigel Astell

Wed 14th Aug 2019 17:09

Guy- A heart like yours is worth saving

My best suit is still at the dry-cleaners.

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Amanda Steel

Wed 14th Aug 2019 14:43

Haha, that's funny.

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