Deal or No Deal

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Deal or No Deal

Real or UnReal

Not sure 

What to

Feel

Any more

It's like living in a 

Sitcom

Everything's come

Undone

We can 

Never be

'Friends'

With our

Neighbours

Next door

Brexit government Britain

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Don Matthews

Thu 15th Aug 2019 12:59

Tell you what dear Ruthy
A problem I have got
50's pushing it a bit
'Bout 3 a day's my lot

You ask so what's the problem Don?
System lets one a day
Stay upon the blogslide
Post others? Sends away

To profile bank.....
Moral - don't post more than one poem each day
And get frustrated like me....?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Thu 15th Aug 2019 12:42

I bet you end up with over 50 new poems a day Don!

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Don Matthews

Thu 15th Aug 2019 12:35

Short lines
Yes, like
Long poems
Dislike....

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Ruth O'Reilly

Thu 15th Aug 2019 12:34

Thanks for your feedback Andy I appreciate that, this is another one that just came to me quickly when I was watching the news, poetry writing is definitely a mindset, a way of being!

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Andy N

Thu 15th Aug 2019 12:24

like your use of short lines here, Ruth. Works well within the voice of this piece. Good stuff (:

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Don Matthews

Wed 14th Aug 2019 23:49

Clever. Ruth
Neighbours. Friends
When will it
Ever end?

And where?......

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