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jennifer Malden

Thu 12th Aug 2021 17:21

Too true, unfortunately! I want it all, I want it now!

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Thu 12th Aug 2021 17:17

Liked this one! Approve absolutely, forever was never the point!

Jennifer

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Adam Whitworth

Thu 12th Aug 2021 15:07

Hi Tom
Thanks for your comments on "Buzzing Of The Saw"
Glad you like it

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Tom

Thu 12th Aug 2021 11:50

I really like this one Adam. I can see my own thoughts reflected here and the scope is much wider than the subject. Great writing.

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Laura Taylor

Thu 12th Aug 2021 09:24

Hi Greg

Sorry, only just seen your comment re Orison.

Yeh, I did wonder why you hadn't mentioned it - I had the opening and closing poems very much set in my mind for a long time, precisely because they bookend so very well. I had a real little epiphany as I played with that Newton's cradle, not long after my friend's death.

Oh give over, it's not too clever for you - it's easy, really ?

And thank you.

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Laura Taylor

Thu 12th Aug 2021 09:24

Hi Greg

Sorry, only just seen your comment.

Yeh, I did wonder why you hadn't mentioned it - I had the opening and closing poems very much set in my mind for a long time, precisely because they bookend so very well. I had a real little epiphany as I played with that Newton's cradle, not long after my friend's death.

Oh give over, it's not too clever for you - it's easy, really ?

And thank you.

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d.knape

Wed 11th Aug 2021 23:56

What is perceived
is to be believed-
Sometimes a relief
when the sighting is brief.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 11th Aug 2021 17:17

And thankyou to Your Royal Poetess and Crescent Moon.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 11th Aug 2021 17:15

Thanks for your kind comment, Julie. And thanks to Nigel, Keith, Stephen and Holden for the likes.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 11th Aug 2021 15:35

"War is all hell" - General William T. Sherman Union Army USA
Spite - or retribution? Discuss.
Those who unleash the wind reap the whirlwind.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 11th Aug 2021 15:27

Now tis the season
To dispense with reason! ?

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 11th Aug 2021 15:21

Entertaining.
Meanwhile - somewhere out on the rim of reality.......
funny how we can let perception affect that reality..

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julie callaghan

Wed 11th Aug 2021 13:59

Thank you both Stephens for the comments and likes.
Also thanks to Holden and Nigel.

I am getting dizzy already, need to get off the roundabout soon?

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julie callaghan

Wed 11th Aug 2021 13:54

Thanks Stephen, I really like this one.

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Wed 11th Aug 2021 12:52

Cheers KJ
I get your point...
Tommy

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Wed 11th Aug 2021 12:42

Cheers Keith
for your response.
Tommy ??

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Wed 11th Aug 2021 12:39

Such links should be encouraged, advised and funded; Liverpool being the most Bombed city outside of London (East End mostly).
Even my Dad shuck his head at the bombing of Dresden (an act of spite by the English? )

Well done Coventry x
Tommy

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Nigel Astell

Wed 11th Aug 2021 09:48

Words forever timeless
selective poetry read
higher composition scaled
drowning further depths.

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 10th Aug 2021 23:14

I thought it was about the Sunderland game tonight...? Superb piece of writing!

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 10th Aug 2021 23:04

I always try to take the easiest path, Julie, but sometimes there's a big tree or boulder in the way that knocks me clean off course! ?

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 10th Aug 2021 23:01

Oh you can guarantee it my friend, there are those in this world who can't bear the thought that life's got to change or stop. They're like the Black Knight from monty python and the holy grail, arms and legs cut off saying, "Tis but a scratch."?

J. x

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 10th Aug 2021 21:55

A powerful poem, Jason. Surely no sane person can argue with this proposition, although the usual suspects are probably lining up as we speak.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 10th Aug 2021 21:50

I like this, Julie. There is a really good narrative and conclusion. An excellent read.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 10th Aug 2021 19:29

I neglected to mention this poem in my review, Laura, and I really should have done. It's the final poem in your new collection, neatly bookends it with 'Origin' at the beginning, and is a very clever poem - in fact, probably far too clever for a bear of little brain such as I. Excellent work.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 10th Aug 2021 16:55

Yes, I'm not sure which is worse : Twitter or the comment columns of newspapers, featuring contributors such as Braindead Alex 72.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 10th Aug 2021 16:22

The last line is a very apt pay-off. Common courtesy is the
lubricant that oils and eases the daily grind of life.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 10th Aug 2021 16:05

JC - ha...I wasn't born yesterday. In fact i was born a long long
time before yesterday! ?.
I look to the "onward and upward" attitude to refresh the quality
of life but all too often it's "Downwards and backwards" now
and idiots hold forth in insolent and ignorant intolerance.

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julie callaghan

Tue 10th Aug 2021 14:14

Thanks for the kind likes

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John F Keane

Tue 10th Aug 2021 12:03

A poetic Mayor - very cool.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 10th Aug 2021 11:28

I think important football matches have a lasting symbolism, Tim, so no worries about the date!

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Tim Ellis

Tue 10th Aug 2021 11:15

Thanks Greg. It’s taken a month to write it from some notes I scribbled down on Lindisfarne the weekend of the Euro’s final, but the problem with writing about contemporary events is your poem becomes out of date almost immediately, so I thought I’d better post it online somewhere pronto!

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Greg Freeman

Tue 10th Aug 2021 11:07

Tim, this is simply a magnificent, 'state of England' poem. I love it that it's about Lindisfarne, too. So many great lines ... 'I’ve always fumbled over stitching my fealty to / the English flag with that great cross of blood' ... 'hope will hit the bar' ... put together with Larkinesque craft, if I may so. And maybe an echo of Matthew Arnold, too. Thanks so much for sharing it here.

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fitzroy herbert

Mon 9th Aug 2021 23:44

You can't run from Love.
You are Love.?

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 9th Aug 2021 22:53

Thank you for thanking me for liking your last poem...?. Liking your stuff, by the way! ?

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John Coopey

Mon 9th Aug 2021 17:42

I get all my wisdom from Twitter, Facebook, Tim Tok and You Tube, MC.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 9th Aug 2021 15:56

Kate Clanchy...racist...ableist (that's a new one but hey...it all helps the vacuous virtue that is spouted by certain mindsets that brook
no view that, it can be argued, has legitimacy from a personal perspective. Poets are in the business of freedom of thought
and opinion, and if anyone feels uncomfortable about that,
perhaps a different interest/line of work might suit them better?

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Laura Taylor

Mon 9th Aug 2021 15:54

Thanks very much Marsha, I'm really interested in how and why we learn to speak, and the processes involved in that. Add a little poetic licence, and here we are.

Very perceptive of you, your last comment ?

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 9th Aug 2021 15:38

Certainly workmanlike! Reminds me of all those little business
cards from "Joe" or "Dave" that get dropped through the letter box.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 9th Aug 2021 15:17

Hope and despair tend to come in cycles! ?

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keith jeffries

Mon 9th Aug 2021 12:57

I share the sentiment.
Keith

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Rasa Kabaila

Mon 9th Aug 2021 10:06

Thanks Nigel. I have mister google to thank for the lovely image. ? I enjoy sourcing photos and pictures that suit the poem. Wishing you a beautiful day. Thank you for reading my poem. Best wishes, Rasa

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Laura Taylor

Mon 9th Aug 2021 09:51

Hey Stephen

If you've not already got yourself a copy, get in touch and I can send you a signed copy if you fancy ?

And thank you ?

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The Crescent Moon

Mon 9th Aug 2021 06:09

I just took some time to read through your recent efforts and I am just breathtaken. I admire your style to a point where I am almost a but jealous, haha. ?
Keep up the amazing work! ?

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The Crescent Moon

Mon 9th Aug 2021 05:58

Thank you for liking my Defeat poem, your highness ? ?

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The Crescent Moon

Mon 9th Aug 2021 05:57

Hey Holden!
Thank you for reading and liking my last poem! ?

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The Crescent Moon

Mon 9th Aug 2021 05:55

Hey, thank you for reading and liking my last poem!

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Nigel Astell

Mon 9th Aug 2021 00:45

I love the image it goes so well with your poem.

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Marsha

Sun 8th Aug 2021 23:14

Einstein said

"Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited, whereas imagination embraces the entire world, stimulating progress, giving birth to evolution."

I think somewhere in the midst of this poem is the very essence of that statement.

The closing of the poem is defiance incorporated, the line;

'til incantation drains away and starts to dig itself a grave

to me is magnificent, that even in the process of our demise we play an active part until the lights finally extinguish..and even then it really isn't quite over.

So much to like here, imparted in a tone which suggests a poet who has matured via a vigorous process of lived experience.

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John Coopey

Sun 8th Aug 2021 18:43

Yes, that was the case when we lived near Selby, Stephen; the last one was about 5pm. We did however manage to roll up two inconveniences into parallel. The road was closed for 18 months to make repairs to flood damage, so all buses stopped coming through our village. But in any event Covid meant I wouldn’t have wanted to get on one anyway.
And thanks for the Like, Stephen A and Pete.

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