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Orison

 

Three days later,

we bought a Newton's cradle.

Put it on the table, and heartsick,

tried to click click click our way out of it.                 

But there's six strings missing,

a great big grin,

and a legendary faux fur coat.

 

There are two types of energy:

potential and kinetic.

One is energetic, inhabiting space.

One anticipates

velocity, force.

It cannot be destroyed.

Waits in the wings,

electricity intact,

and it lives when we sing and remember.

 

Three days later,

we bought a Newton's cradle.

Put it on the table, and heartsick,

tried to click click click our way out of it.      

Then collision click clacked, slowed to a tick,

to a whisper, to collective,

from kinetic to potential.

 

It's said that friction robs the system of its energy

but really, the universe desires to commune.

 

◄ Origin

Hyperbolics ►

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Tommy Carroll

Sun 15th Aug 2021 10:25

...and so it goes
?

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Laura Taylor

Thu 12th Aug 2021 09:24

Hi Greg

Sorry, only just seen your comment.

Yeh, I did wonder why you hadn't mentioned it - I had the opening and closing poems very much set in my mind for a long time, precisely because they bookend so very well. I had a real little epiphany as I played with that Newton's cradle, not long after my friend's death.

Oh give over, it's not too clever for you - it's easy, really ?

And thank you.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 10th Aug 2021 19:29

I neglected to mention this poem in my review, Laura, and I really should have done. It's the final poem in your new collection, neatly bookends it with 'Origin' at the beginning, and is a very clever poem - in fact, probably far too clever for a bear of little brain such as I. Excellent work.

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