Twelve poets for the August upload (30 poems) ... two dozen for September (47 poems)
Comment is about Ready for lift-off! Retired teacher Jonathan Humble launches children’s poetry webzine The Dirigible Balloon (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Thanks for the comment Bria, I will try to catch up on your posts.
Thanks Hugh for the like
Comment is about Plymouth (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Thank you. I really appreciate your feedback. I will continue to write more
Comment is about Behind the Mask (blog)
Original item by Bria Roberson-Gresham
Two points. One small, one big.
"The man" is a stereotyping phrase that risks tarring with the same brush many decent folk and true bastards.
This prejudice, like the sarcastic "boss", isn't always appreciated.
I think a well meaning poem should take care.
But the big point...
Powerful poem. Well done Bria. i look forward to reading more.
(I also agree with Jennifer's positive points)
Comment is about Behind the Mask (blog)
Original item by Bria Roberson-Gresham
But im happy that it resurrected that deeply in your spirit u had to leave a unnecessary remark
Comment is about Behind the Mask (blog)
Original item by Bria Roberson-Gresham
To each its own. Im speaking from the perspective of a black woman who witnessed and whom also was arrested and faced time to crime where she was the victim. I'm speaking on black people. If u want to hear something about ur generational adversities you should write about it
Comment is about Behind the Mask (blog)
Original item by Bria Roberson-Gresham
Agree with John Coopey, Compensation from the Romans for building walls, the Victorian criminal justice system for obliging people to be born in Australia, and the Germans for helping to produce some of their royal UK descendants. What did the Vikings do to us?
Jennifer
Comment is about THAT WAS THEN (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
In past times there were many injustices and harsh punishment for white men also. People were hung for forgery, sent to debtors' prisons, or transported to Australia for even minor theft, and in Victorian days child prostitution was common, and the idea of inclusiveness was not exactly popular. People who couldn't afford medical treatment could die of their illness. That has changed now, so surely there is hope for the future for black people, if they aim for a better one? Low wages unfortunately are common for many people, but not automatic incarceration, surely?
Comment is about Behind the Mask (blog)
Original item by Bria Roberson-Gresham
Liked this one, but agree with Leon, can't see how the first verse fits in with the dominatrix.? Good read as always.
Jennifer
Comment is about Size Six (blog)
Original item by simon lucan
No pecuniary interest, nor celebrity interest, perhaps some intellectual interest? That does add up!
Jennifer
Comment is about Interest (blog)
Original item by d.knape
I love this Hugh. I hope Olly does live forever.
Comment is about Patterdale Worship (blog)
Original item by hugh
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Sat 14th Aug 2021 14:57
Love it Simon, but can't see how verse 1 fits with the rest.
Comment is about Size Six (blog)
Original item by simon lucan
Sat 14th Aug 2021 13:48
crime = punishment.
Innoculated or
Indocrinated?
Comment is about Behind the Mask (blog)
Original item by Bria Roberson-Gresham
I must applaud the way you've packed a lot of great lines together with no padding which is an achievement in itself, but of course this poem is much more than that.
I don't normally go for repetative poems but this is good,
good, good.
Comment is about If We Love It... (blog)
Original item by Tom
This is beautiful Stephanie. S. Thank you. How decadent poetry is and how beautifully you have described that beautiful world of deliciousness that writers truly appreciate! Keep writing and smiling.
Best wishes,
Rasa
Comment is about Homemade Poetry (blog)
Original item by Stephanie S
I hope you enjoy many more happy years together.
Comment is about Patterdale Worship (blog)
Original item by hugh
Really enjoyed this and reminded me of those occasions where my imagination has come unstuck in time. Great writing.
Comment is about POSSESS (blog)
Original item by Sarah Louise mcnee
thank you so much.
Comment is about Already on my page for a quick show case but its called: Hello (blog)
Original item by Bria Roberson-Gresham
Awesome it simple but straight forward ??
Comment is about Already on my page for a quick show case but its called: Hello (blog)
Original item by Bria Roberson-Gresham
i love your poetry, your imagery. Hopefully you have time to read my poem Hello and give your truthful feedback
Comment is about Dead of Night (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
i love this!!! If you have time read mines!!
Comment is about Choosing Sides (blog)
Original item by d.knape
I like it. I like the rhyme scheme. hopefully you have time to give mines a quick view
Comment is about Plymouth (blog)
Original item by julie callaghan
Thank you, Jennifer. I'm so pleased you enjoyed the poem.
And thanks to New Shoes for the like.
Comment is about Dead of Night (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Thanks for the likes John, Greg, Stephen, Jujlie, Holden and Your Royal Poetess.
Blimey, Kevin. I leafletted one road and got nil result. Aren't people strange. It reminds me of the guy calling at a fish shop and asking for videos. We sell fish and chips, said the owner. Ok then, A fish called Wanda....
Thanks Leon for raising that. I charge according to the number of rings....
Quite so Stephen!
Mark, I found it's necessary to do the job myself - I am a masochist.
Ray
Comment is about I'M THE GUY (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Thank you Jennifer, Stephen and Greg for the comments, I really appreciate you reading. A little bit of wisdom I'd pass on if I had children. Handy that you picked out that line Greg, as it helped me spot a typo. ?
Thanks also to Holden & Adam for the likes.
Comment is about Beguiling Sirens (blog)
Original item by Tom
Fri 13th Aug 2021 11:41
the chicken made a getaway
lived to see another day!
?
Comment is about Jennifer Malden (poet profile)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
For some reason, I love these lines ... "the candle you might write by / in some foreign hotel room". And the whole poem, of course. Generous, and inspirational
Comment is about Beguiling Sirens (blog)
Original item by Tom
Thanks Jennifer, and yes, you've hit the nail on the head there, short term thinking by mostly self absorbed, vote chasing politicians, isn't a real solution, but for now, it's all we've got. I suppose we'll just have to hope the world does the right thing, and you never know, we just might.
J. x
Comment is about A New Day (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
Fri 13th Aug 2021 03:36
the chicken made a getaway
lived to see another day!
?
Comment is about For Sale (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Fri 13th Aug 2021 03:35
"better the upper end
than the lower".
-brilliant!! ?
Comment is about Jennifer Malden (poet profile)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
Jodie mcnee
Thu 12th Aug 2021 20:56
Since you started posting on here, or at least, since I've been reading them, you've got better & better ( if you don't mind me saying) & I think this & Throne are two of your best to date. ??
Comment is about POSSESS (blog)
Original item by Sarah Louise mcnee
As usual, Tom, lots to admire in your work: I hope the sirens sing you
songs of salacious shipwreck
and fleshy feasts upon the rocks, stands out in particular for me. Great stuff ?
Comment is about Beguiling Sirens (blog)
Original item by Tom
Better the upper end than the lower!!!
Jennifer
Comment is about Song Unknown (blog)
Original item by d.knape
Otherwise known, in Scotland, anyway, as 'a boiling fowl' which
makes a delicious chicken broth, with or without the rooster.
Jennifer
Comment is about For Sale (blog)
Original item by d.knape
At least he hasn't thrown a dead weight at you yet! Nice one.
Jennifer
Comment is about Spikes (blog)
Original item by simon lucan
They've been telling us for 20 years at least that this was going to happen unless we took steps to avoid it. Politicians only make short term decisions and not unpopular ones which will affect the economy in the near future. They only care about the votes. really well put.
Jennifer
Comment is about A New Day (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
Simply beautiful. To read again and again.
Jennifer
Comment is about Dead of Night (blog)
Original item by Stephen Gospage
Too true, unfortunately! I want it all, I want it now!
Jennifer
Comment is about FREEDOM TODAY (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Liked this one! Approve absolutely, forever was never the point!
Jennifer
Comment is about Beguiling Sirens (blog)
Original item by Tom
Hi Tom
Thanks for your comments on "Buzzing Of The Saw"
Glad you like it
Comment is about Tom (poet profile)
Original item by Tom
I really like this one Adam. I can see my own thoughts reflected here and the scope is much wider than the subject. Great writing.
Comment is about Buzzing Of The Saw (blog)
Original item by Adam Whitworth
Anil Panda
Sun 15th Aug 2021 10:37
You just keep making me relate things in my life through your poems. That means a lot.
Comment is about ICEQUEEN OF BARENTS SEA. (blog)
Original item by MANISHA SAINI