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Beguiling Sirens

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O child, do not hasten to drop anchor
I hope you live so many nights
lost at sea or diving free
loving by the light of the moon
forever was never the point

You must not miss those smiles
as wide as silver sands
And kisses hotly dripping
like the candle you might write by
in some foreign hotel room

If you should meet them
out there on your journey
(and you should, you should…)
I hope the sirens sing you 
songs of salacious shipwreck 
and fleshy feasts upon the rocks

If you should meet them
(and you must, you must)
Take those chances
don’t deny this life
let it be painted
in such vibrant colours

Let them ruin you a while
let them wreck you for a spell
then piece yourself together
and wind up more complete
O, and tell them I say ‘hi’

Go chasing honesty, equality
give and take, live wild, love free
take care and move respectfully
remain open to all that comes your way
forever was never the point

O, they will sing some 
of your best lines into you
There are many poems waiting
You can dine upon those memories
once you’ve crossed the seesaw
of all your time

While you’re young
with no one who depends upon
then have your fun, go chase the sun
Forever was never
the point of life...
 

[2021]

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Tom

Fri 13th Aug 2021 16:10

Thank you Jennifer, Stephen and Greg for the comments, I really appreciate you reading. A little bit of wisdom I'd pass on if I had children. Handy that you picked out that line Greg, as it helped me spot a typo. ?

Thanks also to Holden & Adam for the likes.

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Greg Freeman

Fri 13th Aug 2021 08:25

For some reason, I love these lines ... "the candle you might write by / in some foreign hotel room". And the whole poem, of course. Generous, and inspirational

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 12th Aug 2021 18:41

As usual, Tom, lots to admire in your work: I hope the sirens sing you
songs of salacious shipwreck
and fleshy feasts upon the rocks, stands out in particular for me. Great stuff ?

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jennifer Malden

Thu 12th Aug 2021 17:17

Liked this one! Approve absolutely, forever was never the point!

Jennifer

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