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Dead of Night

 

Come Sun, drop down, defer to light;

Defer to stars, soon twinkling bright,

Defer to the Moon, up above,

Defer to unlit, sombre love.

Defer to silence in the sky,

To floating clouds which tiptoe by,

To owls and their nocturnal shriek.

The dark, by dint of huge physique,

Enjoins the light to stay away

And shields the secret lives at play.

At least till Earth completes its turn

And spots of brightness start to burn,

Revealing, for one briefest breath,

Night’s hidden world before its death.

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Comments

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 16th Aug 2021 17:14

Thank you very much, John.

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John Coopey

Sun 15th Aug 2021 21:28

Lovely imagery, Stephen.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 15th Aug 2021 17:00

Thanks Bria for your very generous comment. I will certainly give you feedback on your poem.

Thanks also to Rudyard for the like.

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Bria Roberson-Gresham

Sat 14th Aug 2021 06:21

i love your poetry, your imagery. Hopefully you have time to read my poem Hello and give your truthful feedback

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 13th Aug 2021 18:11

Thank you, Jennifer. I'm so pleased you enjoyed the poem.
And thanks to New Shoes for the like.

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jennifer Malden

Thu 12th Aug 2021 17:27

Simply beautiful. To read again and again.

Jennifer

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 11th Aug 2021 17:15

Thanks for your kind comment, Julie. And thanks to Nigel, Keith, Stephen and Holden for the likes.

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julie callaghan

Wed 11th Aug 2021 13:54

Thanks Stephen, I really like this one.

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