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M.C. Newberry

Wed 23rd Nov 2022 16:41

Hah...RJ - I'll take that in the spirit in which I hope it is intended.
Inspiration for poems is a fascinating subject in its own right.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 23rd Nov 2022 16:36

To be frank, I;m just surprised to find anyone on this site who's
prepared to put their head above the parapet on this subject.
JC would certainly come to mind though for his willingness to
debate difficult contentious topics. I remain a monarchist when
considering the alternatives. Besides, didn't we try the other
thing and find ourselves with a Lord Protector who aspired to be monarch? The French Revolution found that it faced having
an Emperor after its blood-letting petered out while fighting a
war with a Britain under the indefatigable leadership of Pitt the
Younger and his champion George the Third? Give me the pomp and pageantry and the tourists with their millions in
various currencies. If they know a good thing, why shouldn;t we take the hint and stick with it? God Save The Bling!" 😊

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Wed 23rd Nov 2022 16:14

A lot of beautiful hard work Lisa thank you

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 23rd Nov 2022 16:11

It is forgotten in these days of aiming for the "easy targets" that
the Arab nations were (are?!) front runners in the history of
slavery and the horrendous reports of numbers alleged to have
suffered/died in the work commissioned for this World Cup seems
to tally with that history. How else to explain the inhumane
disregard for the well-being of those employed?

Comment is about The Ghosts of Qatar (blog)

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keith jeffries

Wed 23rd Nov 2022 16:05

Welcome to WOL. I hope you find a home with us to express your poetry.
Keith

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keith jeffries

Wed 23rd Nov 2022 16:03

Mike,
for those acquainted with the gulf states it is a fact that most labourers come from the subcontinent, paid substandard wages and given substandard accommodation by a state which is one of the wealthiest on earth. They are also treated as sub humans because of race or religion. These days of affluence will soon come to an end and the states of that region are in for hard times as they have not invested in a future alternative to oil. Then the boot will be on the other foot.
Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Wed 23rd Nov 2022 15:55

John,
This poem sums up my feelings on the past, present and future. The second stanza says it all. The past is over and done with. To revisit it has little value apart from learning from past mistakes. The future is not ours to know or determine. We are only left with the present moment in which we can make a difference and act positively.
Thank you for this
Keith

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 23rd Nov 2022 12:13

A captivating & thought provoking write.

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 23rd Nov 2022 12:03

Thank you for commenting Helene, Keith, Ulilleam, M.C. John B & John C (yes, the nip test is always a good gauge!). Glad you thought it worthy.
And for all the likes! 🌈🌷🌷

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John Botterill

Wed 23rd Nov 2022 11:48

Thanks Keith. Lovely comment! 👍

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Red Brick Keshner

Wed 23rd Nov 2022 08:38

Thanks John (Botterill) so good of you to point out what its strengths are. 🌷🌷🌷

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Holden Moncrieff

Wed 23rd Nov 2022 04:49

Thank you so much, Keith and John, your comments mean a lot! 😎😊

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John Botterill

Tue 22nd Nov 2022 21:52

Brilliant Holden. Sheer class! 😎

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John Botterill

Tue 22nd Nov 2022 21:48

I love your use of contrasts and your control of language, Frederick. 💪

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John Coopey

Tue 22nd Nov 2022 18:29

Rose,
the wrong doings of Prince A
the Princess Di conspiracy theories
The Crown
all fall within that category “Disinterest” for me.

Comment is about THE RELUCTANT MONARCHIST (blog)

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keith jeffries

Tue 22nd Nov 2022 18:08

The embrace of nature is a true kiss.
Thank you for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Tue 22nd Nov 2022 18:05

A two edged sword indeed.
Thank you for this
Keith

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Tue 22nd Nov 2022 17:46

John, although I love you to bits matey and would never be disrespectful to you, can I ask you if your last line translates as being what you are reluctant to be while stories like the one I read about today that the so-called Andrew shunners Anne and Edward have been supporting Prince Paedo at a shooting party-
( bloody hypocrites! ) are going about?

one of the other news reports that does it for me was the one stating that the time of Dianas death crash in the Parisian underpass all the traffic cameras were switched off

REALLY?

all these kind of iffy stories in my opinion do not rate any kind of trust or respect in ANY of the Buckingham brigade dead or alive-see episodes of The Crown for suspicious details!

any disagreement to my opinion and I'll meet you at-
Bosworth! 😃





Rose 💋

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Pete (edbreathe)

Tue 22nd Nov 2022 17:10

Thanks it seems hope joins it all up , and provides the glue

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 22nd Nov 2022 17:05

KJ has a point. It's easy to go off on a tangent when there are
inter-connecting issues. I will close my own comments by
acknowledging a recognition of climate change as an event
to be confronted - with a wry smile at the name of Al Gore
(best known instigator of the above) in the list of Trustees of the
World Economic Forum. Who'd have thought it? 😏

Comment is about BIG JUD ET AL (blog)

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keith jeffries

Tue 22nd Nov 2022 11:28

This poem sums up well the words "Rest in Peace". When life is over only then do we find orderliness and dignity.
Thank you for this
Keith

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Russell Jacklin

Tue 22nd Nov 2022 10:13

I think you rate a poem on several counts😂😂😂

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 22nd Nov 2022 08:11

Thank you, John. Yes, the sheer number of people sleeping on cold streets is shocking and more must be done.

Graham - You raise an important point. I respect your experience and the work that you do and I am not naive enough to think that all the people on the streets are wonderful human beings. There is no doubt that a certain number, though surely not the vast majority, of rough sleepers (helped by such support from you and other fine people like Rose's Gran and Granddad) feel unable or unwilling to be 'reintegrated' into society. However, many such people could have severe physcological and other problems which may make 'normal' society seem a very forbidding place. I believe that, deep down, very few people would prefer this life, which is degradingly awful and often violent, to living in a flat or a house. It seems to me that we need to give everyone the opportunity to start again. But thanks for raising this point, Graham. It shows that the issue is complicated and that there are no simple answers.

Thanks for your reaction, Rose. Your grandparents do marvellous work.

And thanks to John C for the like.

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John Botterill

Tue 22nd Nov 2022 07:04

Lovely poetry, Stephen. Out of the mouths of babes and suckling, eh? 😂

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John Botterill

Tue 22nd Nov 2022 07:01

Thanks Keith. This is an anthem for our times. This poem rings very true for us all. 👍

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John Botterill

Tue 22nd Nov 2022 06:58

A brilliant, imaginative, perceptive poem, Stephen. And it is true. We do ignore the suffering in our midst! 💪

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John Botterill

Tue 22nd Nov 2022 06:50

Great idea, Helene. I may try that! 😀

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John Coopey

Mon 21st Nov 2022 22:28

I remember showing the kids when they were little how you can tell someone's age by pinching the skin on the back of their hand. Theirs reverted to flat immediately, so fast you couldn't see it. These days mine takes a fortnight to subside!

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John Coopey

Mon 21st Nov 2022 22:07

Any digression of yours is always welcome, Kevin.

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kJ Walker

Mon 21st Nov 2022 21:19

As ever the thread of comments has gone off-track, and now have lost all relevance to the original piece.
This was about the colourful characters that John came into contact with, who happened to work at the coalboard.
Whether or not we should be using fossil fuels is a different matter.
Sorry if I aided the digression.

Comment is about BIG JUD ET AL (blog)

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Mon 21st Nov 2022 18:43

AND! if I may add! judging these people just by looking at them is a MASSIVE NO! NO! in my books

as in-ewww look at that pissed up scruffy b******d!

( me ) oh yes you mean the guy who has ended up having to drink nine litres of cider a day just to keep all the horrific things he's seen out of his memory while serving his country ( that has s**t on him ) in Afghanistan , yes, I CAN see him-can you!?

OBVIOUSLY F*****G NOT!!!!




Rose 💋

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John Coopey

Mon 21st Nov 2022 18:37

So you don’t think it’s worth doing anything then, MC?

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 21st Nov 2022 17:12

I have had some hands-on experience with homeless/rough sleepers via the winter night shelter for a few years here.
It never ceased to amaze me how resolute in sticking to their (chosen) lifestyle some of them were. Most were happy with the ability to get hot food and a shower/toilet etc before almost gladly going out into the new morning following a safe night and a decent breakfast. Few wanted to get back into society as such. A very chastening experience for me.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 21st Nov 2022 16:44

A nice sideways look, Helène. I like the idea of the windows of a house being like eyes.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 21st Nov 2022 16:25

Thank you for your most interesting and heartening comments, Keith, Rose, Helène and Uilleam. Whenever I see someone on the street with their head sticking out of a sleeping bag, I try to remember that this is a real person with their own life and memories.

Rose - your Gran and Granddad are doing a great job and your poem did justice to them. Keith - I understand that there are many ex-servicemen out there, something which should make us ashamed. Uilleam - I agree that things are unlikely to get better, sadly. Compassion is a fine quality, Helène. Thank you.

And thanks to Steve, Stephen, Rudyard, K Lynn and Bethany for supporting this poem.

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John Marks

Mon 21st Nov 2022 16:17

Thank you Stephen, Greg and Uilleam. People are afraid of the dark places. 'It is life and strength, not knowledge and words, that we get in them. Holy wisdom is not clear and thin like water, but thick and dark like blood.' (CS Lewis)


“That was their way, their heathenish hope; deep in their hearts they remembered hell.”
― Seamus Heaney, Beowulf

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 21st Nov 2022 14:52

A charming mix of a life lived and fond cross-generational humour.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 21st Nov 2022 14:45

An intriguing observational foray into the realm of human
behaviour. I was in a local cafe the other day, collecting an online delivery that hadn;t found me at home ( altho' I was indoors
waiting!) and was amused to note how my appearance and
actions attracted the attention of the occupants at the cafe
tables. I wonder if I might rate a poem? 😃

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 21st Nov 2022 14:34

"Aren't doing much..."? I think that's a kind way of putting a policy that sees an opposite behaviour to that which we are told we
must follow. And I would recognise the reality that fossil fuels
cannot be discarded "to order" to our own cost while other
nations are used to supply what we have under our own feet.
I saw a good joke recently of a coal-filled tipper truck setting off
to supply the means to power the electric cars we hear so much
about. It provided its own value: a chuckle and a dose of timely
reality.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 21st Nov 2022 10:45

A lovely thought-short and sweet, as the best ones often are!💐

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 21st Nov 2022 10:43

How true.
The hypocrisy is rampant.....it ought to be noted that many elements of the rabble-rousing homphobic, racist dog-whistling gutter press, who have been most vocal in condemning "sports personalities" on this matter, have themselves been celebrating the securing of "deals" with various Qatari authorities.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 21st Nov 2022 10:36

Never the same pattern

As in life the moment passes

I like that; looking up at the clouds, or into a stream, never seeing exactly the same pattern - and yet there is a pattern?

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 21st Nov 2022 10:30

It's not how we perceive the reality 

It's how we accept it and determine it 

How true.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 21st Nov 2022 10:25

"Those creases are like the circles 

within a wonderful tree!

It shows how long I've been around

How long that I've been me!"

I love that.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 21st Nov 2022 10:24

I've got the window open now, fresh air mixed with the sounds of a manic motorway nearby, while I try to make sense of the online world at my fingertips.

I sometimes have a nap time in the pub-when I've had too much amber nectar!😊

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 21st Nov 2022 10:18

As a true witch should. She's swirling her feet and echoing, echoing a true heart’s beat.
We’re close to the secrets that grow from the roots, 

A shame that the name "witches" should have had such negative connotations throughout history.
Those who are closer to the truth of the natural world, who speak truth to power, are persecuted by the powerful.

Comment is about Towards the year's midnight (blog)

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 20th Nov 2022 23:07

It's not going to get any better; public social services and mental health services are being deliberately destroyed so as to enrich private "entrepreneurs", while charities pick up the pieces-if theyre lucky.

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John Coopey

Sun 20th Nov 2022 21:47

I’m not sure that because some countries such as China aren’t doing much, that all other countries should do nothing. You’re not suggesting that are you, MC?

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Sun 20th Nov 2022 19:10

Again that air of calm you instill into your poems Helene-lovely!

Us Brits call your nap time-cat nap and it is such a nice way of recharging ones batteries. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz followed by-

a nice cup of tea to round it off 👍




Rose 💋

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Sun 20th Nov 2022 18:20

' no more rolling down hills Helene!? ' what!? look, all you need to do is lie down and roll or sledge twelve inches from the bottom in that way you are still keeping up with and retaining your youthful practices albeit in a scaled down way! 😁



Rose 💋

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