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Pete (edbreathe)

Sat 23rd Dec 2023 22:15

Great words Holden as usual

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Pete (edbreathe)

Sat 23rd Dec 2023 22:13

The worst thing about this is calling her Lurpak !!

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Pete (edbreathe)

Sat 23rd Dec 2023 22:03

I love your poems , beautiful and sensual

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Pete (edbreathe)

Sat 23rd Dec 2023 22:01

Great poem Stephen
Succinct

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Tim Higbee

Sat 23rd Dec 2023 21:02

How true you are Grace! Our thoughts are the only true free speech there is. We give our thoughts freedom in the form of words and release them to the world. Regardless of interpretation or longevity, it is the pure essence of your soul that it is scented with. A fragrance willing given, but never taken.

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keith jeffries

Sat 23rd Dec 2023 15:26

It is heart rending to watch television night after night of scenes of destruction and mass slaughter. As poets we mourn the loss of one Gazan poet Rafeet Alareel who wrote his final poem before he and his family were all killed in an air raid. The poem is on Youtube. Dark and sinister forces are at play when all the natiions of the world call for a cease fire and only two nations refuse to act to save countless lives. Greg and Julian, all the poets of WOL may I wish you all a Christmas in which we can find peace in our hearts and pray for peace in Gaza.
Keith

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 23rd Dec 2023 08:35

A thrilling love poem, Clare. Unafraid, unashamed. Very enjoyable.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 23rd Dec 2023 07:45

'The resilience of greed' puts its very well, Joe. We see shamelessness all around and growing inequality. I really appreciated this poem.

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Nigel Astell

Sat 23rd Dec 2023 00:20

Christmas card says
Stay happy today
When thrown away
Forgotten family troubles
Say I have
Not gone anywhere.

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Nigel Astell

Sat 23rd Dec 2023 00:04

A Father who cared so much
Close family ties
Cousins constant playmates
In those early years
Isabella was surrounded by love
Friendships never seemed far away.❤

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Tim Ellis

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 17:06

Thanks for sharing this fine poem, Greg and Julian. Who knows, 2024 may surprise us all and bring peace in some places that really need it. Nothing is impossible if enough people want it!

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Tim Ellis

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 16:58

Congratulations to Jane, and I hope she can make an impact in this role. Poetry today needs to challenge humanity's relentless assault on the environment.

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Tim Ellis

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 16:51

Well deserved...Nick has been a presence on the Leeds poetry scene for longer than I've been writing and performing, which is a very long time!

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Tim Ellis

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 16:47

I've entered this competition many times in previous years and never had any success. Still, if at first you don't succeed...

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dorinda macdowell

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 15:33

Bring Them Home

The year is entering its close
Oh Father hear our prayer for those
Whose children have been ripped away
Who face another broken day

Oh Lord let us not live in shame
Denying righteousness its name

Dorinda
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Shirley Smothers

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 15:29

Coexist
Get along,
Be compassionate
Be strong.

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raypool

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 15:23

Thank you Hugh, Stephen, Stephen and John Gilbert Ellis for reading and enjoying.

Thanks Reggie's Ghost, that fits the picture without a doubt.

I hope you're right Telboy. I think a march of consolidation on Downing Street should sort it out.

Ray

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raypool

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 15:18

A heartfelt poem does express how we rightly feel when confronted with the insanity of the way the world operates at a level beyond the reach of us who do not have power. Those who do have it are seldom in agreement as to how to use it and often as in the case of the Israel Palestine situation a solution could be reached but likely never will be. John Lennon said: Give peace a chance and Imagine ...... and spoke for the common man who will always suffer on the margins. Look what happened to him. I rest my case.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 12:58

This tender and uplifting poem raises our spirits, John. You are the voice of compassion and reason. More power to your poetry!

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 12:45

Thank you for this inspiring message, Greg and Julian. This poem demonstrates the power of poetry: it stops you in your tracks and fills you with excitement (because of the exhilarating writing) and hope (because of its message). By existing, it makes the world a better, more humane place. The more verse like this, the closer peace will come. Our Christmas can be joyful, providing that we never forget what is happening to so many unfortunate people.

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Robert Black

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 11:10

An appropriate and timely message of a type that I wish more would send.
I love the part of Yehuda Amichai's poem where he speaks of 'a little rest for the wounds'. There is so much turmoil in the world right now and without peace that won't change; wounds can't heal. Who amongst us has not made the observation, especially when meeting people of a different culture than our own, that 'under the skin we all want the same things'?
I've no idea what the practical answer is, but maybe just not adding to the pain of others by understanding what peace would actually look like and why cruel words are too often issued from an unrecognised position of selfish privilege is a place to start.

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John Coopey

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 09:05

I’m afraid I pre-date that venerable institution, RAP. And thanks for the Like, Stephen.

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Hugh

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 08:48

Brilliant !!😀

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 01:43

Cheers Mart & Uill
Thanks for your written appreciation.
🙂tc

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John Marks

Fri 22nd Dec 2023 01:09

Thanks Ray. There are non-Zionist Jews and non-Islamist Muslims. But Israel's war on the children makes me ashamed.

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R A Porter

Thu 21st Dec 2023 23:41

Just blame Klute.

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Tom

Thu 21st Dec 2023 23:01

Ah thank you Graham, much appreciated.

Thanks also to Tom, Graham, Steve, Stephen, Stephen and Hugh for the additional likes and reads.

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Isobel

Thu 21st Dec 2023 22:56

Yes - there is so much to be sad about this year - man made sadness, together with all the fall out from natural disasters and the lottery of where you live and how you end up - trapped and with nowhere to go.

It's really hard to comment on, because everything you say sounds trite and you can't offer any solutions - only hand wringing. Putting your thoughts into poetry is one option though - at least it can be haunting and durable and not just throw away feelings.

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John Coopey

Thu 21st Dec 2023 22:06

I doubt it, MC. I am eminently forgettable.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 21st Dec 2023 21:41

You can always think of depriving her of your ongoing company as a long term act of kindness. Perhaps she thinks of you too
occasionally and smiles quietly at the folly her long-ago girlish dreams. It was GB Shaw, I recall, who observed that "Youth
is wasted on the young". But memory is provided as the
price we pay for our often bad behaviour when young.😇

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 21st Dec 2023 21:32

There are times when situations in certain parts of the world can give rise to feelings of "For God's sake, get a grip and get
it done!".
As for "Peace", you have to be prepared to mediate, be moderate and accommodating even if it means concessions.
It has taken some peoples centuries to achieve some sort of sensible live and let live arrangement with their immediate neighbours. The UK is one example albeit that there are, even
now, those who will never be satisfied.. No names, no pack drill.
The greater tragedy is that in a global world, the rest of humanity are remorselessly sucked into the fray c/o endless
24/7 media activity and "righteous posturing".
The candle of Peace flickers dangerously low across this old Earth when we are treated as slightly removed participants,
with all the emotive baggage that such a position seeks to
impose.
We could do with "cooler heads" for a start in you know where!
(Take your pick!"!!).

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John Coopey

Thu 21st Dec 2023 20:26

Thankyou MC. Indeed Kevin. I await to see if I become a victim of cancel culture in January.

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R A Porter

Thu 21st Dec 2023 17:47

Thank you Stephen and Carlton, I was thinking about her while out on a run in the woods this morning. She loved the outdoors & was really in her element in the garden - her husband is not a gardener, so he’s going to need advice, she didn’t even let him mow the grass, but that’s probably a subject for another poem…!

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raypool

Thu 21st Dec 2023 16:50

Your finger on the pulse of what survives of the dignity of people sadly misaligned with the spirit of war and it's inflexibility bringing pain and shame on those it is levelled against. Politics is a breath or a heartbeat away at all times.....

Ray

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David RL Moore

Thu 21st Dec 2023 15:29

A wonderful poem celebrating a life well lived.

With condolences and thanks.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 21st Dec 2023 13:47

During my many years as custody officer in very busy West
End police stations here in London, I met my share of those
with varying degrees of mental problems. One encounter that
I especially recall was with a man waiting for an escort back
to a well known (as was) mental hospital on the outskirts
of the metropolis. Our conversation was, to say the least,
interesting; often convoluted - and bird-like in its speedy unexpected shifts, but I managed to adapt and keep up as we
chatted. My most rewarding moment came when the escort
duly arrived and their client stood up and paid me the unexpected compliment of how much he had enjoyed our
conversation. not least since it with someone from my particular profession. It was no surprise to read years later
that police officers had acquired a reputation for dealing
very competently with the mentally challenged. It came
with the job 24/7 and we had acquired under-appreciated talents in various directions!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 21st Dec 2023 13:32

A timely reminder of nature's irrepressible cycle, helped by a little
human activity when the situation arises.

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 21st Dec 2023 13:26

Ooer...kids love to be frightened, But spare us older folk please!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 21st Dec 2023 13:12

As someone who enjoys prunes with my muesli, I also enjoyed
these lines! Happily, I do not suffer the effects alluded to here.

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kJ Walker

Thu 21st Dec 2023 11:22

Of only you'd done this version in Wakey they might let you back in now.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 21st Dec 2023 07:32

A wonderful and heartfelt tribute, RA. So sad that this happened so close to Christmas.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 21st Dec 2023 07:24

Indeed, Stephen. Probably a forlorn plea. But the taking of innocent hostages is never justified and their safety it is the responsibility of the hostage-takers.

And thanks to Nigel, Tom, Hugh, Holden, Manish and Tim for liking this one.

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Clarand

Thu 21st Dec 2023 04:34

It makes me reminds to https://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=46516 https://uno-online.io where poets can get new chances. I'm really impressed.

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Sunshine

Thu 21st Dec 2023 04:32

Indeed Nigel. Thanks🌷

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Sunshine

Thu 21st Dec 2023 04:32

Thank you Nigel 🌷

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 20th Dec 2023 22:58

We can only hope, Stephen! Though, goodwill seems in short supply

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R A Porter

Wed 20th Dec 2023 22:06

Thanks John, Carole was indeed a character. Born & brought up in Belfast, like my mum & my wife - those Ulsterwomen are made of strong stuff - & very funny!

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Telboy

Wed 20th Dec 2023 18:37

Hopefully the Emperor Hadrian's solution to hold back the Scots won't by adopted by Rishi Sunak in his quest to Stop The Boats!

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John Coopey

Wed 20th Dec 2023 17:54

She sounds a character, RAP.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 20th Dec 2023 17:20

another evening disfigured
by the spilled white paint of ignorance

Words you wish you’d written yourself. Sad but very relevant Tom.
Well done

G

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