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Surf...

The surf gladly births

foolhardy Aphrodite, 

to be dressed 

in all the superlatives

of idolatry; yet

the same surf

swiftly buries Aegeus, 

to be forsaken

like a postscript 

within the waves 

that he names;

an elemental nascence

and death's dreaded cadence,

a dichotomy of the sea,

bathing the essence

of myth after myth...

◄ Ramshackle

Squanderers... ►

Comments

Holden Moncrieff

Wed 23rd Nov 2022 04:49

Thank you so much, Keith and John, your comments mean a lot! 😎😊

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John Botterill

Tue 22nd Nov 2022 21:52

Brilliant Holden. Sheer class! 😎

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keith jeffries

Tue 22nd Nov 2022 18:05

A two edged sword indeed.
Thank you for this
Keith

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