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Stephen Gospage

Thu 17th Nov 2022 21:37

I don't want to give up hoping, Pete. Good writing.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 17th Nov 2022 21:23

There's a sense of repose and a calm finality here, John. It is nice to know that peace will come to us all.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 17th Nov 2022 21:15

Many thanks, KJ. The whole business is so sad, so disgusting.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 17th Nov 2022 21:12

Thank you for your comments, Graham and KJ. I must admit that I was worried when I heard about this, although I imagine that people in Ukraine (and now Eastern Poland) have a right to be far more worried every day.
In the end, it has been handled calmly and sensibly. But, as you say, such mishaps could lead to something terrible. Yes, grim days.

And my thanks to Tom, Stephen, Bethany and Helène for liking this poem.

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Jason Phillips

Thu 17th Nov 2022 19:57

We sat around a fire of already scorched wood

Only faces were visible in the firelight

The stillness embued sleep

Keith, I've always loved reading your poetry. These three lines hit me and they hit me hard. They remind me of the time I spent in the mountains, as a child. They remind me of the pictures I've seen time and time again of the familial fun we used to have. Great memories hopefully reimagined through the eyes of my child(ren) someday.

Thank you Keith
Jason

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John Marks

Thu 17th Nov 2022 19:38

Many people arrogantly say that they believe in God (theism) or don't believe in God (atheism). What is required is not belief but faith. Even if the whole world believes one thing, one person may have faith in the exact opposite.

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John Botterill

Thu 17th Nov 2022 19:21

Another fine poem, Frederick. 😎

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John Botterill

Thu 17th Nov 2022 19:18

How very true. Some people are averse to being helped. Fine poem, Helene

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John Botterill

Thu 17th Nov 2022 19:16

Thanks for the likes Tom, KJ and Helene 😀

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Tom

Thu 17th Nov 2022 19:08

Thank you Holden, really pleased you felt that. 😀

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John Marks

Thu 17th Nov 2022 17:35

As ever, thank you dear Keith, and also thank you Bethany, Stephen, John & Hélène.

“Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it.” Jalāl al-Dīn Rūmī

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Thu 17th Nov 2022 16:01

yikes! nearly forgot to thank Frederick, Adam, KJ and Stephen so sorry gents and thank you all.

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Thu 17th Nov 2022 15:53

oh bugger! I was going to add a line and edit another as in-

Umbrellas become parasolesque best companions
and
Weather reports become stuck records
maybe do it later.

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Thu 17th Nov 2022 15:32

😁 no Rose, this has happened because I had to use another PC and whatever reason it wouldn't let me log in as usual so I had to use the first letter of my middle which I don't normally do but thanks nevertheless to you and John

watched and enjoyed the Beatles vid John but what a loss the music world and their fans must feel when they see these guys as they were altogether-what a terrible loss!

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Rob Cohen

Thu 17th Nov 2022 14:06

@Rose
I'm not entirely sure to reply directly to comments but I certainly appreciate that. I love all all of those Coleridge, Thomas, Plath, three-ways & reincarnation. Thanks for that x

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keith jeffries

Thu 17th Nov 2022 12:47

A poem of considerable profundity, almost a prayer with its appropriate ending. As a reader and not one inside the head of the author I see an appreciation of the natural world and its impact on ourselves. We are naturally close to nature and affected by its moods and changes. Natures entrances us and in its own way engenders hope. It is greater than us.
Thank you for this
Keith

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John Coopey

Thu 17th Nov 2022 11:17

Sorry, Stephen. I never buy them.

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keith jeffries

Thu 17th Nov 2022 10:06

Ghazala,
Once again I would like to thank you for your recent comments on my poems. We are evidently people of faith and see the world through our belief in the Almighty. May you be richly blessed in your life and work. Your poetry also gives me a great deal to think about.
Bless you and thank you
Keith

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kJ Walker

Thu 17th Nov 2022 09:45

More innocent lives destroyed by this illegal conflict.
We should never forgive Russia, and even after this is over we should never trade with them again.
Another world war narrowly evaded.
These are grim days indeed.

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kJ Walker

Thu 17th Nov 2022 09:36

Thank you for keeping this illegal and unjust war always in the forefront of our thoughts.

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 17th Nov 2022 09:24

A very near miss eloquently described here Stephen. How often do dire situations develop because of a mishap? I hope people take notice. G

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 17th Nov 2022 08:46

Great idea, John. Common sense at its best. (Haven't got any spare, have you?)

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 17th Nov 2022 08:34

A fine poem, Helène. I really admire this.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 17th Nov 2022 08:31

I think the title says it, Stephen. A great write, if a little disturbing.
Pleased to say that your book has arrived!

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 17th Nov 2022 08:27

A great, atmospheric description, Keith. This poem really transports the reader.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 17th Nov 2022 08:19

Two innocent citizens of Poland have perished because of this blasted war. I hope no one will misunderstand who the 'real' villains are. Let's pray for peace.

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Wed 16th Nov 2022 21:50

Thanks Uilleam for commenting on -Autumns last leaf- which! I bloody well deleted by accident! GRRRRR!!





Rose 💋

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Wed 16th Nov 2022 21:00

Excuse me asking, but you're not a Coleridge/Dylan Thomas/Sylvia Plath three way hybrid reincarnation by any chance?



just signed meself in to yer fan club dude!




Rose 💋

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Wed 16th Nov 2022 20:55

GOBSMACKINGLY FANTAZ!








Rose 💋

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Wed 16th Nov 2022 20:53

WOWSERS! what a read! Rob, where the flip have you been all of my amazement starved life?







Rose 💋

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Jo Callisto

Wed 16th Nov 2022 16:36

Thank Keith and Ghazala, yes.. definitely all of those things.. 💗

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 16th Nov 2022 16:28

HM; SA; JC and FK - thanks for the "likes".

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 16th Nov 2022 16:22

Neatly conceived with a perfect "pay off".

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John Coopey

Wed 16th Nov 2022 16:06


It helps to be of a certain age to remember this first time around.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=cK5G8fPmWeA

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Wed 16th Nov 2022 15:23

Bethany B-is that your clone? 😉


👍 poem





Rose 💋

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Ghazala lari

Wed 16th Nov 2022 11:29

All tangled, entangled, webs and nets.

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Ghazala lari

Wed 16th Nov 2022 11:28

This poem reflects our internal strife exactly as it is.

It takes a lot of trials and errors to grasp the wisdom told in your poem.

The only aim should be peace, first within which will in time flow outside as well.

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keith jeffries

Wed 16th Nov 2022 11:16

You are touching on the Divine purpose of life and endorsing the fact that we are finite in our thinking and understanding of the world about us and our personal encounters with it. A poem which enquirers and exposes who we are. I loved the way you presented this poem.
Thank you
Keith

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John Coopey

Wed 16th Nov 2022 11:05

Don’t be silly, Bethany; I was joking with you. (But if I have to explain that, it probably wasn’t a very good joke). Please feel free to comment on any of my stuff whether you like it or not.

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Wed 16th Nov 2022 10:08

Maybe Mr. C. but without the wet stuff I would like to see the pub goers faces when they turned up at the # pubs with no beer # 😫

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Wed 16th Nov 2022 10:01

Good morning, John, sorry matey but I wasn't criticising you
in fact, I was amazed by and praising the person who had used their brain for coming up with the idea

and I actually repeat my thanking of you for bringing this idea to everyone's notice 👍

me criticise you!? I would let myself be forced into having Matt Hancock's baby as a punishment if I ever did that! 😆

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John Marks

Wed 16th Nov 2022 09:21

Thank you Jo and KL, Ghazala, Stephen, Keith, Rose, Frederick & Hélène. Evolution has brought us here....but where, in God's name, is here?

"I have been and still am a seeker, but I have ceased to question stars and books; I have begun to listen to the teaching my blood whispers to me."
Hermann Hesse, Demian: Die Geschichte von Emil Sinclairs Jugend

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John Coopey

Wed 16th Nov 2022 09:14

Exactly, Jordyn. It amuses me that people expect a life without stress. Stress is there to motivate us to go out to hunt the mammoth.

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John Coopey

Wed 16th Nov 2022 09:10

Those 40deg temperatures seem a long time ago now.

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John Coopey

Wed 16th Nov 2022 07:56

Do you know, Kevin, you can get three Soleros for a couple of quid? And thanks for the Likes, Frederick, Jo and Helene.

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kJ Walker

Wed 16th Nov 2022 07:22

Such a kind sentiment. But go steady...a quid or two seems a bit excessive.

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Jo Callisto

Wed 16th Nov 2022 01:24

Thank you Bethany. I think I'd rather be called 'Ms Hideous Gomphidius'... than Lee, or Jamie, or Justine... 😎

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Holden Moncrieff

Wed 16th Nov 2022 01:24

A beautiful poem, Tom, it really does evoke gentleness and calmness! I loved the lines
"you got strong
from lifting others up"! 🌷

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Jo Callisto

Wed 16th Nov 2022 01:22

Really interesting. I have to think some more about this concept .......that a disappointment can be so grave... that it leads to a permanent loss of happiness.

I've had enough serious disappointments to understand what's meant here... but for me personally, I think my veins are flowing with a fairly good dose of defiance..... and so far...that has kept me safe from having scarring too deep.. (I say 'so far'.... 55 years.... so hopefully a few more years to go..... and hopefully...but not guaranteed (!!)... I can remain defiant enough to dodge too much deepness of scarring).

It's such an individualistic issue.. with so many complex variables interacting constantly.. no real formula that anyone can hold onto or concoct or prescribe..

Very thought provoking.

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John Marks

Wed 16th Nov 2022 00:28

Thank you dear Bethany and thank you dear Frederick.

"The hardest thing is to live richly in the present without letting it be tainted out of fear for the future or regret for the past." Sylvia Plath

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