You are a hard man, and that quality is a splendid one. Clarity is always highly valued, but especially if tempered with a little empathy. I have smiled with delight as I read this.
Comment is about You're No Sylvia (blog)
Original item by Edward Coleman
Welcome to WOL. I'll try to keep up with your work. Your Bio comment is excellent.
Comment is about Edward Coleman (poet profile)
Original item by Edward Coleman
Much enjoyed. A fine flair for ideas and then the best words to make keen imagery. Love it all, and the final verse especially.
Is it possible to check for small spelling errors, since it's a 'page piece', probably just slipping by as you type. If that's a problem, don't worry about it, because the quality of thought and language is just superb.
Keep sharing. The spelling can always go hang.
Comment is about Going Nuts (blog)
Original item by Edward Coleman
Jeez Louise! A sonnet, isn't it! And masterful. I am so impressed.
Comment is about The Beast Beneath The Beck (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
Brilliant words as usual.
Your imagery is superb.
Only just joined this site today so was well chuffed to see your name on here.
How do I add a rose to say I liked it ?
Comment is about The Beast Beneath The Beck (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
Sly and funny and punchy - good one.
Comment is about Old age doesn't come alone (blog)
Original item by hugh
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Sun 20th May 2018 15:18
If that's your local beauty spot Ian I'm staying down south where it ain't so grim!
Comment is about The Beast Beneath The Beck (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
I guess this is the old dichotomy between going with your heart or your head. There are sometimes that which ever way we go we seem to get it wrong.
Anyway good poem Lynn
Comment is about BLINDED BY LOVE (blog)
Original item by lynn hahn
Another marvellous piece of poetry. I agree with Colin in that this could be longer but maybe that is just me wanting more. I am left wondering was it you playing the guitar accompanying the poem?
Nice one
Comment is about The Boy and The Sea (blog)
Original item by Xoanxo
I agree with Cynthia it is a little confusing . But I love the poem if for nothing les for your use of words.
Nice one
Comment is about Earth (blog)
Original item by Adam Whitworth
The repeating of the lines There is a well... really makes this poem drawing the reader into wanting to know more of what is hidden there.
excellent
Comment is about There is a Well (blog)
Original item by Whatsername
this is a delicious slice of life served up.
Nice one
Comment is about Going Nuts (blog)
Original item by Edward Coleman
Very good Hugh and not far from the truth I suspect.
Comment is about Old age doesn't come alone (blog)
Original item by hugh
Very cutting Hazel. Sorry couldn't resist it Hazel
Nice one
Comment is about Wedding Haiku (blog)
Original item by Hazel ettridge
There are some marvellous lines here Ian which live up to your usual brilliant standard
confused ducks die within anaemic weeds
I think there is a place in most towns that host rivers running through them that have a place like you describe. I know that is certainly true of the river running through our town
fab poem
Comment is about The Beast Beneath The Beck (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
thnaks for the comments on 'Windsor Street' Keith - a topic that certainly divides - I think it is opnly fair to balance the psycophantic outpourings of our national broadcaster ?
Ian
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
Original item by keith jeffries
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Sun 20th May 2018 10:16
a genuinely lovely poem Jon and your appreciation for this person obviously shines through. I feel like writing similar poems when I get excellent service from anyone showing politeness, friendliness and a good work ethic. I have come across so many slackers in my time that my heart positively jumps out my chest when I see someone who can actually do their job well and efficiently. Good honest writing - I'm enjoying reading your poetry this morning. Cheers, Colin.
Comment is about Woman in a Cafe (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
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Sun 20th May 2018 10:09
a powerful piece Jon which, if put to a poll, might receive equal for and against votes. Any democracy that allows freedom of speech is precious indeed and I think you have communicated your thoughts well in this piece. Col.
Comment is about In the Name of the Father (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sun 20th May 2018 09:49
Did you mean to say 'calais'?
Comment is about Words of The Waiting Man 12 (blog)
Original item by Mikey V Kinsey
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sun 20th May 2018 09:46
Not a classic, but the message is clear!
Comment is about Old age doesn't come alone (blog)
Original item by hugh
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Sun 20th May 2018 09:37
It's when the honeymoon is over I'm looking forward to.
Comment is about Wedding Haiku (blog)
Original item by Hazel ettridge
I guess we're all reading this (and all poems) through our own lenses. Im getting 'hope'. When Im lost in the gutter I'm always grateful for a glimmer of light at the end of the tunnel and a reminder of alternative states of mind - last 5 lines.
Comment is about The Choice is yours (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Aha! this is a brilliant analogy of the way that squirrels appear chasing each other up down around in trees. I have three regular attenders on our old split willow. I think they could give the LH collider a run for its money!
The breath of a god carries her thoughts....is a very good line too.
Comment is about Going Nuts (blog)
Original item by Edward Coleman
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Sun 20th May 2018 08:16
Kevin, please rest assured that your contribution on WoL is as valid as anyone else's and it would be a great shame if you felt uncomfortable in continuing to do so. I noticed a while ago that you had partly deleted your profile. I would have sent you this message privately but now it's not possible. Please stay and be a part of the WoL community. I for one have always valued your input and would be sad to lose both your poetry and interaction. I'm sorry you feel that way. WoL should be a comfortable and safe place for everyone. I hope you have a peaceful Sunday. All the very best, Colin.
Comment is about The Choice is yours (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sun 20th May 2018 08:16
I read it as personal to your own circumstances, based on comments you' ve made previously Keith. Am I right?
Comment is about The Choice is yours (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Hi Anya - Thanks for your comment. Let's hope the fairytale lasts. T ?
Comment is about Royal Wedding (blog)
Original item by Tom Doolan
Hi Keith
I had vowed to myself to stop posting and commenting on this site (my comments were drawing more critique than my blogs). However I felt compelled to chip in my two-penn'orth on this one.
Being an uneducated ignoramus, I find it hard to read between the lines, but i try.
At first glance you seem to be simply telling people who are suffering with depression to "snap out of it" or "pull yourself together"
But I know you far better than that, and that isn't the message at all. You are a man of belief and religion, so I gather that you are conveying a spiritual message.
The last four lines could be references to angels and heaven (unless I've read too much into it)
Sorry if I have got this wrong, (again)
Cheers Kevin
Comment is about The Choice is yours (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
<Deleted User> (16099)
Sun 20th May 2018 00:49
I know in this poem there is so much more..perhaps someday you will tell me..
Comment is about A Life (blog)
Original item by Hazel ettridge
David, Brian and Anya,
thank you again. I think Anya has hit on what I am trying to convey. I also have met people who are in difficult or contentious situations and wont let go. They brood and brood about it,
David I think your self criticism is unjustified.
Keith
Comment is about The Choice is yours (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sat 19th May 2018 20:30
Not that much though!!!!
Comment is about The Choice is yours (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
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Sat 19th May 2018 20:27
Brian and David,
thank you both. The choice is yours is about taking the initiative in one´s life. Depression and anxiety develop in the mind which is fertile ground for outside forces to affect and influence our thinking. These conditions often require the help of a pyscholanalyst or medication but many people stay in a state of mind whereby they allow matters to take a hold of the thought process. Then they begin some internal conflict inside the mind which serves no purpose other than to irritate or plague the person concerned. They live in their own misery and the only way out is to take the initiative and break loose. I cannot understand people who wallow in such situations when the door is there to be opened but they are unable to do so for some inexplicable reason. Obsessive behaviour may explain such conditions to an extent but I have come across many who are unhappy or miserable and don´t need to be so. They can be dismissive of help also. We can all fly, we just have to flap our wings
Keith
Comment is about The Choice is yours (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sat 19th May 2018 19:36
I guess if you can take yourself out of a perpetually stressful situation and lead a calmer life it will help any inherent anxiety...but as David says it probably won't completely solve it.
Anyway, good piece Keith.
Comment is about The Choice is yours (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Thank you so much for comments and likes. I know that when it comes to life there is so much more to say - but is there?
Comment is about A Life (blog)
Original item by Hazel ettridge
Thanks for the comments and well done M.C!
Fred
Comment is about HYPOCHONDRIASIS (blog)
Original item by Rick Varden
To be sure - there are those who write a will
When told that they are far from ill. ?
Comment is about HYPOCHONDRIASIS (blog)
Original item by Rick Varden
Colin,
Thanks as always for your kind comment.
Keith
Comment is about Dad (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Short, sharp and painfully true. Good one - and well-rhymed too.
Comment is about Red carpet Props (blog)
Original item by Mike Bartram
Very interesting. Is 'Lay' the verb of 'Earth lay ....' or a command?
Comment is about Earth (blog)
Original item by Adam Whitworth
Pleased that it worked on the two levels - deer and us!
Comment is about The Forest Glade (blog)
Original item by Chris Armstrong
Thank you Colin! I guess it wouldn't be too good if it was the other way round ?!
Comment is about The Boy and The Sea (blog)
Original item by Xoanxo
<Deleted User> (13762)
Sat 19th May 2018 09:02
you seem to have fitted pretty much everything in here Keith and it works well. The last couple of lines are a real kick in the gut. Good stuff. Hope you have a pleasant weekend. Col.
Comment is about Dad (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
<Deleted User> (13762)
Sat 19th May 2018 08:45
me too Brian. Nice one Cathy.
Comment is about It's not easy being green. (blog)
Original item by CathyLCrabb
<Deleted User> (13762)
Sat 19th May 2018 08:41
I can't help but think of a young me standing in a corner of the disco summoning up the courage to go ask the dappled beauty under the mirrorball for a dance whilst all around her the older boys are sweating testosterone and vying for attention like the dancefloor is a rutting field. Great poem Chris. All the best, Col.
Comment is about The Forest Glade (blog)
Original item by Chris Armstrong
Martin Elder
Sun 20th May 2018 19:12
This is fabulous Cynthia. I wish I had been there to hear you read it. sorry I couldn't make it. This has a very lyric feel to it.
Love it
Martin
Comment is about Written in the Stars (blog)
Original item by Cynthia Buell Thomas