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In the Name of the Father

Preying on and crushing new life
with your supernatural talent

Sweet and comforting words
fill the air
for the unsuspecting

defiling the young
with your two thousand year old dick

they, who do not dare question your authority
too young, too innocent

taking advantage of the naive
in your nave

Your hell is too good for you.

◄ Stranger in me

Once More ►

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 21st May 2018 22:11

Thank you all for your kind words. They mean so much to me.

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keith jeffries

Mon 21st May 2018 15:21

Jon,
Your words in this brief poem are concise and well constructed. Why should hell have to tolerate such vile people. Well done and thank you.
Keith

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 21st May 2018 13:10

Thank you, Colin.

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Sun 20th May 2018 10:09

a powerful piece Jon which, if put to a poll, might receive equal for and against votes. Any democracy that allows freedom of speech is precious indeed and I think you have communicated your thoughts well in this piece. Col.

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