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Going Nuts

the woman behind a measure of fence is there within the silence

murmmering about the oak tree , its little creatures, its smallest birds

and the great shadow we both share.

 

The breath of a god carries her thoughts,

enjoying the cliche of grey squirrels, she tells the world

they’re excitable. Holding a nut of lunch to their tiny chests,

looking cute as they swim between inhaling braches.

 

I’ve watched them too,

like silver fish, like thoughts between the neurons

of an active mind or

those words that always escape me.

 

 

 

 

Nearly There ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 20th May 2018 18:17

Much enjoyed. A fine flair for ideas and then the best words to make keen imagery. Love it all, and the final verse especially.

Is it possible to check for small spelling errors, since it's a 'page piece', probably just slipping by as you type. If that's a problem, don't worry about it, because the quality of thought and language is just superb.

Keep sharing. The spelling can always go hang.

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Martin Elder

Sun 20th May 2018 14:45

this is a delicious slice of life served up.
Nice one

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Hazel ettridge

Sun 20th May 2018 09:19

Last verse gorgeous imagery.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 20th May 2018 09:14

Aha! this is a brilliant analogy of the way that squirrels appear chasing each other up down around in trees. I have three regular attenders on our old split willow. I think they could give the LH collider a run for its money!

The breath of a god carries her thoughts....is a very good line too.

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