A Life
Hello
Welcome
I love you
Let's share
Isn't this amazing
So glad I came
Goodbye
See you again
Soon.
I hope. Maybe.
Comments
<Deleted User> (16099)
Sun 20th May 2018 00:49
I know in this poem there is so much more..perhaps someday you will tell me..
Thank you so much for comments and likes. I know that when it comes to life there is so much more to say - but is there?
Oh, God, you're funny!
Strangers in the night exchanging glances. Is what came to mind when reading this . It's wonderful
Nice one Hazel
<Deleted User> (19421)
Fri 18th May 2018 12:38
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Good Morning Hazel,
In a few words you hit upon the transitory nature of life and also perhaps its capricious quality. Thank you for this.
Keith
<Deleted User> (13762)
Fri 18th May 2018 08:44
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Hazel ettridge
Sat 26th May 2018 12:30
Rick, these sentiments extend beyond dating to the whole of life's experience through to the final moments.im currently revising my ideas about reincarnation being a load of old hooey.