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Earth

 

Lay in the trench 


bean, barley, corn,


twisted in silken sheets


your love dreaming.


In all the lord's land they lay 


shark-jaw traps.


Young englishman,


walk the safe way home.

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Martin Elder

Sun 20th May 2018 15:07

I agree with Cynthia it is a little confusing . But I love the poem if for nothing les for your use of words.
Nice one

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 19th May 2018 14:23

Very interesting. Is 'Lay' the verb of 'Earth lay ....' or a command?

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