<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 24th Sep 2018 13:47
Congratulations Becks and so pleased to see one of the rhymers getting recognised.
Comment is about "Writing in Rhyme" by Becky Who is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Mike Took
Big Sal
Mon 24th Sep 2018 13:46
Well worth the effort to put it into rhyme now wasn't it?
I think most who don't like rhyming poetry are simply jealous that they cannot put two words together.
Great job Becky. Already read this, but I read it again for good measure. ?
Comment is about "Writing in Rhyme" by Becky Who is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Mike Took
Due to Brexit
Take care when your out there
shopping,
The level of the pound is dropping.
Comment is about Theresa May (blog)
Original item by hugh
And then reality happened. Great write up, though.
Comment is about Poetry & The Great War, a series: 2 The Outbreak of War (article)
Original item by Mike Took
<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 24th Sep 2018 12:24
my kinda dreams Jon. Your number one in my book of appreciation without a doubt.
Rose ?
Comment is about Multicoloured Dreamscape (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 24th Sep 2018 12:11
totally agree and sympathise likewise with the other guys D.D. and also on the 'nice to see you back' dude
Rose ?
Comment is about THE SHIP THEY CALL "ALZHEIMER'S" (blog)
Original item by Daniel Dwyran
<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 24th Sep 2018 12:06
very wistful and beautiful piece Xoanado ( cool name! ) do you think drifting rather than flying notes would read better?
just a friendly thought.
Rose ?
Comment is about Season's Change (blog)
Original item by Xoanxo
<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 24th Sep 2018 12:00
absolutely and defo poem of the week Trev-( you know where to send that fifty squid note don't you? ?!!!
or shall I collect in person from the sanitorium-yep? which rubber room are you in? ?
Rose ?
Comment is about Hyperbole (blog)
Original item by Trevor Alexander
Here, here!
I wrote an extremely viscious poem about Theresa May not long after the referendum. It's probably still floating around Facebook somewhere. Yours is ...kinder.
Comment is about Theresa May (blog)
Original item by hugh
Hi, thanks for commenting"Dog Lane". I can see you love dogs - if all owners were as loving and responsible as you I'm sure I wouldn't have so much trouble on my way home!
Take care xx
Comment is about lynn hahn (poet profile)
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Sounds wonderful Kate
Comment is about Multicoloured Dreamscape (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
<Deleted User> (19913)
Mon 24th Sep 2018 10:49
Magical. Reminds me of diving off the coast of a volcanic island at night, where particles would flouresce in the water. Nature sure is as wonderful as it is colourful.
Comment is about Multicoloured Dreamscape (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
<Deleted User> (19913)
Mon 24th Sep 2018 10:46
What a bittersweet ode to a dreadful condition.
Comment is about THE SHIP THEY CALL "ALZHEIMER'S" (blog)
Original item by Daniel Dwyran
Hi everyone,
I just wanted to say I had a ball on Saturday, it was an excellent event. I tried to load photos onto this page, but they went on my profile page instead - plus half of them are sideways (they were the right way up on my phone)!
I should have asked your permissions before posting them, so if anyone doesn't like their pic, please let me know and I'll take it down. I personally think you are a handsome / gorgeous lot and gave a completely professional performance at the Gallery.
Mark and Deborah have posted on social media over the weekend and were more than happy with the day. Katherine Rossetti was also very pleased with how popular the event was and thanked us for our time and support.
Good times!
I look forward to Randy's Poetry Trail Open Mic on Wednesday and hope to see you there.
Nic
Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)
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<Deleted User> (19913)
Mon 24th Sep 2018 10:43
<Deleted User> (19913)
Mon 24th Sep 2018 10:40
<Deleted User> (19913)
Mon 24th Sep 2018 10:39
Very clever visual
Comment is about The wave behind the wave (blog)
Original item by Chris Armstrong
It's an interesting exercise Brian to have nothing in particular and see where you're mind takes you. Jessica Masterson said "The next time your mind wanders, follow it around for a while" ? Hang on...I need the loo
Comment is about Hang On.. I Need The Loo (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Thank you so much Keith. That is fantastic feedback. I was pretty honoured that this was poem of the week last week.
Comment is about The Voice of the Commons (blog)
Original item by Janey Colbourne
<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 24th Sep 2018 09:51
A poem about not having written a poem...that's a first!
Comment is about Hang On.. I Need The Loo (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Nice writing/artwork Chris ?
Comment is about The wave behind the wave (blog)
Original item by Chris Armstrong
Thanks Nigel, although I don't know why half of them have turned sideways? They are the right way up on my phone??? Nice shirt ? I'll add more pics... if anyone doesn't want their photo displayed, please let me know and I'll take it down (I should have asked first - sorry).
Comment is about Nicola Hulme (poet profile)
Original item by Nicola Hulme
Hi D
No I don't carry the sign a round with me. It was more about my presumption at calling myself a poet and leaving it to others to decide. It is probably getting a bit old now so I should perhaps change the profile picture.
Cheers
Martin
Comment is about d.knape (poet profile)
Original item by d.knape
Thanks Taylor & John. And Anya & David for the likes. This one was deliberately poignant as it was about my own childhood. "Sadness with fleeting glimpses of joy" just about sums that up.
Grimstone low is a more blinkered view of the place where I grew up, and I like to see the funny side when writing about there.
Cheers Kevin
Comment is about The Bricky Pond (blog)
Original item by kJ Walker
Thank you Ray and Hannah. The witch is a potent symbol of female magic and power. That was why powerful men feared them and had them burnt alive as a warning to other women.
Comment is about The season of the witch (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
Sun 23rd Sep 2018 22:59
Yes, true story.
just turned it into a poem.
what about that "Poet" sign you are holding?
do you carry that around with you?
Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)
Original item by Martin Elder
Nice of you to say so, Martin. I know we both enjoy that delving back, and I do enjoy some aspects of the past. I try not to wear rose tined specs all the time though!
All the best Ray
Comment is about NONDESCRIPT (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Big Sal
Sun 23rd Sep 2018 22:23
Excellent poem, terrible affliction.?
Comment is about THE SHIP THEY CALL "ALZHEIMER'S" (blog)
Original item by Daniel Dwyran
Big Sal
Sun 23rd Sep 2018 22:19
Second to last stanza could suffice for a spaceship trip through the stars.
Great piece.?
Comment is about WHISPER (blog)
Original item by poetic_muse
Big Sal
Sun 23rd Sep 2018 22:18
No problem, but do keep up the great work writing.?
Comment is about upon pondering some of the various conditions which might be judged as normal (blog)
Original item by nunya
elPintor
Sun 23rd Sep 2018 20:44
Hey Ray, thanks for reading. I hope you enjoy what remains of the weekend.
Comment is about upon pondering some of the various conditions which might be judged as normal (blog)
Original item by nunya
Thank you very much for your kind words on the 'The ship they call Alzheimer's' and your warm welcome back Martin. With poetry... sometimes life just gets in the way.? I look forward to catching up on your blog my friend. Much appreciated.
Comment is about Martin Elder (poet profile)
Original item by Martin Elder
You always evoke sweet memories with your work. One of my favourites was the lavender hill mob.
Nice one Ray
Comment is about NONDESCRIPT (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Your poetry always excels and bringing all the right ingredients in what you write about and the way that you use words. This helps to draw the reader in as well as having a subtle amount of humour just to add the right amount of spice
Nice on Peter
Comment is about CATCH-UP (blog)
Original item by Peter Taylor
Although it might be going off subject slightly passion does come in many guises not least in poetry, a lot of which I read on WOL. This poem being no exception Keith.
Nice one.
Comment is about If Only.... (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Martin,
This poem creates an image which I seem to be familiar with. Do they still drink Mild? A good poem.
Thank you
Keith
Comment is about Golden days (blog)
Original item by Martin Elder
Why am I not surprised at this poem Nigel. You always did have a flair for the unexpected.
Nice one
Comment is about Insanity Comes Calling (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Welcome back Daniel. It's good to se you posting again. I see you haven't lost any of your flair
Nice one
Comment is about THE SHIP THEY CALL "ALZHEIMER'S" (blog)
Original item by Daniel Dwyran
is this a true story. Either way it makes a good poem.
Nice one
Comment is about Stray (blog)
Original item by d.knape
I love the line about looking into a blind mans eyes and seeing what he sees.
Nice one
Comment is about Portals to Other Worlds (blog)
Original item by Emma-Jane Stradling
Sun 23rd Sep 2018 18:46
Thanks Keith for your admiration.
I am glad someone recognizes brilliance
when they see it.
wink.
Comment is about keith jeffries (poet profile)
Original item by keith jeffries
Sun 23rd Sep 2018 18:45
The Irish are known for poetry and
drinking.
where do you stand?
wink.
Comment is about Taylor Crowshaw (poet profile)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Sun 23rd Sep 2018 18:42
not sure what you meant by your last comment...
it's a pity things like this stay as a poem?
by the way, what is that round thing on your head?
wink.
Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)
Original item by Don Matthews
Big Sal
Sun 23rd Sep 2018 18:12
Like seeing synesthesia through a kaleidoscope all in itself. Nice one Jon.?
Comment is about Multicoloured Dreamscape (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
Big Sal
Sun 23rd Sep 2018 18:08
Excellent piece of poetry you have here.?
Comment is about Portals to Other Worlds (blog)
Original item by Emma-Jane Stradling
raypool
Mon 24th Sep 2018 14:04
Nice to read your poems as well as listening live to them(Lightbox on Thursday) Xoanxo. A well captured atmosphere, all soft edges and thoughts - almost ethereal. I enjoyed your tribute to a friend last week.
Great irresistible voice rendition and a refined guitar make it memorable!
Ray
Comment is about Season's Change (blog)
Original item by Xoanxo