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Jason Bayliss

Sun 17th Feb 2019 18:00

Dorothy, it is my pleasure. I also suffered under the assumption that I was not bright, as a child, when in actual fact I had a very high IQ. But as I've always said, I don't think less, I just think differently and I'm proud of it. What was once my burden is now something I wear with pride.
And always will ?.

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keith jeffries

Sun 17th Feb 2019 17:51

Thank you all for your comments.

It is interesting to note that the job seekers allowance for those over 24 years per week is higher than we pay our veterans for their pension. A grateful nation?

Keith

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Jason Bayliss

Sun 17th Feb 2019 17:46

Wow, that is a powerful message. Well done my friend, brilliant.

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Sun 17th Feb 2019 17:27

Jason
I am sure you are right and I do apologize, It is a subject that I am probably overly sesitive about.
For my generation the stigma of being "not very bright" is a brand that stays, not so these days as it is understood for what it is.
Thank you for explaining,

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Jason Bayliss

Sun 17th Feb 2019 17:10

Thanks Mae. And we'll said Dorothy, but I don't think M.C. meant to suggest that as dyslexics we are any less than anyone else, or that we should be especially careful or limited. I read it more as he was trying to express the thought process that, as dyslexics we use when writing.

I'm sure no offence was meant and certainly none was taken.

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keith jeffries

Sun 17th Feb 2019 16:55

Brilliant. More Kaelan! Thanks. Keith

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Mae Foreman

Sun 17th Feb 2019 16:40

Jason you're a gem! ? Write on my friend! Right on!
Thank you?
Mae

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Jon Stainsby

Sun 17th Feb 2019 16:29

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Sun 17th Feb 2019 16:17

M.C.Newberry
I do so hope that I have misunderstood you, if I have i apologize.
"Adjust to your limitations" why?

Why should I, or others with the same problem, adjust to our limitations when what I want to do is reach out and expand - I want to explore and enjoy the freedom that others have experienced for years, I do not want to crawl back into that dark pit of inferiority that i have lived in for most of my life. Through WOL I have found my voice,

"Make sure the words you're handing to others Don't mean misunderstanding"

I think that I. and others like me, are as capable as anyone in choosing exactly the right word for the right place. I maybe be dyslexic and hampererd by lack of education but poetry seems to be a great leveller and i feel empowerd by it.

Churchill could not spell, perhaps he was dislexic, we will never know it was not invented then.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 17th Feb 2019 16:06

Who was it who said that America is a matriarchal society?!
Women certainly have admirable qualities that deserve our thanks
and encouragement - not least their importance to the young of
both genders in becoming caring human beings in later life. They
possess (or should) that restraint that can be a safety valve for the
sometimes careless adventures indulged in by the male of the species. At the same time, they are often there behind...pushing! ?

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Mae Foreman

Sun 17th Feb 2019 16:04

You are right dear M.C. But the soul has a tongue of its own and it cannot always be silenced by reason. I don't really blame anybody for anything, including myself. Each of us has to survive best way we can. Still, there is a part of me that grieves.
Thank you for reading and commenting?
Mae

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Mae Foreman

Sun 17th Feb 2019 16:02

Thank you Keith.
Sometimes we should take a hard look in the mirror. It's not something you can do every day because it's painful to face your shortcomings but somedays you simply can't avoid the mirrors.
Thank you?
Mae

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keith jeffries

Sun 17th Feb 2019 16:01

An interesting poem which is open to many challenges. I think men and women are interdependent and therefore compliment one another.
A good poem

Thank you for this

Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 17th Feb 2019 16:01

A pertinent summation of the conflict that is within us. As I have
observed elsewhere: do the best you can - when you can. The
actuality of sainthood is a sometime/never thing for most of us.
It is a sad fact that we can become inured to injury and pain if
exposed to it too often - called (very aptly): compassion fatigue.
It is perhaps nature's way of self-preservation in extreme circumstances and should not be a cause for too much self-criticism.

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keith jeffries

Sun 17th Feb 2019 15:57

Mae,

This poem speaks of self examination which indeed produces some profound results. A good poem indeed.

Thank you for this

Keith

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Mae Foreman

Sun 17th Feb 2019 15:55

I know. It just hurts me some days the fact that I fall short at just being humane. I just had to let it out?
Thank you Brian!
Mae

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Sun 17th Feb 2019 15:54

Well said sir! Go on, be a devil, Have a double helping of phyllosan and a large glass of sanatogen!

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Sun 17th Feb 2019 15:51

I've done a few things, and not done other things, that I regretted later. I don't beat myself up, no-one should...it's just human nature.

Good one Mae.

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Sun 17th Feb 2019 15:46

It's nearly 40 years since I packed up smoking. In real terms, at say a pack per day at £9, I have saved myself £100,000, as well as perhaps my life, or at least my health.

Well said Mark.

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Erin Cc

Sun 17th Feb 2019 15:34

Thank you for this lovely read! Speaking my truth and staying silent is something I have always struggled with. I not only was able to relate to this poem but felt uplifted after reading!

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 17th Feb 2019 15:22

When the Napoleonic wars finally came to an end, the return of out of work service personnel (as we call them nowadays) saw
Parliament enact the Vagrancy Act 1824, due to the perceived
social affront of the existence of the unemployed and the wounded
begging and exposing wounds (an additional legal definition) for
that purpose in the streets and thoroughfares of the country.
Two centuries on, society still grapples with the same sort of
problem and its origins. Are we any better or better equipped to deal
with this? It seems not. Human nature remains firmly in the hands
of what an ex-soldier acquaintance referred to disparagingly as
"Mark One Man" e.g. basic model !!!

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 17th Feb 2019 15:09

Neatly put! To which I might add.....
Adjust to your limitations
Make sure the words you're handing
To others (and other nations!)
Don't mean misunderstanding ?.

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elPintor

Sun 17th Feb 2019 14:36

Cheers, Ray and Kate--lovely to hear from you!

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Dave Caplan

Sun 17th Feb 2019 14:33

Hello David,
Thanks for your comments.
I liked the Woody Allen line.
I find nothing wrong with irreverent humour or laughing at oneself.....life is too serious not to be funny.

Dave

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Jon Stainsby

Sun 17th Feb 2019 14:24

Thank you, Anya ❤

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Jon Stainsby

Sun 17th Feb 2019 14:05

The world's priorities are screwed up.

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Sun 17th Feb 2019 13:47

So chilling - no doubt the more self-righteous among us would suggest that 'Our Man' should get himself a job.

We put 'Our Man' on the front line to defend us and then we hid behind him. When he finally broke we abandoned him and found another man to take his place.

My on-line groceries were once delivererd by an ex-soldier who was
affronted by the fact that this was the only job that he could get, He was fit, strong and had an air of authority which was wasted on delivering groceries to little old ladies( my words not his).

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Sun 17th Feb 2019 13:23

Oh! how I love this one and I can relate to it.

In my day dyslexia was not heard of, " a bit slow" - "not very brifgt"
" rather stupid" was what we were told, and of course as children, we believed what we were told.

I love your spirited jaunty atitude it makes for a joyful read

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Sun 17th Feb 2019 12:47

I agree with Jason, that is a beautiful and clever line.

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Sun 17th Feb 2019 11:57

He and so many others suffering Keith. It's appalling to see such waste in some areas when so many are in need. I like the way you have juxtaposed big issues, with a human story to craft a compelling observation of a society that needs to do better.

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steven arthur

Sun 17th Feb 2019 11:42

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lisa donohoe

Sun 17th Feb 2019 11:17

This is brilliant, very cleverly put together.
Great Job jay ?

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keith jeffries

Sun 17th Feb 2019 10:17

A delightful reminder of my childhood. A very good poem
Thank you for this
Keith

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Sun 17th Feb 2019 09:51

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Jason Bayliss

Sun 17th Feb 2019 09:41

"So many times I have drowned myself just to see you swim."
Beautiful, clever line.☺

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Sun 17th Feb 2019 09:25

I can relate Hazel, the horrors of the world and how we face it can sometimes be too much to bear. Wonderful poem.

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Sun 17th Feb 2019 09:22

You took me to a wonderland with this Desmond. Lovely poem.

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Sun 17th Feb 2019 06:56

Wonderful imagery, congratulations Steven. You never fail to please

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Sun 17th Feb 2019 06:01

So many delicious wild moments and secrets are cloaked in darkness. Beautiful metaphor Rachel.

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Sun 17th Feb 2019 05:41

I love how you have honoured nature with this poem. Absolutely beautiful.

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Erin Cc

Sun 17th Feb 2019 04:56

I love the first line of this piece! Instantly grabbed my attention!

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Sun 17th Feb 2019 03:00

Agree wtih Keith and Kate...

"Ageing toward my fate, time’s

experience-gale savages my

awareness. "

Clever poem.

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Stu Buck

Sun 17th Feb 2019 02:53

hi cynthia
thanks for getting back to me
i did as you suggested and have a guest slot booked for june
i hope i get to see you there and i'm sending positive healing thoughts your way

stu

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Sun 17th Feb 2019 02:50

I agree Steven, dense, concise yet powerful!
Well done, again, Jason.

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Sun 17th Feb 2019 02:40

My wish for this world is that everyone appreciates how unique and special they are and not want to change to some magazine idea of who they must be. You are beautiful!
Love your introduction and declaration - more should hear.

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Sun 17th Feb 2019 02:38

Lots of lovely ideas in this piece, especially this line:
"...when you not only played my guitar but my heart..."

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Erin Cc

Sun 17th Feb 2019 00:03

I am new to this website and clicked on your profile and a random sample you have written. I am very impressed with your rhyming skills. I also enjoyed how you captured the aspect of our society of being enslaved to our phones.

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Dave Caplan

Sat 16th Feb 2019 22:49

Kieth thank you for commenting on my latest effort.
I have been abroad for the last few days, so have some catching up to do on other's poems.

As is usual there will always be controversy on anything religious, but that is not altogether a bad thing if handled with a grain of respect for the views of others.....which I admit is not always easy.

My father's family were Russian Jews who were lucky to escape with their lives when Cossaks came riding through their village, cutting people down with swords and setting fire to the wooden village hovels they called home. They took the first ship they could get (not even knowing or caring where it was bound) and ended up in Scotland in the early 1900s before WW1.

Just after WW2 my father met, and married, a french Catholic schoolteacher he met in Paris.

I myself met and married my longtime penpal from the Philippines. Her father was Muslim and a drunkard, and ended up marrying a Catholic (a Nun) whom he had raped.
My wife was one of their five children.

Oddly enough apart from my wife's mother nobody else was in the least interested in religion, and rarely if ever went to church.

I was given a hard time at school, both primary & secondary, for refusing to say prayers and, on one occasion was beaten in front of the class by my form master for not closing my eyes during morning prayers. Non of the other boys cared, but it was a good excuse to pick on me; so punch-ups were frequent in the school yard. That's one way to learn how to fight !

Fortunately things are so different today. My daughters never had any problems at school, but that is partly because very few people nowadays, at least here in England, bother about such things. I have lost count of the amount of derelict churches there are here in the south of England, but at least they are, for the most, preserved as such old buildings should be.

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lisa donohoe

Sat 16th Feb 2019 21:27

Your comments always make me smile dear friend, thank you kindly ?

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Rich

Sat 16th Feb 2019 21:13

Thanks Keith, and Thanks Kate - really appreciate the support.

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