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Don Matthews

Sun 6th Oct 2019 08:27

Do you record them in a diary of 'great shits I have had' ?

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John Coopey

Sun 6th Oct 2019 08:21

One a day, Don. I try to keep “regler”.

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Don Matthews

Sun 6th Oct 2019 03:40

I like this Michael......clever.

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Don Matthews

Sun 6th Oct 2019 01:18

Shit....Don't say there are more chapters.....

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Don Matthews

Sun 6th Oct 2019 01:11

Good luck in your search for joined up screen write....

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John Coopey

Sat 5th Oct 2019 22:23

You paid in advance, Brian, with a small deposit.

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Sat 5th Oct 2019 22:15

That Holyhead trip...was it a package tour?

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keith jeffries

Sat 5th Oct 2019 21:52

and joined up writing.....

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kJ Walker

Sat 5th Oct 2019 21:48

there's a fear I might sound like one of Monty Python's "Four Yorkshiremen" when I say this, but that's exactly how I remember my own childhood home.
I can remember my mum having to unplug the light to plug the iron into the socket. then having to iron on the twilight.

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branwell kent

Sat 5th Oct 2019 20:02

very good poem

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Adam Rabinowitz

Sat 5th Oct 2019 18:34

Thank you, Rose and Lisa. Your words are very kind and affirming. Hope you have beautiful day.

Adam

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Tom

Sat 5th Oct 2019 17:42

Walking on the water
Rinsing the sand out
Of my Jesus sandals ?

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trevor homer

Sat 5th Oct 2019 17:30

Tom sorry for delay in responding; been away. I don't have a reading of this but I will consider setting things up to enable me to do so. Thanks again.

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DESMOND CHILDS

Sat 5th Oct 2019 16:50

Thank you Lisa, I’m glad you do, “part of the rhythm”. Thanks Rose for the like, much appreciation to both of you.



All the best des

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Nigel Astell

Sat 5th Oct 2019 15:26

Fell in love with this poem Lisa

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Nigel Astell

Sat 5th Oct 2019 15:17

Bat out of hell
flutters around till
Monsters U K find
a coffin vacant
ready to fill.

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Nigel Astell

Sat 5th Oct 2019 15:06

Armchair airlines
wings to fly
no room
for luggage
hold on
no seat belt!

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 14:53

I wanna be a hammer
I wanna be a stake
Please Miss can I? can I?
I wanna scare partake

'Partake's a very big word
Johnny for you to say
I had to use 'partake' Miss
To make it rhyme, hey hey

You're hired Johnny. Here's your hammer and stake. Careful , don't hammer Ruth Johnny! (You don't hammer the person who hires you......) ?

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 14:27

I know you won't believe this
I heard your writer clicking
Down the wire as you did type
The ribbon it was sticking

(You didn't know I heard that did you ?...) ?


I'm trying to be green-friendly like Keith dk. I've got a black phone but the telephone company won't connect it. They say it's too primitive. Something about buggering up their circuits... Stamps keep rising and never know what to put on the envelope... Whistling kettle - I'm looking for one that whistles 'God save Australia' but no luck yet...

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 14:15

Staring at my blanky screen
Uri says I gotta focus
Should I do or should I not?
Was all Uri hocus pocus?

Thalia says I'm unfairly judging him Ruth..?

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Lisa C Bassignani

Sat 5th Oct 2019 14:05

Desmond,
I feel this.
?

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Lisa C Bassignani

Sat 5th Oct 2019 13:31

Beautiful indeed. The morning sunlight brings such wonder.

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Lisa C Bassignani

Sat 5th Oct 2019 13:26

Michael, I Love this!
It reminds me of "Gin Soaked Boy" by Tom Waits
Lisa

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8F_yYwX0sQk

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Lisa C Bassignani

Sat 5th Oct 2019 13:22

White screen, stark and bright
For my thoughts on which to write
A clean space waiting

White screen, O white screen
To be anything I dream
Imagination

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Lisa C Bassignani

Sat 5th Oct 2019 12:55

I miss those days...click..click...click...

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Emer Ni Chorra

Sat 5th Oct 2019 12:21

Thank you for stopping by, Tom. I am delighted to hear that it inspired you to write a few lines.?

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Sat 5th Oct 2019 12:13

it is my turn now Adam to be glad I logged in today.

One beauty of a poem!







Rose ?

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Sat 5th Oct 2019 12:10

this is good enough to make me swear-
-because I hadn't written it!

?




Rose ?

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Sat 5th Oct 2019 12:05

Michael, colour me amazed!








Rose ?





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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 5th Oct 2019 11:54

M.C., I do know that 'blessing'.

Apparently, I have 'Nordic' blood as well, which, in combination with the Celtic Irish, is quite a heritage for considering the 'esoteric' themes of life. There has to be some explanation for this unrelenting drive.

Ruth, how wonderful. My first thought was: 'Well, that accounts for the bright face leaping right off the screen. Irish eyes and a winning smile!'

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 5th Oct 2019 11:52

Thanks for reading Keith, glad you liked this. Hugh, Don, Adam, Branwell and Michael for the 'likes'.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 5th Oct 2019 11:48

The ultimate in the art of zen Don.
All the best ideas start by focusing on that blank screen in your mind. Ironically it can take hours of meditation to free that mental chatter and get a blank screen. Uri Geller's top tip in becoming psychic...Focus on your blank screen. So we can expect some predictions from you soon.

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Ghazala Lari

Sat 5th Oct 2019 11:25

Black n white
Colours spilled
Book of art
Craziness instill

Haiku expert!!

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keith jeffries

Sat 5th Oct 2019 11:23

d.k.,

We are kindred spirits. Look after your typewriter and cherish it as it is green friendly. I am a self confessed technophobe who still writes poetry, short stories and letters with a fountain pen. Blotting paper at the ready and an inkwell. I stick stamps on letters and visit the post office. I even send postcards, picture postcards and the postman knows where I live. I too possess a typewriter but seldom use it as it is the forerunner of the computer, a cursed machine. My telephone is black and I also have a whistling kettle. Stay strong in the face of progress. I also keep a diary, a page a day diary, which is not vulnerable to power cuts or spam. You should receive HOTW Hero of the Week award.

I salute you.
Thank you

Keith

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John Coopey

Sat 5th Oct 2019 11:07

Bear up, Don. It won’t be much worse than the stuff on here.

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Ghazala Lari

Sat 5th Oct 2019 10:45

They sound like a movie of todays time. She should have been a script writer born now.
It does rings a gong in the head. Seriously i had always thought her to be a poet unlike your analysis.
Keep fuelling your think tank and keep sharing!!

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 10:42

Skippy is name for kangaroo on children's programmes boing boing...

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d.knape

Sat 5th Oct 2019 10:34

Waiting for Driver-less cars.
That was a Driver-less poem!

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d.knape

Sat 5th Oct 2019 10:31

what is a "Skippy"?

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d.knape

Sat 5th Oct 2019 10:30

I will write My First Car
as soon as I remember
what it was.
cars had stone wheels back then.
a hard ride but...
no flats.

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d.knape

Sat 5th Oct 2019 10:28

Why are you standing in the water?
in those new sneakers?

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d.knape

Sat 5th Oct 2019 10:23

thanks for reading my poem
I just hope you are not addicted.
if so, seek treatment in
Write Out Loud.
?

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 09:22

Oh no! You mean it gets worse?.....

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John Coopey

Sat 5th Oct 2019 08:08

Dead Poet’s Society.
There is a special corner of Hell reserved for us, Don. It’s where we are forced to listen to one another’s pretentious shite.

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 07:33

Here's a haiku (genre fun)
10,000 miles to you
Been sitting in my drive 3 months
'Bout time it to you flew


You will notice I am improving with my haiku studies..........

Thalia is impressed.......

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 06:07

The poem is entitled 'Oh to write like Emily' .It's hard writing (in rhyme) about a complex poet who wanted all her work destroyed. What attracted me was they were short rhymes, but so puzzling. A challenge you could say. And with titles like 'My life had stood - a loaded gun' and 'I felt a funeral' and 'Because I could not stop death' I couldn't resist her attraction....

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Ghazala Lari

Sat 5th Oct 2019 04:58

The poem seems to have a good start, creates curiosity, something kind of suspense.....m sure there is a thriller coming up..just waiting for the poem.
Hurry!!! Curiosity kills the cat?

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Candice Reineke

Sat 5th Oct 2019 04:16

Wow. Powerful piece, Keith! World history is marked by radicalized people blatantly acting out of sheer evil, in the name of righteousness. And history keeps repeating itself. ?

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 04:07

Nicely presented Keith. I like the short 4-line 'interuptions' between...

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Candice Reineke

Sat 5th Oct 2019 03:52

Rose, right?! Thanks so much for your kind words! ?

Emilia, thank you for reading and for your caffeinated empathy! Cheers! ☕️

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