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Every picture

Every story has a picture

And every picture has some words

Every word is dressed and spliced

Filed into lines of scraggly words

Strung and hung together one after another

To form sentences paragraphs

And sheaves of misbegotten tales

Drawn and picked out

Of the cold hard depths of the imagination

The aching hand of a straining chemist

Of beleaguered and brightly coloured thoughts

Stirs the pot of all that had laid dormant

And hidden in the muddied depths of unreality

As the pencil breaks

And every story has a beginning and an end

Some sit quite naturally

With a smile on the face of popularity

And some are killed off quick

Cold hard dramatically

The body of the bleeding chest of all humanity

Left in the frozen waste

Of a cold and wet city street

And the alchemy of words goes on

Pushing shoving anything

That’s got a beating pumping breathing heart

◄ Bully the week

I forgive ►

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Martin Elder

Fri 3rd Jul 2020 18:27

Thanks Anna. I am glad you like it

Anna

Thu 2nd Jul 2020 15:37

This is worth a second read. And a third. And a fourth.

Brilliant.

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Martin Elder

Fri 22nd May 2020 09:30

Thank you very much Hannah. I am glad you enjoyed it.
keep safe
Martin

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Thu 21st May 2020 20:33

Beautiful writing.
Spell binding.

Hannah

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Martin Elder

Thu 21st May 2020 17:41

Thanks to Nigel. Tom and Po for liking and thanks to Mortimer, Keith, Kimberley and Deb for commenting

Mortimer this poem came almost out of nowhere very quickly in a matter of minutes which surprised me. Normally I write things out long hand first and change it as I enter it on the screen. But I typed this straight in. I am glad you like it

Keith thank you my friend. I think you are absolutely right in the marriage if that is an acceptable word of art and the written word. Similarly with music. I gather inspiration from a number of sources. But quite a lot comes from music and more latterly with pieces of art. My local poetry group has been in collaboration with a group of like minded artists producing some work, one feeding off the other.
I have a particular love of surrealism.

Kimberly thanks you for your kind appreciation. I am humbled

Deb I don't think anyone can be as amazed as I was at producing this poem

Thank you all once again.
Love and blessings
and keep safe

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Deb

Thu 21st May 2020 00:26

I am amazed with your poem.

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kimberly

Wed 20th May 2020 19:40

Beautifully stated.

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keith jeffries

Wed 20th May 2020 18:32

Martin,

You have really excelled yourself with this poem. I have often drawn a comparison between art and the written word which are entwined together. With a descriptive imagination this comes quite naturally. A recent poem of mine "A Painting" is a humble example of such an attempt.

Very well done
Keith

MortimerBlooming

Wed 20th May 2020 16:43

This poem really is something else Martin, I loved reading it from start to finish. It truly is extremely beautiful and I am not adequate enough it seems to put down how I feel about it in words yet.

I shared it with your name to all my friends who indulge in poetry, I absolutely loved it.

Mortimer

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