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Darkest sunflower

Mon 25th May 2020 22:26

Thank you both So much for the words of encouragement I am new to all this I have posted on another blog under a different name but never gotten so many likes and comments it truly has made me cry and I feel happy hoping I am help others heal as well I can't thank all of you enough ?

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Mon 25th May 2020 21:09

All the sights and sounds of Spring.
Nature never stops.
Love this one.

Hannah

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julie callaghan

Mon 25th May 2020 21:06

Thank you for your kind comments. Gaining a little more confidence to try to just go with the flow.

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Mon 25th May 2020 21:01

Beautiful poem.
The imagery.
Love rainbows. Very good last verse.

Hannah

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Deb

Mon 25th May 2020 20:49

Hi Mortimer thanks for your lovely comment on my poem Always Love You

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Deb

Mon 25th May 2020 20:46

Dear Po, your comment is so uplifting. Thank you very much?

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Deb

Mon 25th May 2020 20:45

Thank you for your lovely comment, Mortimer.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 25th May 2020 19:30

I love this poem and can so relate, especially the line, “In all this I found my love to write” which definitely does make it worth the fight. ?

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 25th May 2020 19:05

Thanks for the kind comments all - I really appreciate it. I enjoyed writing this one and really liked how it came together ?

Nice to see you blogging again Hilary ?
Thanks again for commenting Po ?
Thanks J J - glad you liked it ?
Ian

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Liam Osaneo

Mon 25th May 2020 18:56

I absolutly love this

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julie callaghan

Mon 25th May 2020 18:46

I really am not too sure about this one!!

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Andy N

Mon 25th May 2020 18:29

One thing to learn from this I personally find is you have to have eyes in the back of your head even more on-line. The night I co-run Speak Easy hasn't had any trouble such as this and if we did, it's set up now so people that cause trouble are thrown straight out and banned.

It is very disrespectful to everybody that is there and ruins it for everybody else.

Glad you managed it well Ian.

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Philipos

Mon 25th May 2020 18:03

Am sure we have all been there in one way and another, only time heals if it ever does - bad memories never help our equilibrium - so we have to climb the stairs of hope. Not sure that will helps if that isn't you - I suppose there would be no blues music if we didn't learn to cope - counsellors might have some answers to this conundrum. Compelling read BTW. Take care. P.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 25th May 2020 17:47

Hi Dorinda, sorry that you've been having these problems. Have passed on your query to our tech supremo Paul. Thanks for alerting us to this.

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Mon 25th May 2020 16:42

Beautiful, I enjoy the rhythm of this poem.?

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Mon 25th May 2020 16:31

Wow, creepy!!

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dorinda macdowell

Mon 25th May 2020 16:29

I have submitted two poems for this competition.
However I am having problems trying to donate! The Just Giving site keeps asking me for my password - I have done this - they then ask me to enter my password and I keep doing this. Every time it comes back to the same box! I even tried "lost my password" box, but again I keep getting the box asking me for my password! I tried again and they said they would send me a new password, but they haven't, and I'm back to that box again!
I do want to give, so could anyone help please?
Thank you!

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th May 2020 16:14

A bitter-sweet irony in these lines...reminding us of those nicknames
we give to the afflicted...often intended as a backhanded salute to the
way afflictions are borne. The final lines make an excellent "pay-off"
to what has gone before.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th May 2020 14:58

Po - please refresh my attention span regarding the "earworm" song
plus the "incident" you refer to. I'm one tep forwards, two steps
back at the moment! Put it down to anno domini. Which has me
wondering whether the current situation will be referred to in the
future as "BC" (Before Coronavirus) and "AC" (After Coronavirus") ?
?

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Darkest sunflower

Mon 25th May 2020 14:27

PO thank you for the like and your advice is 100% welcome here but sadly. The last part of my poem is about my personal experiences I do adore Alice in wonderland but this is about what I am currently going through I was needy and selfish I have hurt alot of people including myself though I maybe sad I understand I am to blame I appreciate your advice feel free to rewrite this poem however you like and post it that's what being creative is about

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David Cooke

Mon 25th May 2020 12:42

HI Mortimer Glad you liked my tape recorder poem. More carefree days indeed!

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Philipos

Mon 25th May 2020 11:55

Very clever that. enjoyed. P

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Don Matthews

Mon 25th May 2020 11:21

Nice one....

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J J

Mon 25th May 2020 09:27

I really like the rawness of your style and how the thoughts are displayed as erratic via the structure and enjambment. Great stuff! Thank you.

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Mon 25th May 2020 08:13

Yes!! This is it. All good things shall stay forever. I liked this poem.?

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 25th May 2020 06:28

Thanks Po, and thank you Victoria, really glad you liked it.

J. x

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kimberly

Mon 25th May 2020 02:06

Thank you so much Adam, Jennifer, and Mortimer for reading and your comments. I appreciate your support. Silence is a tricky subject because it has both positive and negative connotations. Some loves flourish without a single word, the two have that special telepathic connection. Meanwhile, other loves are idle and the silence kills them even more.

Thank you to those that also liked this poem.

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Nigel Astell

Mon 25th May 2020 02:00

Thanks Po and Ruth

Thanks
Liam
itsjustmedownhere
Hilary
Stephen
Po
Ruth
Nicola
for your likes

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 25th May 2020 00:19

I agree with Po. Love it. Thanks for sharing! ❤️

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 25th May 2020 00:06

Po, you already know. I love WOL, especially because of you! You always make a point to read and leave feedback for us fellow poets. They need to put you on payroll! Thank you for being a friend. ❤️

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Mon 25th May 2020 00:02

Mortimer, even your responses are poetic. I love the dandelion analogy. Thanks for reading and sharing your insights.

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John Coopey

Sun 24th May 2020 21:21

Thanks Po. I always explain at Open Mics that I can't sing and I'm not much cop at playing either. But that I am, however, always the best looking there.

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Robert C Gaulke

Sun 24th May 2020 20:20

Cheers, Po.

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steve pottinger

Sun 24th May 2020 18:46

Thanks, both! ?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 24th May 2020 17:46

That is a delightful photo above, so full of possible symbolism! The handwriting in a notebook. Even the decoration on the little, hand-thrown pot sitting upon a rough, plank table.

Maybe I'm totally off the mark, but, honestly, that is how my eyes swept over it, and had to look again, and smile.

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Abdul Ahmad

Sun 24th May 2020 16:57

Po

I don't believe my dad ever met your dear old father?

His daily mantra was "if you can't say anything nice, say nothing."

I didn't heed the advice always. Had a knack of engaging my tongue before thinking.

With passing time I've understood the value of the wisdom offered.

Abdul

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J J

Sun 24th May 2020 16:56

Brilliant! Just so much fun.

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J J

Sun 24th May 2020 16:51

A very moving poem ending on a note of optimism.

I really like the tone and pace.

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MortimerBlooming

Sun 24th May 2020 16:28

Light and hope is always bound to be extinguished, that is why it is so important for us to vigorously fan the flames as long as we can,

Thanks for your kind words Po

Mortimer

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Hilary Walker

Sun 24th May 2020 16:19

Beautifully poignant Ian x

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Hilary Walker

Sun 24th May 2020 16:09

Thank you for all the interesting comments guys. Without going into detail this is a personal poem that I've been trying to write for some time. I think its finished now and I'm content with it.

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dorinda macdowell

Sun 24th May 2020 15:29

Thank you!

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 24th May 2020 14:50

Ha - Po...very droll. In that sense you are probably right!
I was interested in the timing of this application - can it be called
"a coronavirus coincidence"? ? - like that political ploy of releasing
"awkward" news when the public's attention is elsewhere? The
welter of inital comments "in favour" seems to indicate a lack of
much wider public awareness - including my own, about its existence
until very recently.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sun 24th May 2020 14:27

Loved the line about the ink well full of tears , great poem Nigel

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 24th May 2020 14:26

I really must stop listening to that voice in my head - I have begun to call it Po ?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sun 24th May 2020 14:25

I like this Stuart it reminds me of a time traveller explaining what Zoom is

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 24th May 2020 13:46

thanks Po - glad you liked it - I've now done 54 days straight - some have been better than others - the sadist in me wants to have a go at 2017 which I also missed - that would take me to 90 - then the OCD in me thinks I really should round it up to 100 - we'll see ?
Ian

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John Marks

Sun 24th May 2020 13:42

Thank you Cathy, Po, Mortimer & Stephen..

Regret burns. Dreams tantalise. Hope hurts.

Time is the coin of your life. It is the only coin you have, and only you can determine how it will be spent. Be careful lest you let other people spend it for you.

Carl Sandburg

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Philipos

Sun 24th May 2020 11:59

Powerfully well written piece David. Enjoyed. P ?

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Abdul Ahmad

Sun 24th May 2020 11:16

Po

Thank you your magnanimous comment on this piece. It reassures an ancient dithering mind to carry on writing.

Always appreciate your input whether positive or negative. Those two beasts serve to improve ones perceptions.

But you never make negative comments no matter how appropriate they may be!

Abdul

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