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Luis Francisco Hernandez Martin

Thu 22nd Apr 2021 17:03

This sums up the frailty of who we are. Well put together, Luisfran

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 22nd Apr 2021 16:56

Of course! Car-rear pigeons.

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keith jeffries

Thu 22nd Apr 2021 16:27

Your passion and fury are to be applauded. "Only a fool in his heart will say there is no God", is a direct quote from the book of psalms, not my quote .I hope I have not caused you too much distress. I have never called you a fool.

Keith

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Greg Freeman

Thu 22nd Apr 2021 16:18

1976? Wasn't that the year that the West Indies came to England and won the Test series 3-0, with Viv Richards and Gordon Greenidge putting our bowlers to the sword, and their pace bowling quartet inflicting serious damage on our batsmen?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Thu 22nd Apr 2021 15:18

Thank you Keith for commenting. ?

Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

This was the last of the unrequited love poems.
I'm posting another friendship / self-esteem poem tomorrow.
After that... there's a new sub-theme coming!

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Thu 22nd Apr 2021 14:19

You do have the right to believe what you want, and to say what you believe, but you don't really get to call me a fool for thinking other than you without getting a reply.

'Only a fool in his heart will say
There is no God'

I know at least this much about what the supposedly existing Gods 'can do' based on open eyes and open mind to the world around me, and the usual interpretation of what God is supposed to be in metaphysical terms, without true form.

God has never managed to prevent a wave reaching the shore yet.
There's more evidence that he can't than that he can.

God cannot alter the colour of his eyes because he doesn't have any.

God probably wouldn't understand theatre either.

God also cannot start or stop the eruption of a volcano.
Even IF he did set up the laws that govern physics he can't undo them.

I sincerely doubt that god spends his time deciding where a bird lays her eggs.
Even if he does, I don't think he's able to convey his decision to the bird easily.

God's identity is unique and given to him.

If God is white it cannot become black. And vice versa.

God doesn't have hair on his head, he doesn't have a head, he can't make a single hair etc.

Thinking that God has super powers is a dangerous illusion and self made.

God cannot alter his sexuality no more than god can fly.

God doesn't have a vote etc.

God resembles a creature wholly dependent on others (to give it any belief or definition)

God cannot by its own will add one inch to its height.

Some people may consider 'God's ideas' the best, but they can soon be brought to naught.

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keith jeffries

Thu 22nd Apr 2021 13:21

How do you know what God can do if there is no God? Do you have an alternative? I have the right to believe in God as you have the right not to. Along with diminished free speech I shall continue to proclaim my belief.

Keith

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Thu 22nd Apr 2021 12:09

Just because you are not a god does not mean that there is one.
That being said, if there is one, they also are as limited as you.
God cannot do any of the things you have mentioned either.

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d.knape

Thu 22nd Apr 2021 12:08

no company
no car on street
unless you have
instructor in back seat!
?

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d.knape

Thu 22nd Apr 2021 12:06

Oh come on now...
no comment?
all in fun.
take all with Asprin
and grain of salt.

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d.knape

Thu 22nd Apr 2021 12:05

ha. a funny response.

With all my poems
I sound the alarm
I hope they help
and do not harm,
but do not let
your heart be torn
they may lack sense
but do have charm.
?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Thu 22nd Apr 2021 12:05

Although buying a car is not just about placing a deposit,
They will have to keep up regular instalments,
That shouldn't be a problem for them.

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keith jeffries

Thu 22nd Apr 2021 08:51

A cry from the heart. A poem of anguish. Well composed.
Thank you for this
Keith

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julie callaghan

Thu 22nd Apr 2021 06:26

Thanks for the like Stephen A

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Mike Bartram

Thu 22nd Apr 2021 06:09

The and you very much, unfortunately the view is far less scenic! Just a busy main toad, but there are lots of shops and people too, so hopefully I will find things to write about!

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Greg Freeman

Wed 21st Apr 2021 23:45

One thing I have noticed - there seem to be more stories of coastal land slips in recent weeks. In the literal sense, Britain does seem to be shrinking.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 21st Apr 2021 23:42

Many effective and crafted lines in this, Peter. A slow journey around a long relationship, both warm and melancholy.

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keith jeffries

Wed 21st Apr 2021 22:10

Vividly told and a poem to invoke curiosity of mind and soul
Thank you for this
Keith

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 21st Apr 2021 19:38

Thank you Ghazala for commenting. I appreciate you hoping for her. ?

Looking back at the situation: It wasn't the final battle, and with better allies she would next time succeed.

Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

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John Coopey

Wed 21st Apr 2021 19:37

Yes, it’s all turned to ratshit for Daniel Levy and the rest. Despite the tone of my song I can see his strategy. The club are over £800m in debt, the costly new stadium is empty of supporters, so how else might he have dented the debt?
And thanks for the Likes, Stephen, Tom and Kevin.

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julie callaghan

Wed 21st Apr 2021 19:24

Good luck with the move, looking forward to reading your next chapter.

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kJ Walker

Wed 21st Apr 2021 18:16

Well said.

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julie callaghan

Wed 21st Apr 2021 18:02

Thank you for the likes Your Royal Poetess and Stephen G, also for the very kind comment.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 21st Apr 2021 17:46

A very fine poem, Julie.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 21st Apr 2021 17:40

Thanks to everyone who liked this. A guilty part of me thinks that I may still prefer upstairs!

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 21st Apr 2021 17:36

I think this is pretty good. He captures some of the elusive qualities of Prince Philip and his generation, without getting close to somebody he did not know. So he is able to steer clear of the more questionable aspects of his personality and stick to what the laureate should do, without seeming obsequious.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 21st Apr 2021 17:05

So should we throw tokens for all the different gods the world worships into a hat and then the world will piously follow the lucky winner picked out from the hat? And you'll be OK with that even if it isn't your god the whole world shall follow?

One world family under one religion isn't a call for peace, it is a call for persecution.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 21st Apr 2021 16:24

I remember my late mother doing much the same when I drove her
around. I let it go for a while but finally had to remind her who was
actually driving the b....y car! ?

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Mike Bartram

Wed 21st Apr 2021 15:38

Thanks for reading and the likes!

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Mike Bartram

Wed 21st Apr 2021 15:38

Cheers mate, footy fans need to stick together over this. Fed up with the way it's been going for years, that ESL would have been the final straw for me.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 21st Apr 2021 14:40

Yes - the latest online reports seem to confirm that it's got the boot -
so to speak! ?

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 21st Apr 2021 14:32

The views expressed are always welcome. I remain an advocate of
being proud of a history and identity that meant something to the world and regret that this seems a reason to be labelled racist
by some. And that this attitude of mind often seems to be a "one way street" in this context nowadays.
Over and out. ?

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Ferris Ty Taylor

Wed 21st Apr 2021 13:11

I think it is dangerous to compare the struggle of being labelled racist, and being a victim of racial abuse.

One involves becoming significantly less popular based on your political beliefs, and the other excludes you from life chances due to your ethnicity.

They are not comparable struggles and the suggestion that they are makes this website look although it lacks nuance and an understanding of rudimentary social science.

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julie callaghan

Wed 21st Apr 2021 12:45

? No comment

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Graham Parker

Wed 21st Apr 2021 12:32

MC, or would you prefer to be called John Bull? Just a pasing tease through my mind there.
I'm a fully paid up member of the devil's advocate club, will champion the underdog in every rat race and defend the right to speak till I have no tongue left. I'll equally defend my own origins, which I don't hold as dear as you do yours, but if I don't, I cannot support any other claiming theirs for whatever purpose it suits them.
If you bask in waters where the salts are abrahsive, don't be surprised when your skin gets burnt.
There is a space for claiming your heritage, there are ways you can convey your dissatisfaction with how you think you are being denied it, but I think you have missed the target with this piece. All you have done it thrown petrol on wood you knew was already burning.
Your comparison does not really work either. The north american natives where of one culture and background, the english are mongrels and are culturally infused. How far back and wide can you trace your pristine genetics? It is a substantial claim to say you may have such purity of heritage, no matter what you may think that is.
I grew up through the late 70's and early 80's where your sentiments, the carrying of the flag of St. George or even wearing a n English national sport shirt WAS the domain of the racist. It took many of us years to claim the English flag back for ourselves, and not be excluded by being shamed for who we are.

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keith jeffries

Wed 21st Apr 2021 12:25

Words most worthy of the verdict. All lives matter no matter whom. May the world learn the bitter lesson of prejudice and the evil it spawns.

A fine poem and thank you for this

Keith

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Your Royal Poetess

Wed 21st Apr 2021 11:54

Artwork by: Denny OW ?

https://www.instagram.com/p/CN5ypjpnqev/?igshid=vkzguiomqvki

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keith jeffries

Wed 21st Apr 2021 11:12

My masochistic tendencies revel in your poetry, that's why I return to them

Keith

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Ghazala lari

Wed 21st Apr 2021 09:40

Heartbreaking sad. Wish her lady luck?

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keith jeffries

Wed 21st Apr 2021 09:34

Beautifully crafted.
Thanks
Keith

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 21st Apr 2021 09:32

I can't think of many pure races of the world these days (perhaps the Inuit type people, although I'm not sure of that) so we are all mongrels to some extent.

What I find really saddening is that instead of trying to understand one another, we throw labels around, some of which are insidiously damaging and prevent us all from moving to a closer acknowledgement of each others lot.

To me, skin colour is the least of the problem if one is talking of racism. It's what is coming out of people's mouths that does the damage.

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julie callaghan

Wed 21st Apr 2021 09:30

Thank you Ghazala, In hindsight I think I should have just posted the last verse.

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Ghazala lari

Wed 21st Apr 2021 09:16

Last stanza is so apt in my case.

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Ghazala lari

Wed 21st Apr 2021 09:15

No job is big or small in time of need.

Degree isn't a surety of getting a white collared job.

Hugh this poem is a true reflection of today's education system and recruitment policy.

To bring a change in the system, we need to overhaul the whole system itself.

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julie callaghan

Wed 21st Apr 2021 09:14

apologies for the late thank you Keith and Holden. Thank you too Stephen G, hope things improve for you soon.

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julie callaghan

Wed 21st Apr 2021 09:12

Apologies for the late thank you, Aviva, Nigel and Holden.

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julie callaghan

Wed 21st Apr 2021 09:11

Apologies for the late thank you StephenG, Holden and Ghazala.

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julie callaghan

Wed 21st Apr 2021 09:10

Thank you all for your very kind likes for this amended poem. I felt the need to include the new turn this silly story has taken to highlight that some good may come from it.

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julie callaghan

Wed 21st Apr 2021 09:07

Thank you for your like and kind words Aviva, always appreciated. Finding it difficult to find time and inspiration recently.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 21st Apr 2021 08:26

Thank you to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

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