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Stephen Gospage

Tue 7th Jun 2022 22:09

The last verse nails it, Stephen, and quite possibly him. An excoriating poem, right on the mark!

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 7th Jun 2022 22:06

Very profound and impressive, Clare. A really good poem.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 7th Jun 2022 18:56

What a fantastic rhythmically written storyline Stephen, really enjoyed this!

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Mike Bartram

Tue 7th Jun 2022 18:53

Thank you for the reading and the nice comment x

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John Coopey

Tue 7th Jun 2022 17:25

Wasn’t it David Blunkett who made the biggest strides in making the police accountable? I recall several of my friends in the police who were horrified at the prospect.

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Tue 7th Jun 2022 17:24

' come JOIN my mind? cool poem FK-nice to see ya back-to see ya back? nice!



RC πŸ’‹

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 7th Jun 2022 17:11

May and Major. Two politicians who, respectively, put the police
service and the nation's head of state to the sword without a backward glance. And neither, like Blair, have the decency to shut up in their post political office dotage. Cynic...moi, monsieur? Ce n'est pas possible! πŸ˜‹

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 7th Jun 2022 17:07

Good one, Ruth, if slightly chilling.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 7th Jun 2022 17:05

Hope you are feeling better, Laura. Not fun. I must admit I didn't know that expression, so I have learned something today!

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 7th Jun 2022 16:59

Thank you, Carol!

And thanks to Frederick, Ruth, Holden and John for,liking.

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John Coopey

Tue 7th Jun 2022 16:56

Thankyou for your thoughts, Russell and MC. All politicians develop a thick skin,MC, but some have a smidgin of decency; May and Major spring to mind.
β€œTossing and turning”, Russell? Or was that The Ivy League?

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Ruth O'Reilly

Tue 7th Jun 2022 16:53

Thanks to everyone who liked this. NigeI i always wanted to be tomb raider I reckon! Disturbing Devine is a great line⭐ This was actually one of my alternative jubilee poems 😁😁

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 7th Jun 2022 15:27

Subservience and service somehow combine even as they appear
at odds. That is the essence of the institution of Royalty in this
country...a unifying prescne that takes us with it above the
street fighting of politics and its mundane squabbling and ego-tripping that pemeates the temporary power syndrome..

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Russell Jacklin

Tue 7th Jun 2022 15:23

I can see Frankie Valli now, just waiting to die so he can spin in his grave😁

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 7th Jun 2022 15:21

"A Man for the Four Seasons"?? 😎
Politics is a shifty business at the best of times and the present
incumbent seems well suited in terms of today's morality (or lack of it). Ask Putin or the PM of Ukraine and I have a sneaky feeling
they'd agree, but from differing perspectives.

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Laura Taylor

Tue 7th Jun 2022 13:33

Thanks all. Apologies for tardy response, been laid up with the Rona. Still laid up with it, but can type now!

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Tom

Tue 7th Jun 2022 12:37

Really enjoyed this Adam. Many great lines and has me wanting to book a flight to Greece! πŸ˜ƒ

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Russell Jacklin

Tue 7th Jun 2022 12:12

As always thank you all

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Nigel Astell

Tue 7th Jun 2022 10:40

Curse struck
Tomb raider
Slow death
Disturbing divine
Sacred Pharaoh.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 7th Jun 2022 09:30

Homage is a peculiar act and succession similarly so.
Both smack of subservience and a passivity that I find shameful.

β€˜Even the skies look up’ a great line!

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John Coopey

Tue 7th Jun 2022 08:47

Thanks, Stephen. I considered β€œThe Party’s Over” but got beaten to it by every daily newspaper headline it seems.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 7th Jun 2022 07:21

Nice one, John. Shameless is the word, unfortunately.

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John Coopey

Tue 7th Jun 2022 07:19

Or The Moody Blues β€œGo Now”, Greg.
Thanks for the Likes, Frederick, Holden, Ruth and Stephen.

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Tue 7th Jun 2022 04:53

Delightful!

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Tue 7th Jun 2022 04:50

Powerful! Especially like the last two lines.

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Tue 7th Jun 2022 02:42

This made me smile! 😁

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Greg Freeman

Mon 6th Jun 2022 23:26

Nice work, John. Perhaps another one could be to the tune of Clapton's 'Cocaine'?

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John Coopey

Mon 6th Jun 2022 23:03

Excellent stuff, Branwell.

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Holden Moncrieff

Mon 6th Jun 2022 22:33

Genuinely entertaining! 😎

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Holden Moncrieff

Mon 6th Jun 2022 22:25

A beautifully nuanced poem, Ray! 🌷

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 6th Jun 2022 22:10

Moving and heart-warming, Russell.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 6th Jun 2022 22:07

I like this, Ray. 'the sublime madness of worship' is a phrase for our times.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 6th Jun 2022 22:04

Thank you, Steve. That's very kind. No real experience at either end, so to speak. I suppose you have to be fancied to be a fancy man, and, well......

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 6th Jun 2022 21:58

Thanks, MC. What keeps the monarchy going is an ability to laugh at itself and not take the whole thing too seriously. This allows millions to treat it is as a fun occasion, unlocking their inner child. And what is wrong with that?

And thanks to Julie, Bramwell and Stephen for liking.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 6th Jun 2022 21:53

The unkindest cut of all! Well done, Bramwell.

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Russell Jacklin

Mon 6th Jun 2022 21:06

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Did not expect that punchline, Brilliant, Thank you for the smile

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Nigel Astell

Mon 6th Jun 2022 20:54

So glad both of us could play a part into making it the showpiece it was Ruth.😍

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n

Mon 6th Jun 2022 20:20

thank you for your lovely comment on my poem!! the party went exactly how I imagined, however I was rather at peace with that 😊

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 6th Jun 2022 20:02

Thank you very much Stephen, Carol, John & your, obviously, very intelligent wife! πŸ˜€
And thanks for the likes Frederick, Julie, YRP, Leon & Clare 🌈 Much appreciation for taking time to read

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 6th Jun 2022 19:46

🀣 Brilliant πŸ‘

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John Botterill

Mon 6th Jun 2022 18:12

Thanks Ruth. It was a great show and I was delighted to be part of it! You are always so kind and supportive πŸ˜€πŸ‘

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 6th Jun 2022 16:29

Upon reflection - a slight amendation to the last word.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 6th Jun 2022 16:01

Right on!
And HM (never square)
Had tea with a bear! πŸ‘

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Ruth O'Reilly

Mon 6th Jun 2022 15:24

Just wanted to say a big Thank You for taking part in my Allfm Jubilee spoken word special

If you're a poet but don't like performing your work Andy's your man!

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Ruth O'Reilly

Mon 6th Jun 2022 15:21

Just wanted to say a big Thank You for taking part in my Allfm Jubilee spoken word special. Your two thoughtful pieces were brilliant and it was a pleasure to feature you again β˜ΊπŸ“»

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Ruth O'Reilly

Mon 6th Jun 2022 15:14

Just wanted to say a big Thank You to You and Andy for taking part on my Allfm Jubilee spojen word special

Andy knows just how to perform your style of work and you know just how to write a totally original piece of work- It was a great collaboration

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 6th Jun 2022 10:41

I applaud SH for coming up with the 'expected' patriotic tribute. However I feel he's put everything in instead of keeping it about HRH. It does read a bit like an encyclopaedia!

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John Botterill

Mon 6th Jun 2022 09:47

Superb, Stephen. My wife really enjoyed this! So did I 😎

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John Botterill

Mon 6th Jun 2022 09:38

Beautiful poem, Ruth. Great show on Sunday, too, to back it up. πŸ˜€

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Mon 6th Jun 2022 07:53

Absolutely wonderful! Especially love the first stanza!

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