How true Larisa, will save up for the flight! Nice words, hope you're well Jeff x
Comment is about A Message (blog)
Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sat 8th Oct 2011 08:26
many thanks Zethembiso
for your kind,humourous comments
on my poem'Wife'
please excuse my late reply
(just back from a little holiday)
absolutely loved
your very interesting biography.
but moreso-your stunning heartwarming smile!
I know you will enjoy your time
on this site.
lots of love from
Patricia and Stefan.xx
Comment is about zethembiso mkhize (poet profile)
Original item by zethembiso mkhize
Lots of love to you, my dear Stefan and your beautiful Patricia.
Comment is about A Message (blog)
Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sat 8th Oct 2011 00:08
my condolences Larisa.
sad,beautiful words
in both the poem
and your personal statements.
I don,t think-
I know-that you are a very strong
and kind person.
lot of love
from Patricia and Stefan. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Comment is about A Message (blog)
Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska
<Deleted User> (6895)
Fri 7th Oct 2011 23:59
no mention of her having to pass
the telly controls Lynn-
next to my hand! haha!
just back tonight from
-PORTMADOG-(and not portmadoc-tut tut,me)
the-MADOG-part of the name
is more than appropriate for.....erm?
anyone you know?
tell you something-my God it was WIIINNNDDYYY!!
and you could say a little wet-but!
as the saying goes for us up'n'attem types,
it aint the bad weather-its the bad clothing!
expect a form of late postcard on WOL
in the near future.sorry no stick of rock-
awwwww.
hope yer,v been onkydory dearie
seeya soon.
lots of it
for you from
uz.xx
Comment is about Domestic Goddess (blog)
Original item by Lynn Dye
great poem, like rachel bond stops moaning on and makes more money than her brother bond. not gonna happen. x
Comment is about It Just Ain't Gonna Happen!! (blog)
Original item by Jeffarama!
are you interested in this mario merz thing..i working on something to do with the spirit of resistence of people post war WW11. looking at survival tactics as an idea and the development to society today....would need to develop it.?
Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)
Original item by Laura Taylor
<Deleted User> (7212)
Fri 7th Oct 2011 22:44
Overkill... suicide bombers... Love it Ray.
GSOH... oh gosh, I'll get over this dyslkisa if it likls me.
Clean & Discreet
& up my street...
(I think one knows more than is good for one)
I was going to say that the first stanza could stand alone... but not without any legs it couldnae...
Many Thanks. B (GSOH)
Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)
Original item by Lynn Dye
<Deleted User> (7212)
Fri 7th Oct 2011 22:43
Overkill... suicide bombers... Love it Ray.
GSOH... oh gosh, I'll get over this dyslkisa if it likls me.
Clean & Discreet
& up my street...
(I think one knows more than is good for one)
I was going to say that the first stanza could stand alone... but not without any legs it couldnae...
Many Thanks. B (GSOH)
Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)
Original item by Laura Taylor
I really like all this speculation, Ann, I hope he is happy too...xx
Comment is about "The last remaining Mara hare . . . " (blog)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
This is so true and not just words. When my husband was dying at the age of 54 because of leukemia there were really true friends who have said: "I am coming!'
Comment is about A Message (blog)
Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska
Hello Terry, yet another good poem from you. Although your poems seem short, there is a lot they say, and in the main I can identify with them. I like in this one the first line of the 3rd verse 'no magic man, no smile, no sinner in the palm of your hand' a nice line.
Best wishes
mike
Comment is about And After (blog)
<Deleted User> (9734)
Fri 7th Oct 2011 19:50
WHEN THE WORLD STOOD STILL.. Such heart-felt words Lynn.. So much passion in those words.
Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)
Original item by Lynn Dye
Lynn! My dearest friend! Thank you so much for the comment on "A La Larissa Perfume". I can only resume: Please, do me a favor and ...go on showing me my mistakes or write your suggestions on this or that verse.
Love, hugs and warmest wishes,
Larissa (Laura, Lora, Lara)
PS And now I have a nick name, which was given to me by Stefan - Do you know it? - odessagirl
Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)
Original item by Lynn Dye
A true friend is not the one who holds your hand, but the one who will never let it go.
Comment is about A Message (blog)
Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska
I did try and read about the later Roman empire, David, both Rome and Constantinople, but became became bewildered by the number of assassinated emperors. Just when I was getting interested in one he was bumped off. It seems to have been the only way of disposing of them.
Comment is about David Cooke (poet profile)
Original item by David Cooke
A lovely description of somebody who I wish would visit my life occasionally! I do love poems with specific people/places/events. More personal and interesting.
Comment is about A Poem for Bernard (blog)
Original item by STEVE RUDD
I hoped 'For the Record' my appeal to the journalist in you, Greg. Egalabulus was certainly a dodgy emperor but also had a very bad press. I read this poem at a reading in Grimsby last night thinking I'd found a really obscure topic, but a poet friend of mine said that someone has just brought out a biography about him(Egalabulus, that it!). I looked on Amazon and there are actually two that have just come out. Quite an achievement when The Praetorian Guards bumped him off by the time he was 18!
Comment is about Greg Freeman (poet profile)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Clever use of words and rhyme. I like it. Was it posted a day early?
Dave
Comment is about NPD (blog)
Original item by Mark Mr T Thompson
You asking?
Comment is about Shortlist (blog)
What about a long, hard, comfortable screw up against a wall?
Comment is about Shortlist (blog)
Good poem, Nima, I like this, especially the final message that it is the tormentor that is the clown. Enjoyed your sample poems too.
Comment is about Nameless by Nima Stone (blog)
Sawubona Zethembiso. Wemukelekili to Write Out Loud. Ngiyabonga Kakhulu for the comments you made on Fathers 4 Justice. It is good to know that some people can look upon objectively and realize that yes, Men do after all have hearts. There is difficulty in the UK for children at the moment. And men are being given the blame for all societies ills.
I hope that you enjoy the site, and that your writings go from strength to strength.
Further, Black is beautiful! : )))
My wife is from Durban, a strong Zulu woman who knows how to (fairly), keep me in place.
I have visited Africa several times and know her to be a beautiful continent, I wish more people realized that.
One love Zethembiso, i believe in it. I believe in ubuntu.
Best wishes
Mike
x
Comment is about zethembiso mkhize (poet profile)
Original item by zethembiso mkhize
Nice poem, good rhythm, which is difficult in something fairly long. I know not why "pickles, home-made" rather than home-made pickles.Is it over the pass? Not "around the pass"?
Comment is about A Poem for Bernard (blog)
Original item by STEVE RUDD
Thanks Kath
Been missing your words around the place...any new pieces on the go? :)
Comment is about Kath Hewitt (poet profile)
Original item by Kath Hewitt
hi left you a note on my latest poem x
looking forward to your next poem.
would you be able to write me one to order? im thinking of including some of your words with my art??
Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)
Original item by Laura Taylor
Thanks all - and very funny Rach, I did as it goes ;p
Comment is about Clear Blue Air (blog)
Original item by Laura Taylor
Hi Laura;
Aye - if all goes to plan will be at tyldesley in a few weeks time (No a clue yet what I am going to read however currently). Hope to see you there xx
Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)
Original item by Laura Taylor
Hi Kath;
on the jobs front - not much sadly.. My job is due to finish off soon and I ain't looking forward to what comes next.. Certainly there isn't much out there - I keep getting agencies offering me jobs on hours and shifts I simply ain't willing to do.. x
Comment is about Kath Hewitt (poet profile)
Original item by Kath Hewitt
Hi Lynn - glad you like the end of summer IV - has been a interesting and changing series for me to do this and hopefully will reflect in what comes next and you are correct on the typo.. it should be 'necessary' - i'll have to get it amended.. thanks again - Andy N x
Comment is about Lynn Dye (poet profile)
Original item by Lynn Dye
Hi Lynn - glad you like this - it is a typo.. it should be 'necessary' - i'll have to get it amended.. x
Comment is about The End of Summer (IV) (blog)
Original item by Andy N
Thx for the comment on the 9/11 Haikus.
My Best
Chris
Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)
Original item by Isobel
Thx for the comments on the 9/11 poem Jeff.
My Best
Chris
Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)
Original item by Jeffarama!
Thx for the comments and for reading
My Best
Chris
Comment is about 9/11 (blog)
i like it.. it does convey the feeling well the incessant nature of disruption. cant help feeling the inherent contradiction of writing a poem like this..why not go out and stop going on, get the wind in your hair or something, im talking here ;)
i believe the secrets of meditation can only be found in practice, but the simplicity of the colour blue in this poem can be a release x
Comment is about Clear Blue Air (blog)
Original item by Laura Taylor
You have captured the feeling well... So annoying - isn't it?!
'To talk is to torture
You butcher my peace'
When I go to the beach... : )
'just silence and sunshine
and wind in my hair
and purity found in the clear blue air'
Comment is about Clear Blue Air (blog)
Original item by Laura Taylor
Chris
Missed this....very true
Once, as delegate in the seventies in Hungary, we boned the student interpreter to give us the lowdown on the revolution.
As he gave the official version loudly (for fear of a mike) his hand and facial gestures gave one of the most hilarious de-bunking performances of his words that I have ever seen....The people were never completely fooled by the lies.
Comment is about Animals (blog)
I am so chuffed! It was a great night, lovely atmosphere and loads of people turned up. I think twelve people read, poetry and prose, and some songs too. Loads of friendly nattering in the interval, a lovely venue. Here's to the next one (Nov 1st) and a huge thank you to all who took part. You are all stars in my book!
Review is about Poetry Mine on 4 Oct 2011 (event)
Yes, somtimes it is just so much better to be alone! xx
Comment is about Clear Blue Air (blog)
Original item by Laura Taylor
You know what they say, Anne:
Hare today, gone...?
How`d your gig go?
Comment is about "The last remaining Mara hare . . . " (blog)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
A sort of "found" poem. Much info taken from the Newquay Zoo newsletter. Visited Newquay Zoo today - and I did miss the Mara hare. So there!! :)
Comment is about "The last remaining Mara hare . . . " (blog)
Original item by Ann Foxglove
This has a nice gallop to it - broken up a bit by the 'going on and on and on and on' bit. Perhaps that is the effect you were after. I get the feeling of a horse champing at the bit to get away. Won't go on anymore ;-) x
Comment is about Clear Blue Air (blog)
Original item by Laura Taylor
Hi Andy - thanks for your note on Hasta. Aye, will be seeing you soon at Tyldesley if you're going? Take care x
Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)
Original item by Andy N
Thank you Dave and Andy for your kind comments.. xx
Comment is about Old Shoe Box (blog)
Original item by Lynn Dye
Jeff Dawson
Sat 8th Oct 2011 09:02
Great stuff Laura, not read your stuff for a while (or many others for that matter, always up to sumat!). Anyway, this is excellent and can imagine the rhythm you do it as I read, if you know what I mean!
Look forward to seeing you at tyldesley, be good to hear this or any for that matter, your performance poetry is top notch! Jeff X
Comment is about Clear Blue Air (blog)
Original item by Laura Taylor