C?L, Congratulations, worthy winner of POTW. Another crafted, creative and cheeky ? piece of writing from that inventive mine of a mind of yours.

Well done my friend, richly deserved.

Paul

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

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I've spent the weekend on and off reading the letters of Sylvia Plath to Ted Hughes and wonder if you have too.

This is so similarly redolent of her totally consumed love for TH to an almost suicidal degree (sadly prophetic for her).

I hope this is autobiographical Alexandra. To be able to be bursting with this sort of fervour is a wonderful state.

The analogy of cradling a bomb is excellent.

* well done on getting a jazz poem into the chosen list

Comment is about I see why love is red. (blog)

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excellent Ray and the backing vocals by birds and cars add an almost perfect backdrop to the scene. All that's missing is a distant toot toot of a steam train as it disappears into the distance at the end of the last line. Ha, the last line. I'll get my axe!
Col.

Comment is about THE VIADUCT (blog)

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nice one Ian. I haven't kept up with the finer technological advances of the latest iPhone but it seems to me whatever they are doesn't justify the enormous price tag to upgrade. I would be tempted to add 'slightly' before 'slicker' if only to piss the makers off!

I like the way you have 'tackled' the subject matter (excuse the pun). It reminds me also of a line from a Patrick Fitzgerald song: 'me and you are just little fishes swimming in a rising tide - small fry'.

Col.

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thank you Stu, those are very kind and generous words indeed. All the best to you. Col.

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Hi Ray thanks for your comments. You raise a few big questions there. What is and how do you define conscious.What is life,what happens after we die. So many different answered and opinions are out there.
More controversy. So what’s the answer? Google or Wickapiedia ?
Thanks,Des

Comment is about Thanks Mom (blog)

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i was set into the picture after the first paragraph. nicely written!

Comment is about Forgetting the air (blog)

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thanks for commenting on 'the devil don't own me' MC - working on the tune to go with it for future recording
Ian

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Woo hoo !
#HappyHappyHappy
: )

Comment is about Marsden's Poster Poems competition - here are the winners! (article)

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Love this. Really powerful.

Comment is about Bursting at the seams (blog)

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It is an original and brave poem that puts consciousness there in the womb Desmond and as Colin says that sparks strong feelings. I often wonder about previous lives and the continuance of spirit experience so entailed.

Ray

Comment is about Thanks Mom (blog)

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LIke the puns etc Col. Massive difference in meanings goes to show how variable our language can be. This only happened the other day!

Thanks Hannah. I get talking so easily to people that my days are always full of chat!

Mark, it is so important we keep up human interaction - I see supermarkets are beginning to phase out tills in favour of self checkouts. One more link closing off. Thanks folks for the likes too.

Ray

Comment is about BUYING A CARPET (blog)

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Fantastic poem !

Thank you for your comment on my poem. Really appreciated.

Hannah

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Original item by Chakraj

Autumn evokes many feelings. Enjoyed this poem very much.

Thank you for your comment on my poem.

Comment is about LEAVES AND LIVES (blog)

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Atmospheric and appealing in equal measure.

Comment is about 'The boys stroke their new muscles, the girls sweeten their lips' (article)

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I've still got my 45rpm disc of Telstar!
This is a parallel universe of the soaps on TV. Trivia
taken seriously because it can matter for the way we
measure and value our connection with others in this
funny old life.
Recently, I bought a used car and the salesman and I
found ourselves talking about everything but the car!
But he made a sale and I left with a smile from common
interests visited in the process.

Comment is about BUYING A CARPET (blog)

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This is very well thought out indeed. I would shorten the last line though, it looks to wordy compared to how succinct the rest of the work is.

Good work.

Graham

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a fine choice and you come across as a genuinely caring bloke who just loves writing and reading. and lets face it, the world could do with a few more of them.

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

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Thank you Colin for your comments. I can imagine that your prose night was a very emotive, it is a very controversial subject whether to allow terminations or not. I belive ultimately a woman has the right to choose. But as you say it is a very emotive issue.
As for saying my poem makes you think of Kate Bush's 'Breathing' I take that as a great compliment, she is one of my favorite artists. Thanks, Des.

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well done to everyone - quite a few names I recognise there - look forward to seeing some pictures of the poem posters.

Comment is about Marsden's Poster Poems competition - here are the winners! (article)

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I loved this one right from 'a rock doesn't in the river run'

Comment is about A Poem in Progress (blog)

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I don't know why I still like this but I do

Comment is about Charlie Clark (blog)

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love those last three lines NS. makes me want to drive off into the sunset on an adventure...

Comment is about The Eye Of The Storm (blog)

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I was listening to a live reading of a piece of prose last night given by two people - one read the voice of the mother who was waiting to receive the morning after pill and the other read the voice of the unborn child who also lamented the loss of previously terminated siblings. It was very effective and emotive. As is yours Desmond but for obviously different reasons. I can't help but think also of Kate Bush's 'Breathing'. Thanks for posting. All the best, Colin.

Comment is about Thanks Mom (blog)

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thank you Mr Old / New / Warn Out Shoes - I do love the way your name is so interchangeable (depending on your mood?) Buttocks and bacon? You make me sound like I'm a cannibal! Hope all is well in your neck of the woods. All the best, Col.

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

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awesome and gave a good smile

Comment is about A Poem in Progress (blog)

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Ooops, what I meant is "The theme is close to my heart since it lifts human bonding..."

Comment is about I Give My Soul to You (blog)

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I love this Kay Li.

The theme is lose to my heart since it lifts human boding and intimacy to a higher plane. I'd like to see some more.
It flows sweetly too. Thank you so much.

Raj

Comment is about I Give My Soul to You (blog)

Original item by Kay Li Su

Colin, Colin, Colin, I really don't know what to say. but you are a pretty swell dude. and if I knew anything about real poetry, I'd critique the hell out or you right now. you always strike the feeling in your work. and on a personal note; I have always said the two best things in life are boobs and bacon. But in your case it looks like it's buttocks and bacon.

Write on brother

Warn Out Shoes, OUT!

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

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Like the T-shirt, Nigel - they could catch on!

Comment is about Write Out Loud Stockport's open mic away day - in Marple (article)

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The Journey

A young writer starts a journey
towards a dream to come true
getting her very own book published

Rain or shine snow or hurricane
W O L poets on Marple open mic
beer and poetry what a night!

Well done Linda and you too Nicola with your new book!

Comment is about Write Out Loud Stockport's open mic away day - in Marple (article)

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I thought this started off as a nice night time stroll, then boom, surprise. I enjoyed this very much. Thank You.

Comment is about INHALE/EXHALE (blog)

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Thanks Stu and Karen.

Stu - you disgust me ?

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I like the way this pings and flips between the first and last who's. Good stuff. Life certainly can be like a game of pinball some days. Col.

Comment is about (blog)

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as seen through the eyes of the poet

Comment is about kuro silica (09/24/2017) (blog)

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excellent

Comment is about A Hunger (blog)

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Harry,
Benny WAS guilty of crimes against entertainment.

Comment is about CROSSROADS MOTEL (blog)

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Thank you all very much for your kind words. I hadn't realised I'd written so much in answer to the questions - it seemed less in the email but more on here!

Graham, I thought a lot about knickers and panties and decided I liked them both equally. Just saying knickers and panties out loud makes me giggle. I know I should grow up!

Jonathan, I like the comparison. And I like British social dramas. I think Fish Tank fits into that category well enough.

Col.

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

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John, John!
That huge piece of graffiti on the wall just outside of Euston station...`BENNY IS INNOCENT`... was it you?

Comment is about CROSSROADS MOTEL (blog)

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Oh! By the way, in V1 I would have said knickers not panties, we're British ?

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

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Colin, we had visitors last weekend and I missed this as it got buried quickly in the prolific blog section in just a couple of days. Thank goodness POTW has pulled it out for further appraisal.

The really clever bit in this is how it passes back and forth from narration into personal involvement.

As usual you've crept up on a subject and kidnapped it.

Great work

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

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A sense of justice with this choice, as you have a pioneering quality that always brings an edge to your work - there must be peaks Col. Congratulations. I am so chuffed about the live reading - while you draw breath in Laugharne I'll be in Waterstones in Guildford fanning the flames of enthusiasm over a hot coffee!

All the very best to you. Ray

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

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WE all learn some things the hard way. you won't have to wait for the next life Shaaklera,to be wise. you are wiser now.

Comment is about Still (blog)

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congratulations Colin on POTW. no-one deserves it more than you, not only for the great work that you post, but also the way that you encourage others with your well thought out comments.
in your Q&A you talk about the WOL community. I like to think that that is what we are, but only because of the generosity of yourself and others like you.
thanks Kevin

Comment is about 'At the sink' by Colin Hill is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)

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Thank you Mark for your exhaustive resume to fulfil my curiosity. That is certainly a massive expansion financially into stricken territories - the expression "by the balls" comes to mind re the American "investing" military hardware and personnel and its consequences. A most interesting and enlightening account thank you again. To think it only took a cyanide pill and one bullet to put paid to the man that started all that.
Ray

Comment is about JUDGEMENT DAY (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Brilliant !

Comment is about Scrumping Arundel (blog)

Original item by Andy N

Love this poem, love through the seasons and the realization of love.

Thank you for your comment on my poem Shadows. Very much appreciated.

Comment is about From Friendship to Love (V) (blog)

Original item by Andy N

It's great when people open up and tell you about themselves. I love all the detail.

Thank you for your comment on my poem Shadows, really appreciated.

Comment is about BUYING A CARPET (blog)

Original item by ray pool

Thank you for your message to me.

Comment is about Puerto Rico Puerto Rico (blog)

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Congratulations Colin,on poem of the week. You do write really good poetry and have been an encouragement to me.I appreciate your comments as I am sure many others do. ?

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