A definite dash of Ogden Nash!
Yeah - get out more. Just as long as it's not too close to me! ?
Comment is about LOCK-DOWN (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Provocative positioning destined to obtain a response.. That said....
Poetry can be - without being flip,
A platform for an ego trip.
Comment is about A MAN LIKE ME (blog)
Original item by ray pool
But -
Cows are in a right old muddle
Gathered together in a huddle;
Soft eyes pained and gently pleading
For relief from milkies'' finger-kneading
While sheep and sheep dogs
Are clearly confused,
Over-looked and under-used;
No human hand to offer order
To woolly wanderers and collies (border) ?.
Comment is about Said the Lion to the Pig (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Philipos
Wed 6th May 2020 20:42
How tragic Jennifer - some situations are inexplicably difficult to handle. Blessings to the responders having to deal with it - some memories never go away. Blessings. P
Comment is about Loved to Death (blog)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
<Deleted User> (18118)
Wed 6th May 2020 20:03
A very welcome mental footprint.
Hannah
Comment is about A MAN LIKE ME (blog)
Original item by ray pool
<Deleted User> (18118)
Wed 6th May 2020 19:59
This is great !
The other side of the Virus, the cleaner air, the safer animals.
Really enjoyed this.
Hannah
Comment is about Said the Lion to the Pig (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
<Deleted User> (18118)
Wed 6th May 2020 19:56
Brilliantly described.
They see it all, when seeing very little.
Hannah
Comment is about Doctor's Appointment (blog)
Original item by d.knape
<Deleted User> (18118)
Wed 6th May 2020 19:50
The tension builds in this poem in such a way that you know something is going to happen. Something, unexpected, yet suspected.
Tragic, sadly these things do happen.
A memorable one.
Hannah
Comment is about Loved to Death (blog)
Original item by Jennifer Malden
Wed 6th May 2020 15:28
Thank you Poemagraphic.Po.
Comment is about Goal directed pursuit (blog)
Original item by Jasmine k.
Who ate all the pies? No one really cares now, do they? I have to confess that I'm not missing it as much as I thought I would.
Comment is about Pie and Pint Cancelled (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Lovely fusion of nostalgia, regret and mortality. One of your finest, MC. One of the Empire’s greatest gifts to the world. ( Cricket, that is. Not you).?
Comment is about LEATHER ON WILLOW (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
True, true Nigel. Funny times with the world at the moment. Thanks for the comment buddy.
Thanks also to Itsjustmedownhere and Alive_sunflower for the likes. I almost didn't share this poem for reasons I am sure you can work out for yourself.
Comment is about Temporary Freedom (blog)
Original item by Andy N
Great poem for now, when we are all stressed and at least worried if not downright frightened. Warm and comforting
Jennifer
Comment is about Peace and Love (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
Lovely poem, the title really does bring back the scent of mown grass and the click of the ball on the bat. Must confess used to go to cricket matches to please a boyfriend, and also for the teas!
Liked this. Jennifer
Comment is about LEATHER ON WILLOW (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Short and to the point. The important thing is to realise why they always do this! Jennifer
Comment is about Oh Ego (blog)
Original item by Emer Ní Chorra
Do I take it you're saying that posting on WOL is the a last resort for those who have never been anything, Ray? Liked this anyway!!!!
Jennifer
Comment is about A MAN LIKE ME (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Lovely dry humour! Really enjoyable
Jennifer
Comment is about Digging (blog)
Original item by simon lucan
Sad, but we all have /know someone like this. Agree with Ray that the layout is very clever and makes us almost participate in the growing dismay. Great writing.
Jennifer
Comment is about Some Words (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
Philipos
Wed 6th May 2020 13:23
John - Bands in the Mall - maybe one day eh? Thanks. P
Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)
Original item by John Coopey
Speaks volumes Ian. Very moving I must say. The layout looks right and highlights the disconnection . The whole experience such a minefield and has to be borne with stoicism and care.
Ray
Comment is about Some Words (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
Wed 6th May 2020 13:20
think Facebook, Mark Zuckenberg,
Imperial highness
controlling all thought and speech.
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
You is smart, you is kind, you is important
Comment is about Who Am I? (blog)
Original item by Jordyn Elizabeth
Well done putting together two of my favorite pastimes. Thanks for sharing this.
Comment is about Digging (blog)
Original item by simon lucan
Glad you liked it Hannah - I guess everyone has their favourite beach/sea spot ? somewhere to wind down in the sun and just let the waves roll in ? thanks for commenting
Ian
PS - thanks to everyone for the 'likes' I appreciate it
Comment is about Third Beach (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
Philipos
Wed 6th May 2020 11:51
Simon, interesting juxta positioning of events - enjoyed. I think many old ruins hereabouts may thank WOL for a sense of escapism during this prolonged period of self isolation and lockdown. ?
Comment is about Digging (blog)
Original item by simon lucan
Lovely piece?
You are unique, carefully constructed
You are a wonder,many dare to explore
You are a dreamer, a visionary
Most of all you are the authentic you, so live your best
Comment is about Who Am I? (blog)
Original item by Jordyn Elizabeth
Such a beautiful piece, well expressed. ❤️
Comment is about Who Am I? (blog)
Original item by Jordyn Elizabeth
<Deleted User> (18118)
Wed 6th May 2020 09:46
A beautiful poem, filled with hope and grace.
Hannah
Comment is about Still Believe in Love (blog)
Original item by Michael Triandam
Tear-ups are interesting Jordyn
With you it is hard, not with me
It must be to do with emotion states
Each person tears differently....
Comment is about Renee By A Thread (blog)
Original item by Tom
It came to me in the 3rd week, Don. But a great rhyme is worth waiting for.
And thanks for the Like, Itsjustme.
Comment is about LOCK-DOWN (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
<Deleted User> (24283)
Wed 6th May 2020 06:04
Motivating and convincing!! Right on time when needed the most. ?
Comment is about Clutter (blog)
Original item by Mocosy
<Deleted User> (24283)
Wed 6th May 2020 05:30
You are a free soul on a journey safe
Holding your God's hand in perfect way
You are a free bird, flying your way
Into the sky of happiness and hope everyday
You are truth, honesty, you are a perfect blend of purity
You have the answers true, stop looking for clue
Who are you, a pure soul free from worldly attractions
Comment is about Who Am I? (blog)
Original item by Jordyn Elizabeth
Clouds capture sun
stars capture moon
together they spin
around the earth.
Comment is about Budding Romance (blog)
Original item by Alive_sunflower
Wow. This was really good. Although you made me tear up (which is hard to do). Well done!
-J
Comment is about Renee By A Thread (blog)
Original item by Tom
Yes Tom, I usually don't like long poems but this well-crafted one held me to the end. It was so good. The repeating 'hung by a thread and leaving soon' was also used to good effect......
Was Renee someone you know or a made-up name?
Comment is about Renee By A Thread (blog)
Original item by Tom
I am proud of you John. You have learned to make a 3-liner and rhyme 'such' with 'much' in all your weeks of lockdown.
?
Comment is about LOCK-DOWN (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Don't worry Ray, your mental
Chain is still on, firm
There might be little surface rust
But least it still can turn
Your mental chain has done you proud
These verses? perfect rhyme
Await with interest, this and that
On screen, in rhyme, in time
Can I suggest looking at one of the sprockets? ...capital O for Out. Don't fret about it's inability to cursive 'Write'
Just keep it well oiled and you'll be fine.....
?
Comment is about A MAN LIKE ME (blog)
Original item by ray pool
I think you’re doing yourself down here Ray.
Comment is about A MAN LIKE ME (blog)
Original item by ray pool
This is an empathic confession of unconditional love.
Enjoyed it.
Comment is about Saying i love you (blog)
Original item by Mocosy
All a facade, Kev, and I like it in my bubble, Brian.
And thanks for the Like, Moon.girl.
Comment is about LOCK-DOWN (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
<Deleted User> (18980)
Tue 5th May 2020 20:24
You've hit the nail squarely on the head Ray i.e. bike riders are destined to be under-achievers.
Comment is about A MAN LIKE ME (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Hi Sophie,
Many thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts on my work. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed, 'yellow, green iris.' I wanted that poem to inspire hope and remind others that we all have the power to heal from trauma and the fire inside us to continue to fight.
I enjoyed reading your poems. 'In the shower' is very beautiful.. I am a sucker for romantic poetry. ❤️??
Keep writing.
Emer
Comment is about Sophie (poet profile)
Original item by Sophie
Indeed M. C. Just because we like somebody, it doesn't mean that the feeling will be mutual.
A life lesson that some unfortunately will never handle or comprehend.
Comment is about Oh Ego (blog)
Original item by Emer Ní Chorra
<Deleted User> (18980)
Tue 5th May 2020 19:18
You tell porkies John. You are a great socialiser. We're all missing your company
Comment is about LOCK-DOWN (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
<Deleted User> (18118)
Tue 5th May 2020 18:44
I love this poem because I adore the sea and it evokes beautiful images.
Hannah
Comment is about Third Beach (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
<Deleted User> (18118)
Tue 5th May 2020 18:39
Important message about censorship.
Thought provoking.
Hannah
Comment is about No Comment (blog)
Original item by d.knape
<Deleted User> (18118)
Tue 5th May 2020 18:37
Tragic.
No scream should go unanswered.
Reminds me of something I heard about New York.
Someone cried out for help and everyone assumed someone else would respond and no one did.
Good writing Don.
Hannah
Comment is about She Screamed for Help but you did Nothing (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Don Matthews
Wed 6th May 2020 23:51
Hannah yes I like your comment
Roar!...Roar! ...Roar!
Please keep reading poet Don
More...more...more
?
Yours is coming MC
Comment is about Said the Lion to the Pig (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews