I love the way you have captured the essence of music so beautifully in words here Keith, I can really 'hear' your passion through this piece.
Comment is about An Ancient Language (blog)
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Many Thanks Keith glad you enjoyed this piece, I appreciate you reading it.
Good work Hugh, I'm happy that I got you writing another poem.
You too Nigel Thanks for your poem& kind words on my comments page.
Vautaw Thank you so much for reading, that was exactly my intention with this poem- to uplift.
Comment is about Hope (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
eight forty.?.. awfully cheap for 2 pints and a JD and Coke! Where is this bar...
Comment is about Ordering drinks in a night club (blog)
Original item by Andrew Mark Bedell
Lisa B I do believe
The 'ievals were particular
Where they did their this and thats
While seated perpendicular
Hence the spotless loos....?
Comment is about Festival toilets (blog)
Original item by Andrew Mark Bedell
An intense moment perfectly and beautifully captured, really enjoyed this Keith. Thanks for sharing.
Comment is about A Moment in Time (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
I was recently at the medieval fair and the toilets were surprisingly very clean. What a relief...!
Comment is about Festival toilets (blog)
Original item by Andrew Mark Bedell
I really enjoy the rhythm of this, nicely done.
Comment is about Rubies and Diamonds (blog)
Original item by Vicky R.
Porta-potties I do love
When piss need to emit
Another urge, oh bugger me
I run for pottie-shit
Oh shit this porta smells like shit
(Cos that's its purpose see?)
This ditty I have gotta stop
I gotta run for pee
Shit! queue's a mile long.....?
Comment is about Festival toilets (blog)
Original item by Andrew Mark Bedell
<Deleted User> (18980)
Wed 18th Sep 2019 07:11
Why don't the beer pumps feed directly to the loos and cut out the middle man?
Comment is about Festival toilets (blog)
Original item by Andrew Mark Bedell
<Deleted User> (18980)
Wed 18th Sep 2019 07:08
Different format for you Trev, but still quality.
Comment is about Conflicted (blog)
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Frances Macaulay Forde
Wed 18th Sep 2019 04:33
I feel the same way... although I didn't hear them in the womb.
Comment is about Songs From The Womb (blog)
Original item by Tom
Rain and beers and love. Doesn't get much better. Thanks for sharing
Comment is about A Moment in Time (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
I get it. To risk a friendship for romance is a tough decision. Keep writing, the answer will reveal itself to you!
Comment is about Do I tell her (blog)
Original item by Daniel Amici
Thank you for sharing this beautiful uplifting poem Ruth❣️
Comment is about Hope (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
Beautiful truth❣️
Comment is about YOU'RE VISITOR - ALEXIS KARPOUZOS (blog)
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Love this Tom. Music has always spoke to me too. From the womb, finding you. Such a beautiful visual. Thank you for sharing.
Comment is about Songs From The Womb (blog)
Original item by Tom
Thank you Rose, Don, and Adam. I appreciate you reading and your feedback. Silence is like our health, something we take for granted until it goes away. Then it’s all we can think about until we get it back. With all the noise of our day, I bask in stretches of silence. It revives me!
Comment is about Silent Light (blog)
Original item by Vautaw
Tell her...or keep it in as long as you can stand it. I waited 10 years before I told my best friend how I felt about her. I had reached the point where the heartache of keeping it in was killing me more than the risk of rejection/loss. My “Fuck Fear” blog entry recounts the moment I decided to go for it! ?
Comment is about Do I tell her (blog)
Original item by Daniel Amici
Keith,
Absolutely beautiful. I find language to be wonderful. We do all speak the same language and all one has to do is listen to understand. Music is the heart and soul of our beings. From the first 'human' to bang a stick on a log. It speaks and connects like no other. Thank you for sharing this.
Lisa
Comment is about An Ancient Language (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Hi Vautaw, thanks so much for your comment on Fingerprints. I've only been on the receiving end of a poem once (as far as I know) and it's quite a special feeling. ? Tx
Comment is about Vautaw (poet profile)
Original item by Vautaw
You're welcome Frederick. And thanks for the tip, I'll have to try that auto-reader thing in future ?
Comment is about Red Brick Keshner (poet profile)
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In my experience, it's the things I didn't do I regret the most... a cliché, I know but also true. ?
Comment is about Do I tell her (blog)
Original item by Daniel Amici
Thank you so much for the lovely words. You're are generous. Thank you again!
Comment is about YOU CAME IN TO THIS WORLD: ALEXIS KARPOUZOS (blog)
Original item by alexis karpouzos
As a Spiritual Director I am fascinated by your profile and shall keep abreast of your poems. Please write more.
Thank you
Keith
Comment is about alexis karpouzos (poet profile)
Original item by alexis karpouzos
Your poem is a free gift, yet how sad that so few people realise it. A poem to behold and thank you for it.
Keith
Comment is about YOU CAME IN TO THIS WORLD: ALEXIS KARPOUZOS (blog)
Original item by alexis karpouzos
Got a laugh from me on this one, Andrew! I think we all can relate to the dreaded "porta-potties" as we call them in the states.
Comment is about Festival toilets (blog)
Original item by Andrew Mark Bedell
Then pants get tight
and scales take fright.
High as a kite -
meatballs tonight!
I prefer my meatballs disassembled though. ?
Comment is about Meatballs Tonight (blog)
Original item by d.knape
It seems you like
These things called balls
Meat-type that is
When night-time it calls.....
Comment is about Meatballs Tonight (blog)
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Those aliens haven't returned your like button yet Nigel?
Wot's this got to do with the poem Don?....
Comment is about Never Closed Always Open (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Oh dear. You got problems......
I don't like the sound of that.
Comment is about Moody Blue (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
My like button is on an alien spacecraft somewhere in the universe
Comment is about Moody Blue (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Tue 17th Sep 2019 14:29
Each colour shines
like your poem
inside a rainbow of promise.
Comment is about Hope (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
Thanks Ruth and thanks Don
My brother Ruth is a massive fan and has all their records in his collection.
Comment is about Never Closed Always Open (blog)
Original item by Nigel Astell
Tue 17th Sep 2019 13:44
All wrapped up in spaghetti & meatballs! ?
Comment is about Meatballs Tonight (blog)
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<Deleted User> (9882)
Tue 17th Sep 2019 12:45
The end of the rainbow
At the end of the rainbow there is a pot full of hope,
Head for it swiftly if you have a problem to cope.
Let the sun in your life shine bright,
The end of the rainbow will put things right.
Inspired by your poem full of hope
Comment is about Hope (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
Ruth,
a poem easily read yet with a message that needs to be clearly heard.
Thanks
Keith
Comment is about Hope (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
Chrystel,
A poem of a few but very true words.
Thank you for this
Keith
Comment is about IRREPLACEABLE (blog)
Original item by Chrystel Roberts
<Deleted User> (22180)
Tue 17th Sep 2019 11:29
I like this Don, count me in.
Comment is about But Am I Crazy ? (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Don't wanna be lazy
And disappoint Ruth
Will train up my crazy
For un-lazy proof ?
Comment is about But Am I Crazy ? (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
It would be sheer laziness
Not let your assumed craziness
Develop and create
At the rate
It does?
Comment is about But Am I Crazy ? (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Ruth O'Reilly
Wed 18th Sep 2019 11:14
Ha,ha that conjured up some great visuals Hugh?
Comment is about No chicks at the flicks ! (blog)
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