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Tom

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 16:40

This is such a beautiful and nakedly honest reflection of a relationship. My favourite poem in some time (even if I am a year late to it). P.S. I now feel like I need a poem about the 2014 incident... Sounds traumatic to say the least.

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kimberly

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 16:12

Updated with audio

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 16:04

Hi Brian - always good to hear from you. Your experience of the
hurricane season in your neck of the woods is recognised so thanks
for the comment. In this particular instance, what is not being said
seems as relevant as that which we hear with such stridency. As for your question,
my blogs on this site will suffice for me as far as "publication" is concerned.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 14:22

Wings of love
start to flutter
two heartbeats fly
into each other.

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Do.RoThy

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 11:57

Best of luck!! Hope you get many members yo join your club!! ?

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d.knape

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 11:19

Do not show to your wife! or mine! ?

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kealan coady

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 10:37

Thanq Jennifer, its more about Natural Law rather than the Personification of nature Herself. I really appreciate your take as well though

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kealan coady

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 10:35

Lmfao poemagraphic didnt kill him/herself

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Tom

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 09:25

Ah, thank you Martin, Jennifer and Mika for the comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed. And thank you Itsjustmedownhere and Binte for the likes.

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Don Matthews

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 06:10

The Like-Minders Society is built on fun and laughter

No wonder. It's builder is an Australian

Come and join us


Lucy L (LMS Head of Publicity)
Thalia (Secretary)

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Don Matthews

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 05:47

Thankyou all for your comments on this 'enigmatic poet' - whoever he is.......

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kimberly

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 01:37

Nice updates. ?

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kimberly

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 01:30

Thanks Don, it’s the only way.

Thanks, Jennifer. That’s a great summary! ?

Thanks, Martin. I especially like the last two verses myself.

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Jordyn Elizabeth

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 00:51

This piece was lovely and I enjoyed it. Nice one.
-J

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Jordyn Elizabeth

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 00:43

This might just be my favorite piece of yours. Well done.
-J

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John Marks

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 23:19

Thanks Martin.

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jennifer Malden

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 23:17

Lovely poem - 'a soaring wind grabs you by the ears '- 'the cobbles are scribbled out by a virgin whiteness', and the last two lines repeated hold it all together. Also expresses the determination to have a good new life together. Really enjoyable.

Jennifer

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Don Matthews

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 22:32

This is not meant to take away from the seriousness of your piece but I think another Rollercoaster ride in the LMS Theme Park might help buck you up.....

?

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Martin Elder

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 22:20

There is some fabulous description her with a wonderful rhythm that carries the poem along quite naturally.
Nice one

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Martin Elder

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 22:17

Excellent I have spent many a distracted few hours in IKEA. I now have a Swedish friend who helps me to pronounce the names properly !
Nice one Mike

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Martin Elder

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 22:14

What a fabulous last line to a fab poem

I miss your firefly light

Nice one Damon

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Martin Elder

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 22:12

drinking with someone new
laughing at her jokes
she’s pawing at you

I love these lines in particular. great poem
Nice one

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Don Matthews

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 22:02

I'm a little poet
Enigmatic me
Am I poet Don or
Another he or she?

I'll leave you all a'wondering
Could be me or thee?
That I'm writing all about
In my poetry

Trouble understanding
Whatever makes you tick?
Others just can't work you out
When you're taking mick?

To me? It doesn't matter
We all throw round some shit
I'll take from you the parts I like
And go along with it

I'll just just sit back, eat popcorn, and enjoy the show.....

?

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Martin Elder

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 22:00

Fabulous John
Love it

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Martin Elder

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 21:58

What I like about your poetry John is that I always learn something new as well as being able to enjoy the poetic content
Nice one

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Martin Elder

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 21:54

There must be something significant in his surname and the fact that he likes a film with the title gone with the wind.
Brilliant as always Ian

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 21:13

Another masterpiece. Thank you for showing us how it’s done, life and poetry. Mesmerizing.

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 20:50

Very moving.

Hannah

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Brian Blanchard

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 18:55

Oh so good Mark! As a meteorologist (although out of practice), I heartily agree! Off topic here, but do you have plans to publish another collection of these latest works?

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Do.RoThy

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 18:16

Hey enigmatic Don, fantastic, always think high about yourself, cos you deserve it anyways...loved this poem to bits and pieces...?

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Do.RoThy

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 16:28

Shud have watched his leapy steps
Ignoring them led him to brownie mud
Phew!! Greeny turns browny

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Do.RoThy

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 16:24

Thank you Po and V......your words are motivating n encouraging. ?

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jennifer Malden

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 16:04

Help! Very original writing and use of words. Presumably meaning that Nature will ask for revenge rom the way we have treated her and hers? Great title too.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 15:57

Great poem. Gives the idea of a rather lonely person waiting for a friend to turn up, and then the let down when he arrives with new company. yet another disappointment in a sad life.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 15:53

I would have thought a person was entitled to describe himself any way he wants. Perhaps more so than when describing others, when you should perhaps consider their feelings about what you say.

Viva all enigmas, autobiographical and not! Life would be dull without them. Is the 'red pencil' bloodstained or just for correcting? Sounds as if Miss Marple is the WOL moderator!

Jennifer

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Binte Afroz

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 15:46

I hope she doesn't have to give up. Such loyalty should be respected. Beautiful rhyme.

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jennifer Malden

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 15:42

Great picture of an amusing stopover. The muddy grids of the scraper sound very familiar. You can see how long ago it was used, according to the dampness/dryness of the mud. Loved the tail semaphore too!

Jennifer

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Ruth O'Reilly

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 15:19

Part of the entertainment of an art form is working out and wondering what it is meant to be, or what it is truely about. That can apply as much to a sketch as to a poem. I enjoyed what was created here by the poets and commentators alike whoever they all were?

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Tom

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 14:22

Thank you for the comments Don, Mika and Frances and for the like Catherine. Much appreciated, as always. I feel it still needs a little work, but getting there... ?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 13:56

Love this one Cait. Thanks for sharing!

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Do.RoThy

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 13:16

This is an amazing piece...best till now....I liked it Cait.?

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Don Matthews

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 13:05

This all a bit of an enigma if you ask me....

?

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 12:52

It won't come to that Graham...just a bit of mischief.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 11:52

My comment was an observation not a criticism. We have had quite a few contre-temps due to incorrect assumptions being made, sometimes leading to unpleasantness. Of course in this instance I have no way of knowing who’s comments I am reading. By the way WOL also has a secret moderator, so please do not just assume it’s me if handbags are drawn and the red pencil comes out ?

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Mon 2nd Mar 2020 10:57

Graham

This is not Brian writing now...it is another person who Brian has allowed to use his account. I think what Brian was trying to do is point out the etiquette in using certain personal descriptive words. If it causes a little tension with the other party (not Don of course...the other unnamed bloke) then that is a regrettable consequence. I haven't actually checked this with Brian but I think this what he probably would say.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 10:51

Thanks for the entertaining comments - and the "likes". I like to
believe in rational thinking and find anything overtly "one-way" to
be worth challenging in the interest of "balance" in any important debate.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 10:23

Always difficult to decipher what is and what isn’t autobiographical here on WOL. Perhaps each poet should indicate before commenters make the assumption. It might lead to less tension, or is that the purpose?

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Greg Freeman

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 09:32

Nice work, Mike

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Don Matthews

Mon 2nd Mar 2020 09:03

This IS someone else describing the poet as an enigma. All four verses are by an outsider. The fifth verse is the only one written by the poet.

Then again who's to say it's about me? I can't see the name Don appearing anywhere? It could refer to any poet with these characteristics

Also if someone feels they are indeed eccentric, enigmatic, oddballish, etc why can't they call themselves such?

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Mon 2nd Mar 2020 08:43

It's fine to describe someone else as enigmatic, but not yourself. Same as eccentric, oddball etc. All subjective.

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