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Do.RoThy

Tue 10th Mar 2020 07:01

Thanks Don!!

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Do.RoThy

Tue 10th Mar 2020 06:50

Hehehe?

Can v join???

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Don Matthews

Tue 10th Mar 2020 06:46

If you would like to join LMS and visit the many attractions in the Theme Park (including the 'Propper Spelling School) please contact the writer

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Wendy Higson

Tue 10th Mar 2020 05:43

Thankyou for liking my poem David I have only just started writing again I write about everything I love it if it’s on my mind I write it down my mind is like a whirlwind. So many things have happened over my lifetime . Nice to meet you love Wendy x

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Don Matthews

Tue 10th Mar 2020 02:26

Very good Do......

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Don Matthews

Tue 10th Mar 2020 02:22

He wants to say more Eth....
I think he's trying to out-offend the writer luv...
Isn't competition banned on WOL Eth?.....Not healthy?...

Oh oh,,,here he goes

Take me floozy in your mouth
Shit! don't bite me so
I'm real tender on my tip
Let's all sing doh si doh

Sheesh Eth bit rough for tender WOLer eyes......
They're all very tolerant luv....
And look, it all rhymes!

Oh, oh.... he's starting up again Eth.....
Close your eyes luv.....

Shit almighty here I cum
Bang the cum cum drum
Shit almighty here I cum
Cum cum ho ho hum

Is it like a tom tom drum Eth?....
It does sound all a bit primeval luv.....

Wot's a blowjob Eth?.

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Ruvi Galhena

Tue 10th Mar 2020 01:50

Thank you so much for your inspiring words J.. ❤

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John Coopey

Mon 9th Mar 2020 23:24

Thanks, Don.

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keith jeffries

Mon 9th Mar 2020 23:23

A remarkable and thought provoking poem. When people are convinced of the righteousness of an ideology they seem to be capable of almost anything, similarly so if a propaganda machine can cleverly manipulate people. This draws me to conclude and endorse the final lines of this poem, that in the right circumstances the common man can descend into the most base levels of barbarity.

Ein Reich, Ein Volk, Ein Fuehrer and those words can light the flame of evil

Keith

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Don Matthews

Mon 9th Mar 2020 23:14

Seems I need a floozy
To blowjob me each day
Forget the fucking Vegemite
On my toast I say

Tolerance is a virtue
And 'e does rhyme well luv

Come on flooze please dooze me
let's cock/cunt intertwine
Orgasm for immunity
Let's party on, great time

Scientists say (via Google)
Cumming makes you 'mune
So let's cry out in Bacchic splendour
Yoweee yoweee tune

Sheesh Eth. I'm trying to be tolerant....

But he does rhyme well luv......

Wot's a blowjob Eth?....

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raypool

Mon 9th Mar 2020 22:58

A compelling account with much to commend it in terms of encapsulating the whole sordidly misguided episode . More horror than can be visualized or assimilated, but still we try to find answers. The common man has all the ingredients.

Ray

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Jordyn Elizabeth

Mon 9th Mar 2020 21:52

Loved this one. You painted such a beautiful picture with words, well done.
-J

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keith jeffries

Mon 9th Mar 2020 20:48

MC.,

Thank you for your remarks. The reason so many fail to seek help is either PTSD which affects many or breakdowns in family life. They are reluctant to seek help, often out of pride and sink into a morass of self pity and abandonment. Booze and Drugs soon search them out and addiction results which places them beyond help, or so they think. In my local town I have come across one such guy who seems to be in a permanent self induced haze. I have suggest several agencies especially designed to help ex service men but to no avail

Thanks for this
Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 9th Mar 2020 20:40

Po,

Thank you for this. I had no idea that you have an involvement in this ugly business. I have lived a sheltered life or perhaps when I was younger people seldom stabbed each other, except in the back. Ha Ha

Keith

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 9th Mar 2020 17:07

Beautiful. I like your romantic poetry best. ❤️?

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John Coopey

Mon 9th Mar 2020 17:06

On both counts, MC, we shall wait and see.

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John Coopey

Mon 9th Mar 2020 17:05

Him and the others, MC.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 9th Mar 2020 16:50

My family has seen its members in the ranks of the army over the
past two centuries. I have seen service in a civilian capacity in my
own working life. Both have organisations that are intended and
prepared to offer help to its former members and their families.
So, something is going wrong somewhere if any are on the streets.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 9th Mar 2020 16:41

Ha...many will say "Fancy that !" - and mean it.
Brexit and coronavirus have this virtue to achieve
Both seem sure to tire us and leave will not mean grieve. ?

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 9th Mar 2020 16:30

So tremulous his nerve is...
That Head of H O "civil" service ?

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 9th Mar 2020 16:26

Good message...good sense...good rhyme...good fun. A healthy combination!

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Nigel Astell

Mon 9th Mar 2020 15:56

A big thank you from all Stockport members to John F Keane and Katherine Rosati for all the hard work getting our work set up in the forthcoming event at Stockport Art Gallery.

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John Coopey

Mon 9th Mar 2020 15:38

It is a quality which has eluded me for my entire life.

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John Coopey

Mon 9th Mar 2020 15:32

Don - vegemite. A poor substitute for the real thing.
Graham - Even if it doesn’t work, given the increased vulnerability of us old gits, it’s worth enjoying the pleasure before we shake a six,
Kevin - it’s my intention to offend as many as possible on Thurs.
Mika - It should be available on the NHS.

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Nigel Astell

Mon 9th Mar 2020 15:28

thanks
jennifer Malden
Binte Afroz
Ruth and itsjustmedownhere
Aviva
for your likes

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kimberly

Mon 9th Mar 2020 14:51

Actually, there is scientific proof that an orgasm a day will boost your immune system. So, party on... ?

https://bigthink.com/sex-relationships/health-benefits-of-masturbation?rebelltitem=3&fbclid=IwAR3nbrNq7q1RRBoB_xaM2l74kmxuzMzVcFDg2Gl50e4_ZWfKB7ARnUBYd2Q#rebelltitem3?rebelltitem=3

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kJ Walker

Mon 9th Mar 2020 14:26

Looking forward to hearing this at well spoken.

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Do.RoThy

Mon 9th Mar 2020 14:03

Great concern, but what efforts need to b intensified? Any suggestions!! Being proactive. ?

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Don Matthews

Mon 9th Mar 2020 13:15

Can't tolerate the taste
Of Marmite on my toast
Give me Aussie Vegemite
(Cos we know how to make the stuff......)

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 9th Mar 2020 13:09

thanks for the kind comments Martin - and thanx everyone for the 'likes'
Ian

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 9th Mar 2020 12:18

Tolerance is a virtue and it does rhyme well!

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Chris Hubbard

Mon 9th Mar 2020 12:12

Hi Po,

Thank you.

I really appreciate your taking the time to respond to my efforts from the other side of the world. While it gives me a boost when I receive commentary such as yours, I never take any of it for granted (although I would keep going anyway if it didn't) - getting such a kick out of this wonderful literary form).

Chris

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Chris Hubbard

Mon 9th Mar 2020 12:04

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John Coopey

Mon 9th Mar 2020 11:49

If it’s in poor taste, Don, put Marmite on it.
Thanks, Po. Always trying to raise the bar of litricher.

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Binte Afroz

Mon 9th Mar 2020 11:14

Well done, Sarah. Teachers should believe in their students when they don't even believe in themselves. Every child matters and can do miracles if circumstances are favourable for their growth and some of them need a push only. Beautiful poem!
Binte

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keith jeffries

Mon 9th Mar 2020 10:43

David,

A good poem. As I read it twice I felt drawn to reading between the lines where I believe I found what I was looking for.

Thank you for this
Keith

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Don Matthews

Mon 9th Mar 2020 10:35

This is good.....

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Don Matthews

Mon 9th Mar 2020 10:28

I could rhyme the source of poor taste
I could rhyme the source, I could utter

But I won't.........

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John Coopey

Mon 9th Mar 2020 09:11

Many thanks, David; and Branwell for the Like.
A slip of the tongue, surely, Don? I’m always in the vanguard of poor taste.

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Cait Abbott

Mon 9th Mar 2020 07:46

Thank you Po, your words mean a lot to me

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Do.RoThy

Mon 9th Mar 2020 07:41

Thnx Dave!!

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Do.RoThy

Mon 9th Mar 2020 07:37

Well expressed. But y u carry an axe. Nice pic.

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David

Mon 9th Mar 2020 07:36

Nice piece

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David

Mon 9th Mar 2020 07:34

Lovely

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David

Mon 9th Mar 2020 07:30

Lovely

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David

Mon 9th Mar 2020 07:29

Beautiful

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David

Mon 9th Mar 2020 07:28

Nicely written

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Do.RoThy

Mon 9th Mar 2020 07:06

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Don Matthews

Mon 9th Mar 2020 04:51

Poor taste

LMS promotes good clean fun and guaranteed virus protection.....

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Do.RoThy

Mon 9th Mar 2020 03:05

(Blushing!!)

Thank you Donny dear
My necky was covered
So no bits and bites there
Hormones balanced
Ebbing n flowing
Do si Do
Singing and dancing
Ho hi Ho?

................

Thank you Tom.?

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