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John Coopey

Tue 25th Aug 2020 15:59

I don’t mind the songs at all, Greg. If a nation wants to recall and celebrate its previous times that’s fine by me. I do have a rather bigoted attitude however to the Hooray Henrys singing it.

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John Coopey

Tue 25th Aug 2020 15:50

Someone’s got it in for you, MC.

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Tom

Tue 25th Aug 2020 15:47

Thanks for the likes and comments Manisha, Neressa, Victoria, Jordyn, Nicola, Kim and Kate. So kind of you. I'm glad this one seems to have translated. Victoria, thank you, I can't help but be drawn to a bit of heartbreak... Nicola, you're right, so many ways to nurture and take care of this world... And Kate, carving pretty worlds is no mean feat - please never stop. Thanks all. Tom.

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John Coopey

Tue 25th Aug 2020 15:42

St Jude, wasn’t it, Ian?

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John Coopey

Tue 25th Aug 2020 14:42

Many thanks for your thoughts, MC. I tried to write it in triplets (dactyls) so I think a guitar plucked in 6/8 time would serve it well.
And many thanks for the Likes, Jordyn, Trevor, Stephen, Julie and Poems Hub.

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julie callaghan

Tue 25th Aug 2020 13:39

Thanks for the like Kate

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Tue 25th Aug 2020 12:35

I like the idea of erosion becoming a foundation. Nice poem.

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Tue 25th Aug 2020 12:28

I fear I love to carve pretty worlds in my mind too Tom...... So many great lines in this, I hardly know where to start. One I will read over and over.

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Tue 25th Aug 2020 12:24

An anthem for our times Stephen

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Tue 25th Aug 2020 12:21

Very uplifting Faith. I enjoyed this very much.

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Tue 25th Aug 2020 12:20

I love the imagery of being left with a thorn stuck in my mind. Will you put this to music Simon? It feels like a song.

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Tue 25th Aug 2020 12:19

I loved this Martin. Time to start a merry movement. ?

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d.knape

Tue 25th Aug 2020 11:51

This is delightful!
So glad that you wrote it.
Me.

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Martin Elder

Tue 25th Aug 2020 10:37

I would echo what Keith says. That is a real test of your faith that it helps you to weather the storms. Keep on keeping on
Nice one

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keith jeffries

Tue 25th Aug 2020 10:22

The gift of Faith is a gift indeed. Excellent poem

Keith

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mrmjr0911@gmail.com

Tue 25th Aug 2020 10:19

Thank you fee free to leave comments on my other poems. I appreciate any feed back.

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Faith Olajuyigbe

Tue 25th Aug 2020 09:54

Thank you for your comments all! This is something I still think about deeply x

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Faith Olajuyigbe

Tue 25th Aug 2020 09:52

Thanks for the comments @Tom and @Paul! Really appreciate it ?

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Faith Olajuyigbe

Tue 25th Aug 2020 09:52

Thank you!

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Faith Olajuyigbe

Tue 25th Aug 2020 09:50

Very powerful words

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Rich

Tue 25th Aug 2020 08:52

Love this poem. Timely reminder to value every living moment, and I really like the idea of "attendance" - versus participation, I figure. Thanks.

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Poems hub

Tue 25th Aug 2020 07:34

A pearl to keep.

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Poems hub

Tue 25th Aug 2020 07:34

Flame of love and care!!

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Greg Freeman

Tue 25th Aug 2020 06:25

Thanks for your comments, Stephen, Graham, and Brian. I guess we can all stand down from the culture war on this one. The BBC has said these old battle cries will be played but not sung, owing to Covid restrictions. I see even the so-called Culture Secretary weighed in as well #brexitcantreverseimperialsunset. And thanks for the Likes, Tom and Trevor.

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Nicola Beckett

Tue 25th Aug 2020 05:11

Wonderful poem, I'm childless Tom and we leave our legacy in different ways, I'm sure you have been a father figure to many, her loss if you ask me, your poems are beautifully crafted, I rescue animals, create and have mothered many I'm sure you have been a father in your own way x love and light Nicola

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Shehariah

Tue 25th Aug 2020 01:53

Eric, wow. I feel you, brother. I don’t know your personal struggles, but it sounds like a road I’ve walked for a long time. I love how you express your emotions so rawly.

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Shehariah

Tue 25th Aug 2020 01:52

I still struggle with letting love in. It’s an unfortunate byproduct of living so guarded for so long. I get the pain and the depression. It’s likely that I’ve lived with it as long as you’ve been alive. It’s a hard journey, but when we remain open, we become much stronger creatures.

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Victoria Nach

Tue 25th Aug 2020 01:13

Miss Joanna I love the writing here. The way we as people feel lost for words to describe the interpersonal indivisible sameness as well as the miracle of our differences. Well done.?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 24th Aug 2020 22:50

Wow! Heartbreakingly beautiful poem. ?

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Bhumika Jain

Mon 24th Aug 2020 18:56

Hey. I have gone through your poetry and it was so effective. Keep doing.
I am starting a blog on Instagram, I liked your poetry and I wish to share it on my blog

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Mon 24th Aug 2020 17:24

The Proms, being classical music, appeals to a niche audience. It's only the last night with its stirring jingoistic tunes that draws a wider interest. Lose these tunes, lose the audience, lose the TV slots for The Proms as a whole.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 24th Aug 2020 16:19

It's just a tribal thing, much like football crowds or the Women's Institute. I've never really been a mob person. Music, much like beauty, is in the eye/ear of the beholder. The prettiest girls don't go in for the Miss World contest. Am I making any sense here??

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 24th Aug 2020 16:01

But, like the Last Night if the Proms - a bit of fun. ?

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Greg Freeman

Mon 24th Aug 2020 15:59

Perhaps predictable from its source.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 24th Aug 2020 15:47

Perhaps predictable from its source. But then the Proms have
persistently neglected to include any of the major inspirational works
from the late Cornish composer George Lloyd despite nearly thirty years of polite lobbying. Hardly indicative of any real qualification
in the Beeb's idea of what is worth playing and hearing in home-grown music.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 24th Aug 2020 15:26

Mental health - or rather, its opposite - has varied causes and has
to be treated on a case by case basis. Its effects on sufferers and
others are impossible to define and every care should be taken
to negate them in any way possible. My own observations were
from some years ago and provided a personal experience of what
its existence can mean for those dealing with it. Places like Horton
Hospital, with its endless corridors,and extensive grounds, may
have seemed to some like a throwback to less enlightened days.
For those needing to escape the demands and pressures of life -
often a root cause of illness - they provided a retreat from those
demands and pressures, hopefully enabling staff (no doubt under
their own demands and pressures) to deal with each admission
according to diagnosis and need. They were certainly not ideal,
but at least those admitted had somewhere to go that offered a
reprieve and perhaps eventual relief from their own type of illness
in a 24/7 environment.of examination, assessment and treatment.
Set against the proper concern for individual freedom from
restraint and incarceration, there were always concerns that
eventually took precedence, and it appears that "care in the
community" was the result for better or for worse.

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 24th Aug 2020 15:12

Thanks Keith, I'm a great believer in Stoicism, it's the one guiding light I've had throughout my life. I can't change the cards life deals me, I can only choose how I play them, and to be fair, I've got a great poker face.❤

J. x

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julie callaghan

Mon 24th Aug 2020 15:01

I know! how lucky am I?

Thanks for the comment and like Stephen

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jennifer Malden

Mon 24th Aug 2020 14:51

Terrifying, but unfortunately so true! Naked, old -fashioned myopia. They've been saying this for years, but things didn't seem all that alarming perhaps, but now it is really a brownland, with the sun pelting down molten lead, no-one can now deny that the climate is changing rapidly. Hope the trend is reversible still. Really enjoyable and well expressed.

Jennifer

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 24th Aug 2020 14:34

Thank you, Julie. A new soundbar...I feel your pain.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 24th Aug 2020 14:19

Good one, Greg. I am a great supporter of the Proms but the Last Night antics have always made me feel uncomfortable. It's not that the pieces of music in question are themselves without worth; it's just the overall effect of misplaced superiority which is sometimes generated.

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curiousdud3

Mon 24th Aug 2020 12:26

Thanks both.

I feel the time is near
The Queen will be on display.
Just need a little more strength
To help me on my way

?

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Greg Freeman

Mon 24th Aug 2020 09:28

Welcome to Write Out Loud, Sharron. Loved hearing your poem 'Hair Today' at Woking Stanza last week, and now I see it's in the next Dempsey&Windle anthology. Well done! Hope you'll try out some of your poems here from time to time. Greg

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Don Matthews

Mon 24th Aug 2020 09:14

Very nice with nice flow to it. Nice rhyming also....

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julie callaghan

Mon 24th Aug 2020 08:12

Thanks for the like poems hub

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Chris Hubbard

Mon 24th Aug 2020 08:10

Thank you for your kind thoughts, Shifa! This is the sort of thing that keeps me going in the poetry game - in which I'm what Clive James once said was "a lifer".

Chris Hubbard
Australia

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Jordyn Elizabeth

Mon 24th Aug 2020 04:35

Loved this one.

-J

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Jordyn Elizabeth

Mon 24th Aug 2020 04:34

The whole piece is beautiful, but that last part;

" My creator, I am ever in your debt
For into me, you have breathed life and love
At least I dream of this fate
Connecting the ground to the clouds above"

We get a glimpse of Heaven reaching down to Earth.


-J



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Shehariah

Mon 24th Aug 2020 03:02

Shifa, thank you. You put a smile on my face.

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Nigel Astell

Mon 24th Aug 2020 01:18

The last seat on the train
it races past my station
but I have no ticket.

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