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raypool

Tue 26th Oct 2021 15:32

HI John. I thought i'd join the fray, as i've just ventured out on my vintage road bike after going crackers tarting it up with tape and all manner of pretty additions(except me). I was so wound up about motorists that i've bought a tiny adjustable mirror that clips on glasses and allows a splendid view of approaching leviathans or indeed just as dangerous ms drivers. Apart from getting lost and having to ring the lady wife, I felt quite confident. I waited in a pub of course. No helmet either.
I'm not an iguana by the way or a road lizard, are you?

Ray

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Nigel Astell

Tue 26th Oct 2021 03:25

that place above the creaking stairs
will fall hate dies
one poem will decide.

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d.knape

Tue 26th Oct 2021 03:20

That poem was written in praise of shopping carts
not to criticize them or point out their failures.
God knows there is enough negativity already.
We should uplift each other and...uplift our shopping carts.
Where would we be without them?
(by the way, where did you come from? Not seen your name
before. Are you a regular or irregular?
?

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Greg Freeman

Mon 25th Oct 2021 22:59

I wouldn't know, Graham. I never got in to see them!

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Candice Reineke

Mon 25th Oct 2021 22:07

Love this ? It does make me curious - did HK experience beauty with her other senses (touch, taste and scent) because she did not know what she was missing?

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Candice Reineke

Mon 25th Oct 2021 21:51

Thanks for your kind words, Saul ?? I recited this poem to a loved who does not like poetry. They laughed, understanding they were my inspiration ?

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 25th Oct 2021 21:25

A lovely, optimistic poem, Brenda.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 25th Oct 2021 21:12

Thanks to Stephen A for the like.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 25th Oct 2021 21:11

And thanks to Pete for the like.

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julie callaghan

Mon 25th Oct 2021 17:57

I wish I could add more photographs. It really was a beautiful place.

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jennifer Malden

Mon 25th Oct 2021 17:27

Thanks John C, Candice, Stephen G and Stephen A, and Holden M for the likes, and Candice and Stephen G for the comments.
Candice-- seems to have been bi-lateral, as I haven't seen him for ages. Stephen G ..... seems to be a good amount of fauna in it. Found a hedgehog hoping to spend a warm winter there, a mouse family who ate a hole in a beach shade, and a gecko, which I approve of because he is supposed, anyway, to eat mosquitos. In the corridor they even found a lovely?! cream and orange snake, immediately assasinated, poor reptile, as they thought it might be poisonous. (it wasn't).
Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Mon 25th Oct 2021 17:12

Again like the metaphor of the sea and its creatures. Great writing and lots of original use of words.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Mon 25th Oct 2021 17:09

Liked this one, a new twist to Halloween. Also the rythm, the twp short lines and then one long. Also ...... memories picked by time's vultures. Great poem.

Jennifer

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Saul Bennett

Mon 25th Oct 2021 16:43

I like this poem and your other sampled work. It has vigour and is not dull like some poetry can be.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th Oct 2021 15:09

Jennifer - i have lived (and worked) for much of sixty years
in London so I concur with your comments. It has been
pointed out to me in another context that the only constant in
life is change, so i will go with you about the question of
"attitudes" to social changes in other lifetimes, which, as you
rightly point out, were "perhaps were not so pronounced".
Brian - thanks for the comment and the note of optimism....
always welcome!.
And thanks, one and all, for the "likes".

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julie callaghan

Mon 25th Oct 2021 14:02

Finally caught up with my unposted writes today

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Adam Whitworth

Mon 25th Oct 2021 13:47

You didn't mention the dodgy wheel that makes the damn thing go where it likes!

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Oct 2021 21:00

Remind me when we’re next at Well Spoken, Kevin. I’ll try to remember to bring it along.

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kJ Walker

Sun 24th Oct 2021 19:54

Ha.
This was the very first poem I heard you perform. I never attempted one of my own that month, because I knew that I couldn't follow that.
It's still my favourite, and it's the one that I requested you do when our Jonny attended well spoken.
Maybe we'll get a repeat next month.

Ps Gladys Thrupp, may be making a reappearance

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Oct 2021 19:40

Don’t know the town, Stephen. I’ve never been. But there is something innately funny about Tunbridge Wells.
And thanks for the Like, Stephen A.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 24th Oct 2021 18:39

Thank you, John. Yes, it hits a sombre note. And thanks to Nigel and Holden for the likes.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 24th Oct 2021 18:31

Loved this one, Adam. It's perfect.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 24th Oct 2021 17:37

Hilarious stuff, John, though the last one must be getting into a dangerous area- Tunbridge Wells, I mean. In once of my many civil service jobs in 1970s, I worked with Industrial Tribunals and one day the former Agony Aunt of the Tatler appeared, claiming unfair dismissal. Not exactly soft porn and surely less earthy than yours, but I remember it took about an hour to explain to the judge what an agony aunt was. "You mean that people write to you with...problems?"

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 24th Oct 2021 17:28

I enjoyed this, Jennifer, although I'm pleased I don't have to go into your garage!

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 24th Oct 2021 17:22

Heart-warming poem, Hugh.

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jennifer Malden

Sun 24th Oct 2021 15:49

Nice metaphor! Like the idea of the need to add kindling! Jennifer

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Brian Blanchard

Sun 24th Oct 2021 15:05

Although we don't enjoy such a long and rich history, I feel your pain here as well....but as long as folk like you and I take breath and heed those missing voices, there's still hope, yes?

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Sun 24th Oct 2021 14:48

Thanks for the comment on
'This wanting look' Brenda, your point had me ?
?

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Sun 24th Oct 2021 14:31

... Or fur Therese Steph??
Either one your verse has me playing music on a different channel while reading your verse... have I already said that? ?
((see what you've started))

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Oct 2021 08:59

I remember reading Spike Milligan saying that although it was the most dreadful time for many, the Second World War years were the best of his life, I too have a guilty memories of enjoying the isolation, the empty roads for cycling, the community spirit of those early months, the appreciation for the NHS and carers.

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Oct 2021 08:45

Enjoyed this, Mike. Very pictorial. I was less sure about the line “To the charity shop opposite, later I will go” which comes across for me as a bit contrived to get the rhyme in. (I’m being picky! Ignore me).

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Oct 2021 08:41

Time is running out, Stephen. It is of little consolation that our generation shall not see the worst of it.

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John Coopey

Sun 24th Oct 2021 08:29

I could never confuse her with the late Mary Millington, Leon. Fiona Richmond was the daughter of a vicar and was altogether more softer core. She was the Shagony Aunt for Men Only..
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fiona_Richmond

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d.knape

Sun 24th Oct 2021 03:10

I did in fact want to get rid of you but...
you slipped in unawares! haha
You have so much going on, I am surprised you take the time
to read and respond to my poems.
I thank you for that and
hope you feel better after reading them.
?

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d.knape

Sun 24th Oct 2021 03:08

Not sure what your last post was about. Amarillo?
Good to hear from you though.
You are a loyal reader.
One of my favorites.
?

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Candice Reineke

Sun 24th Oct 2021 02:34

? Let me know if he keeps your agreement, Jennifer! ?

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Sat 23rd Oct 2021 22:43

John you may have been confusing Mary Millington

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clyde McCulley

Sat 23rd Oct 2021 18:12

Thank Jennifer, I appreciate that it did.

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jennifer Malden

Sat 23rd Oct 2021 17:37

Alas! My London is definitely not there anymore, but some remoter places have changed very little, visibly anyway. Probably our parents and grandparents would have said the same, although the social changes in their lifetimes perhaps were not so pronounced. A lot said in six lines-
Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 23rd Oct 2021 17:33

Liked this, brings on a shiver!

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 23rd Oct 2021 17:32

Hope you told her so? My lot just gobble, without any words! Why did you dig the hole in the yard if she's such a good cook? Jenniferrrrrrr.

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jennifer Malden

Sat 23rd Oct 2021 17:29

Nice parrot story - my father was phoned by a nice, but very conventional old spinster, who asked him for assistance. He discovered she had bought a parrot, whom she had taught to say all the usual, Hello, How are you? etc etc., but it had started to swear like a trooper, and she couldn't understand why. Neither could my father, as her visitors were all eminently respectable. He discovered, however, that she put it out at the end of the garden on sunny days. On inspection, he saw there was a golf course over the hedge, and a huge bunker!!!!!!!!!! He then suggested she put it out in the front garden!

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jennifer Malden

Sat 23rd Oct 2021 17:25

Think it is incredibly cruel to keep a bird, often large on a perch. Parrots are usually sociable birds in nature. Not surprised it remains speechless! Nice poem
Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 23rd Oct 2021 17:23

Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! Can you be sure I'm not?

Jennifer

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John Marks

Sat 23rd Oct 2021 12:15

Ta Pete. ?

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julie callaghan

Sat 23rd Oct 2021 08:49

This was written a month ago but for personal reasons I wasn’t posting at the time.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 22nd Oct 2021 21:55

East Cheam's changed a bit since I was there!

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Pete (edbreathe)

Fri 22nd Oct 2021 19:01

That’s a huge poem

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raypool

Fri 22nd Oct 2021 16:24

Thanks Jennifer, it's all in the bag now! I was pleasantly surprised by the attention this got. I should have been in advertising. I prefer plain crisps, but do tend to dip them!

Ray

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raypool

Fri 22nd Oct 2021 16:22

Thanks for throwing that extra light on the poem Jennifer. All true, and we weren't so precious then! I remember one film called the House on Haunted Hill, which involved a system of wires over the auditorium onto which a luminous skeleton was jerkily released in an attempt to shock on its puppet journey to the back of the cinema. Cobbles are so scarce now aren't they.

Mark, I regret I'm not familiar with any of those venues, but I worked for the BBC and often visited their recording sites, the Palace near Charing X and the Camden where the Goon Show was recorded, among others. Fantastic variety in all things then. The bombing raids of course were mainly centred on industrial areas, but many doodlebugs hit random targets, nevertheless there were many centres that were decimated. Often the cinemas and theatres went through post war incarnations, becoming carpet warehouses for example.

Ray

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