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jennifer Malden

Wed 5th May 2021 16:33

'Thank you for Waiting' was new to me, but it has everything.

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J.D. Bardo

Wed 5th May 2021 15:32

If homosexuality is a condition, well it is spreading like wildfire with more and more celebrities, or famous people coming out of the closet every day. A condition afflicting more than 10% of our population that we know of statistically. (how many more are hiding their condition?). I am not afraid of catching this condition, I have had numerous intimate relations with men suffering from this condition, AND I AM FINE!!!
Thanks Keith, J.D.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Wed 5th May 2021 14:56

well done. Bravo.?

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 5th May 2021 12:17

Thank you for your comment Stephen ( & enjoying your book, The Shape Of Trees, by the way!)
And for the additional ?? Tony, and Brenda. Always appreciated ?

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julie callaghan

Wed 5th May 2021 12:15

Thank you very much Stephen. The outlook is much brighter today.

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 5th May 2021 12:09

Throwing a few of these your way, Julie ????☀️☀️☀️?️

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keith jeffries

Wed 5th May 2021 11:27

John,
Thank you for updating your profile as it brings you more into focus. Now I am able to see the exterior which hides the interior where so many fine poems come from.
Regards
Keith

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 5th May 2021 11:23

I think you have misunderstood my comment DK. I meant grateful for your work not the brevity of it! I can see why you read it another way. Apologies!

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julie callaghan

Wed 5th May 2021 11:12

Thank you for all the kind likes for this poem.

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keith jeffries

Wed 5th May 2021 09:37

A poem which drenches my heart with tears at the sheer impotence of the West. A powerful poem indeed. A poem which speaks the unvarnished truth. I am drawn to the sentiments expressed in the last two lines of the second stanza. A poem in honour to the fallen faithful, who were abandoned by their fellow Christians who saw no profit in going to their rescue.

Thank you for this
Keith

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Ghazala lari

Wed 5th May 2021 05:17

Ironically done justice to your name?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Wed 5th May 2021 04:07

Thank you to Ghazala, Brian, Stephen and Nigel for commenting! ?
(I'm sorry that somehow today I can't think of individual replies)

Thanks also to everyone who clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

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d.knape

Wed 5th May 2021 03:21

ouch!
by the way, love your new photo on your blog.

wink.

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Nigel Astell

Wed 5th May 2021 02:07

Knowing the dream
we once had
crushed into submission
starts the nightmare.

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keith jeffries

Wed 5th May 2021 00:13

John,
A poem to commemorate the ultimate fall of the Byzantine empire and the blood which stains the sacred places now desecrated. Your photograph of St Sophia's, for that is what it will forever be, is magnificent and a symbol of its rich Christian heritage built on the foundations of those devoted to the what was taken from them. The photograph speaks of the ultimate victory.

I see President Biden has at last acknowledged the Armenian massacre.
May they rest in peace.
Thank you indeed for this

Keith

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keith jeffries

Wed 5th May 2021 00:04

A gentle poem which takes the reader from a desperate situation to the fruition of friendship and love. It places love above sex which is the order where these emotions should be. It is a poem of transformation and personal healing found within the hearts of two people are are honest with each other.
Thank you for this

Keith

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Holden Moncrieff

Tue 4th May 2021 20:40

Thank you Stephen, I really appreciate it ?

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Mike Bartram

Tue 4th May 2021 18:40

Thank you for the thoughtful and kind comments.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 4th May 2021 18:27

All red herrings, it was the butler that did it.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 4th May 2021 16:55

Yes, clearly a heartfelt poem. I like the theme of contrasts and paradoxes.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Tue 4th May 2021 16:44

This poem is excellent poetry about poets and poetry. The ranges are open.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Tue 4th May 2021 16:39

Bravo. ? I know the feelings.

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Brian Hodgkinson

Tue 4th May 2021 16:36

Thank you, Stephan. Though the theme has a sad side, I did not intend it to be sad hence the title. Thank you for encouraging me to write poetry. ?

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Brian Hodgkinson

Tue 4th May 2021 16:31

Thank you, Aviva, for your word of encouragement.?

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 4th May 2021 16:18

We most certainly are!

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 4th May 2021 16:16

Garden/horticultural destruction always seems both sad and invigorating, in that most of it can be recycled. If I had a quid for every time I've said 'it's the cycle of life' to my wife whilst uprooting stuff or chopping shrubs back, I'd be a millionaire.

Christmas trees take on a different perspective (I have to admit we have had an artificial one for decades now) as they are elevated to deific levels once a year and are then forgotten for most of it.

I think I can feel your regret here Ray. It's just the cycle of life remember.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 4th May 2021 16:15

A fine poem, enjoyable despite its sadness.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 4th May 2021 16:12

GS certainly has a point about "English" being an attitude...a state of
mind. As for "mongrel race" - a phrase that seems to have gained a certain cachet nowadays - again certainly, but to a degree that
was severely limited over the past thousand years by the barriers
against any travel of meaningful distance and royal actions that
moved against immigration of any size (Queen Elizabeth 1st was
notable in that respect) plus the resident population's understandable
suspicion of foreign influence in dangerous days that saw other
nations look upon these islands with covetous eyes and wars
were all too often a state of affairs across their world.
Fair's fair - as we English say.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 4th May 2021 16:07

Your poem shows that the pen does a pretty good job, Mike.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 4th May 2021 16:04

Some wonderful (not to say alarming!) images, Ray.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 4th May 2021 16:01

A really powerful piece of verse. Good one.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 4th May 2021 15:58

A great, rhythmic write.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 4th May 2021 15:57

An enjoyable reminder that the imagination can go where the feet can no longer travel.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 4th May 2021 15:38

So good to hear from you, Philippa. This is a beautiful and moving poem.

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Ferris Ty Taylor

Tue 4th May 2021 12:41

Oh for sure ?

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 4th May 2021 12:11

Thank you for the wonderful comments Tom, Philipos & Ferris (hope it hit you in a good way!) And thanks for the likes & continued support, Keith, Julie, J.D. & Holden ?

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 4th May 2021 10:35

There's nothing more emotive to many than when the discussion turns to what is regarded by the term/label English.

Whether we like it or not, we are a mongrel race, added to, diluted, melanged with many different races over the centuries. I too regard myself as English but only in the above terms. My children I regard as English but they had a Polish grandfather!

I think English resides in a way of thinking. A way of acting (good or bad). From the upper-class twits to the beer-swilling football louts, that's us English.

The only issue I really have with Steve's piece is his claim that even the birdsong is English. An interesting observation as many of our garden birds are migratory. Come on England!!!

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 4th May 2021 09:55

This is an excellent and inspiring description of the fight for morality and self-control with conscious conscience and determination.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 4th May 2021 09:44

Although you weren't able to share a last goodbye or tell each other final messages of support, you are still doing all he could have wanted from you, remembering him well.

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Ghazala lari

Tue 4th May 2021 09:42

A well thought verse. Contemplation and analysis of human emotion, mind and feelings is a complex task. Well portrayed the flexible self. ?

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 4th May 2021 09:21

Thank you Nigel for your poetic response ?

You are right once again, where one road ends another road begins, and so on and on.. and maybe not all roads lead to WOL but I'm happy to meet all the travellers for those that did.

Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem ?

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Nigel Astell

Tue 4th May 2021 01:28

When there's nothing
more to say
I see it travelling once again
on a road
in a poem
I am reading today.

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Ferris Ty Taylor

Tue 4th May 2021 00:47

This hit me hard.

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Ferris Ty Taylor

Mon 3rd May 2021 22:48

Wow.

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Holden Moncrieff

Mon 3rd May 2021 22:11

Thank you, Philipos ?

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Philipos

Mon 3rd May 2021 20:54


The all seeing eye of the camera which never lies. Enjoyed. P

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Philipos

Mon 3rd May 2021 20:52


A fine piece - enjoyed.

P

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 3rd May 2021 20:48

Recalling Churchill's mastery of words - spoken and written - I recall the comment attributed to an American observer that he "marshalled the English language and sent it to war". I am not being entirely
frivolous in remembering another vein altogether - that in Germany
written pornography was banned whilst the pictorial sort was not.
An interesting connection that surely shows how words can be
feared for any type of reason when it comes to controlling the
minds of others.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 3rd May 2021 17:24

Philipos and JM - thanks for the comments. As age moves in, I
find I have no problem whatever keeping up the relationship! ?
Thanks also to those who took the trouble to "like" this piece of whimsy.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 3rd May 2021 17:15

The words carry their own weight and meaning - and resonate
accordingly with those who chime in tune. You could substitute
other identities and the message would also resonate accordingly
with those others who chime in tune. It's rare to find anything that
mentions either "England" or "English" nowadays so that in itself
is to be noted and read with interest. As for northerners having a
primary claim to the identify you specify, I would argue that the likes of Alfred the Great and Hereward the Wake, followed by ill-
fated King Harold and the subsequent Norman incursions from
France, combined with the surviving Anglo-Saxon population to
create the "English" identity that emerged over the ensuing one thousand years - and were more "southerners" than northerners.
I know the latter like to claim most of what's good but there are
plenty down here in the south who can point elsewhere in that
regard. ?

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