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Red Sky at Night

Not many shepherds live around these parts,

But down the road the buildings are ablaze.

In semi-darkness, citizens with pails

Run like hares towards the smoky haze.

I stop one in passing. ā€˜Iā€™m Jan,ā€™ he says.

His features throb with duty and despair;

His younger friend stands polishing a gun.

Our lives are here, but could be anywhere.

Ukraine

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 1st May 2022 18:52

Thank you very much, Ray.

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raypool

Sun 1st May 2022 17:47

It's testament to the power of the current situation that a poem can stand alone and still have a resonance - seeing the allusion to Ukraine brings it into deep focus. Excellent.

Ray

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 1st May 2022 17:02

Thanks, Holden. Yes, although it is tagged 'Ukraine', this poem is more universal than some of the rcent ones.

And thanks to John C, New Shoes, KJ, Stephen, Rudyard, Brenda, Ursula, K Lynn and Bethany for liking this.

Holden Moncrieff

Sat 30th Apr 2022 02:07

Another amazing poem, Stephen, and the last line perfectly encapsulates a very sad but salient truth!

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