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Sarah Louise mcnee

Updated: Tue, 4 Jan 2022 03:09 pm

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I am me Hard to imitate Protected with light I'll fill you with life I'm on the light side of the spiritual war Fly with me ♥️♥️🥰♥️

The Power Of Giving

what is life without a fight without rights do we live to fight for our rights when is it right to fight to write about fighting for rights in this life this short life before you know it it's over it's done your day has gone the only rights you got now are your last last rights memories they're flashing before you visions of all that you seen and who saw you your brothers your sisters your parents they adore you they went before You They struggled in battles before you they did it for you and they let you know did you understand it? no? not until it was there time to go time to let go only then did you see eyes wide open now you're hoping now youl be coping now minus their presence now just the essence no physical presence it's dull nothing to show no one to show you what way to go this way that way ..right or left how long left no one knows that's the point I'm making give more than youre taking we all need waking open your eyes realise don't let them fool u get wise this life is a gift be free what you can't change let be explore the sea hug a tree these things are free cry show tears eliminate fears these days are yours..your years why you fighting the wrong fight wasting energy demolish with light ..the light you were given so bright you hold it tight release it let go it won't run out like time enjoy your time ...spend time don't rush..take your time make love last days go fast live today like it's your last you are a gift is for living the secret of life is the Power of giving forgiving The power of giving is living peace xx  


Red for love Blue for sky's A tap full of tears a mothers eyes Dry are the lids from mourning salt Mothers world has come to a halt Love for truth honesty and pride Sky is were he lives mother dying inside Red for anger blue for healing Anger for injustice and Grief and lies Healing for the families of those in the sky's Red is our blood Blue our veins Vital to living in all that remains No blood without veins No veins with out blood Each play there parts without the other no good What use are our cells with no tunnel to travel.. to put right the wrong..the truth to unravel Destination the heart for it keeps us alive The heart is our city with out the devide Blue and Red side by side Red veins one heart One Strong Heart with its own special beat Never failing organ ..justice we greet. For her child the mother she freats. .Her dreams tossed and blown As she struggled and still struggles she never walks alone The liver birds our symbol of life ... for the grieving father son or widowed wife The 96 and the many more lives lost untold Faught and still fighting with fists of gold The sun is not the sun if it doesn't shine If it hurts like a knife and cold as ice Tarnishes our city like an infestation of lice No artificial sun in black and white will blacken this city nor shadow our light No authority or leader no conscience just lies The truth is now out but the mother still cries. .. for he is still at the match the mother she cries. .. So for her we are strong United we stand Red and blue hand in hand The purple city? ..the city of light The city of pride for Justice we fight... YNWA

My first published article for BidoLito Arts magazine

All poems are copyright of the originating author. Permission must be obtained before using or performing others' poems.

Blog entries by Sarah Louise mcnee

CAPITAL (21/01/2022)


SONIA (04/01/2022)

PROXIMITY (02/01/2022)

MAGNANIMOUS (01/01/2022)

CROWN (25/11/2021)

CELESTIAL (26/10/2021)

PASSENGER (18/10/2021)

TRANSITION (22/09/2021)

PARAGLIDING (13/09/2021)

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CROWN (25/11/2021)

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Angel whisperer indigo child x

Tue 14th Sep 2021 02:15

Thanks so much xxx?

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Angel whisperer indigo child x

Fri 6th Aug 2021 12:51

Thankyou to everyone who takes time to read my words
Poetry is sacred
Blessed be all who finds me xxx❤

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 4th Dec 2020 14:07

'The sky can't be blue enough' and 'The power of giving' are both very profound poems. The first brought me to a stillness with you, and the second took me from stillness with you. Thanks for sharing them and I look forward to reading more of what you write.


Thu 22nd Aug 2019 00:11

thank for your one word response
now I have more time
for writing poetry.


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Hasmukh Mehta

Sat 6th Jul 2019 16:46

I read your [profile. very interesting.i am on face book as hasmukh mehta . i wrote abt 22000 poems on as hasmukh amathalal


Sun 23rd Jun 2019 11:46

thanks for reading my poem
"when everything made sense"
I hope the poem MADE SENSE.

I am not psychic, I'm Polish.

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Wayne McLellan

Mon 17th Jun 2019 16:20

Hi Sarah,

I've just seen your message

"have you ever thought of turning this into a children's book?
it would be wonderful to read with illustrations x Comment is about Wayne McLellan (poet profile)"

I'm still getting the hang of the WOL website- but I think it was in relation to my "Turkey in sheep's clothing" poem. I wouldn't know how to get started with an illustrated book . However I'm attempting to set up a Youtube channel and record my voiceover with pictures etc. Early days but hopefully I'll get there soon. Thanks for taking the time to comment on my profile x

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Sat 30th Mar 2019 21:15

Hi Sarah.Just want to thank you for the recent 'invite' but I'm in the middle of doing my flat up so I'll probably catch up with you very soon. Love your writing!

Thank's again


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