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THE ONE WHOM TIME FORGOT

I came alive by night

brought the night to life,

music bled through every pore

a career of sound in black and white

black and white the piano keys,

and when the light came calling me

summoned again to stoke the fire in my veins

I played and prayed for the passing of time

its metre was my game. 

 

And now i've served that clarion call

I miss the calling not at all

released from service a haemorrhage

stopped, while other's reach whose need is great

echoes of my own lost fate. 

But music is a noble art

and those who serve it blessed.

The roundabout is stark and still

the horses stare in frozen time;

I touch the heads that see me not

nor hear the one whom time forgot. 

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raypool

Sun 1st May 2022 14:38

How kind Graham. I always appreciate your input.

Thanks Stephen, this is true to my actual experience so it reveals quite a chunk of my life's motivation. I was never quite convinced that to pursue a natural talent brings fulfilment. Aye that's the rub. A bit like an author having to write advertising slogans....

Hi Jennifer . It's satisfying when a phrase just pops into your head and works! Sometimes it happens, and other times it doesn't. I try to only put poems on now that I feel have something to tell.

Thanks for reading and liking John, Stephen Holden Brenda Ursula and K. Lynn. Always appreciated.

Ray

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jennifer Malden

Fri 29th Apr 2022 22:57

Agree with Graham absolutely, Ray. The last four lines are decidedly grim, but poetically so! Liked also 'came alive at night'
and 'music bled from every pore'. Keep up the good work.
Jennifer

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 29th Apr 2022 17:22

Enjoyed this very much, Ray. Music is a noble art, as you say. The last four lines are moving, if not chillling.

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 29th Apr 2022 17:08

We’ll for me V1 is one of the best stanzas of poetry I’ve read on here for quite a while. Bravo Ray

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