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keith jeffries

Sun 26th Sep 2021 10:53

Kevin, another great. It is also close to the truth as I had a plumber call recently and I had a similar experience.
Where are they trained these days?

Thanks for this
Keith

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 26th Sep 2021 08:34

I’d be interested what this refers to MCN

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kJ Walker

Sun 26th Sep 2021 07:39

I liked this and it works really well with the music.

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kJ Walker

Sun 26th Sep 2021 07:34

Is there a problem with the comments?

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Holden Moncrieff

Sat 25th Sep 2021 14:55

Thank you for the kind words, kJ, much appreciated! ?

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julie callaghan

Sat 25th Sep 2021 14:10

Thank you for the kind comments, I am fine but we received some terrible news this week, the sudden loss of our nephew, It was such a shock. I am also away at the moment and although my view is of blue skies and sunshine my head is in a totally different place. I am not sure I will ever be able to find the right words to write about this time, hence the need for a break. Thanks again for your lovely messages. Jx

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Pete (edbreathe)

Sat 25th Sep 2021 09:51

Hope you’re ok

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kJ Walker

Sat 25th Sep 2021 08:43

This may be a re-post. I'm not sure if I've posted it on here previously or not.
This was the first poem that I ever wrote, and it amuses me to think that after writing poetry for 5 or 6 years now I haven't got any better.

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kJ Walker

Sat 25th Sep 2021 08:33

It always seems to come as a surprise when the nights draw in, and leaves curl and turn brown.
The last line of this explains that it's just part of a natural cycle.
I liked that the birds flapped us an "au revoir" before heading south. The ones around us chirp "I'll sithee" before buggering off.

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kJ Walker

Sat 25th Sep 2021 08:10

A very interesting, and clever piece.
I have a feeling that this has more to it than the plight of sunflowers "if the tanks march in".

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kJ Walker

Sat 25th Sep 2021 08:00

hope you'll be back posting soon. I always enjoy reading your poetry.

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Kyle Jones

Fri 24th Sep 2021 22:19

Thankyou beautiful sister for this it’s been a big healing journey since I met u at the cemetery me an my mum are getting closer am I am healing our relationship blessed be beautiful soul sister ??‍♂️??☘️??❤️?

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Rasa Kabaila

Fri 24th Sep 2021 22:19

Querida Erika,

This poem brought tears to my eyes. This really is such special writing.

You will see your brother again.?

Besitos y abrazos.

Muchas gracias,

Rasa

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raypool

Fri 24th Sep 2021 21:18

Thanks you Aisha, Stephen and Holden for following and liking!

Nice to get your comment Keith. It was quite deliberately that I drew a parallel with sexual congress, that's fine! Some love their machines and there will be overlaps, albeit usually subconscious.
Glad you enjoyed. I've just resumed going out on the bike and spent quite a lot in tarting it up , as it were!

Thanks Graham, I wanted to prove I could still perform (on the bike) and I did feel very involved and a sense of freedom. Great all round, though a bit knackering.

Ray

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keith jeffries

Fri 24th Sep 2021 16:04

Excellent rhyming.
Good poem

Thanks
Keith

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Hugh

Fri 24th Sep 2021 12:08

Your presence on WOL brings on a smile,
Enjoy taking a break for a while.
But don't be away for to long,
Be back soon to where you belong.

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John F Keane

Fri 24th Sep 2021 09:33

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Holden Moncrieff

Fri 24th Sep 2021 02:03

Thank you, Stephen! ?
(I just happened to remember the word from A-Level Biology ?.)

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 23rd Sep 2021 22:26

You'll definitely be missed, Julie. Hope everything is ok and you're just recharging your poetry batteries! Enjoy & relax (if that's possible ?) ?

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 23rd Sep 2021 17:20

This is good, Sarah.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 23rd Sep 2021 17:13

Like the 'roosting', Adam. Good one.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 23rd Sep 2021 17:08

A beautiful description, Keith.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 23rd Sep 2021 17:01

I didn't know the word, but with the poem it makes perfect sense.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 23rd Sep 2021 16:44

Thank you for the lovely comment, Brenda, & yes it is a lovely piece of music just to relax to & maybe, read a bit poetry ??

And thanks for all the additional likes,
Jordyn, Aisha, feeling emotion, & Anna
Always appreciated !

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 23rd Sep 2021 16:28

Thank you so much, Jordyn for liking so many of my scribbles! I did go through a barren patch, but a few ideas started to float around a few weeks ago, so I caught them quick before they floated out the window!
Nice to see you posting again. Your poetry has a lovely sense of composition and unfolds beautifully to draw the reader in. I look forward to reading more ? Thanks again

Steve

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 23rd Sep 2021 16:15

Haha ! That's actual size, Keith ?. And yes 50, there is a few who've said that, but I assure you I certainly feel it! Probably more like 60 sometimes!
Thanks for the constant encouragement

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Angel whisperer indigo child x

Thu 23rd Sep 2021 14:23

Thanks so much Stephen x

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 23rd Sep 2021 07:57

This is something of a departure (no pun intended) for you Ray. I can see what Keith sees in the last verse too.

I particularly like the way you have given the bicycle a persona. I really like it.

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Jordyn Elizabeth

Thu 23rd Sep 2021 03:47

Awe. This is a beautiful piece.

--J

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Jordyn Elizabeth

Thu 23rd Sep 2021 03:44

Ah! It seems that I've been gone too long! There are so many lovely pieces of yours I've missed! I have a lot of reading to do.

--J

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keith jeffries

Wed 22nd Sep 2021 22:59

Stephen, you have shrunk. Surely you are not fifty years old, if so what foundation cream are you using?

Keith

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keith jeffries

Wed 22nd Sep 2021 22:54

I enjoyed this. Slightly sensual but that's my unfortunate way of seeing life. The last stanza is quite erotic.
Well done Ray
Thanks

Keith

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raypool

Wed 22nd Sep 2021 22:27

Fascinating stuff Graham and more power to your elbow. I remember Steve Perryman's debut , caused a stir. At one game the crowd surged forward and we were pushed about ten yards, scary. I used to watch West Ham too in that single deck arena. Hell, i'm becoming a fan....

Ray

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Brenda Wells

Wed 22nd Sep 2021 18:41

Lovely to read while listening to this moving piece of music. It seems to almost introduce movement into the words.

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John F Keane

Wed 22nd Sep 2021 17:53

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John F Keane

Wed 22nd Sep 2021 17:49

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 22nd Sep 2021 17:41

Hold! Plenty of time for that eternal sleep, Keith! We need lots more superb poetry! Another 30 yrs or so will do, mate. Poetry wise: superb as always! ?

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 22nd Sep 2021 17:31

Some great lines in there, Sarah, including the very last. Superb

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 22nd Sep 2021 16:30

And many thanks to Hugh, Stephen and Rudyard for the likes.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 22nd Sep 2021 13:28

Ray, when I was ten years old (when a lot of boys begin to pick a favourite team) THFC were the top bananas! Following them for almost 60 years has been a rugged journey to say the least!

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d.knape

Wed 22nd Sep 2021 12:55

Thanks Stephen for reading that poem, "Sittin' & Watchin'".
I'll tell O.L. you said Hi!

Now read today's poem.
Won't take long!
?

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deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com

Wed 22nd Sep 2021 07:08

Thanks Stephen and Stephen! ?

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Scattered Sun

Wed 22nd Sep 2021 04:45

Thank you for the kind comments. Much appreciated! ?

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raypool

Tue 21st Sep 2021 20:44

Hi Graham. I felt a connection with the heroes of the day and the team at the time, and I believed suffered in the pilgrimage. That's just my version, and the likes of Jimmy were of their time and beyond it. Shame he was left out of the 1966 winning game! I remember Gilzean likewise with his headers. Great personality. And thanks for saying that , I try to rely on inspiration, not easy at the moment.

Greg, as a master recorder of moments yourself you have sussed out the truth. A very long trudge - my mate being the prime mover, as we also worked as a duo and just starting in the business. We never thought of it as a hardship, just got on with it. Mucho gracias for the compliment.

John, an erratic game just kept us on our toes as it were! They were doing pretty well at the time.

Thanks Stephen, glad it worked for you. Yes, a long way indeed, and the pubs always brim full too.

Thanks for the likes, Stephen, Holden and Donna.

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 21st Sep 2021 20:35

How do you write such lovely poetry?
?

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 21st Sep 2021 20:30

Last week I watched a girl almost trip over a bush, and then walk into a tree because of the hypnotic power of her phone! I shouldn't have laughed, but...

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 21st Sep 2021 20:19

I'll never look at paper the same again ?. Nice one

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 21st Sep 2021 20:12

Meant to comment earlier on this: A wonderfully succinct, image inducing treat! ?

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Stephen Atkinson

Tue 21st Sep 2021 19:59

Thank you Stephen & Julie glad you like it! ?
And, Keith, the Cosmos is a big place, don't get lost! Thank for the encouragement ?
And for the Likes Hugh, Rudyard, Holden & Scattered Sun ?

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