This was really good I enjoyed it -phraseology and brevity - well done

Comment is about Lines written in theTudor House on the 30th Anniversary of the death of John Lennon (blog)

Original item by Dave Morgan

I so enjoy moment writes and this moment of yours is well captured..nice work indeed.

Comment is about Snowflake (blog)

Original item by MissLucy

such a powerful write..i liked this very much.

Comment is about Sh*t Christmas (blog)

Original item by MissLucy

Nice one dave

A man of many parts (Lennon) and with a fantastic middle name IMHO ! Win x

Comment is about Lines written in theTudor House on the 30th Anniversary of the death of John Lennon (blog)

Original item by Dave Morgan

Like this, great ending, the vastness does my head in, think I will write something, love space, the stars and concept of it all, good stuff Jeff X

Comment is about Space (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

And so you should have a song! Thanx for comment on my winters poem, have a good amxas Jeff X

Comment is about Ghazal (blog)

Original item by Lynn Dye

Oh. That's strange. I posted a comment and it's disappeared!

Anyway. I said something like:

Mmmm. Warm, sensual and lovely. Love it :)

Comment is about Kissed (blog)

Original item by Shoeless Carole

Hello L
Thanks for your comments on Pit and Pendulum.
I didn't realise that I ran on "saw inside" to make it sound like "saw rinside". Just a laziness of pronunciation on my part, I expect.
Do you find regional variations in English hard to understand or are you OK with these differences?
I worked in Scotland some time ago at a factory where there were a lot of Polish workers. They could not understand me but could understand perfectly the locals (from Glasgow) whom I could not understand!

Comment is about Larisa Rzhepishevska (poet profile)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Oh beHAVE! Hahaa!

Comment is about John Coopey (poet profile)

Original item by John Coopey

Laura
Thanks for your comments on Pit.
How did you know my other fetish was armpit farting?

Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)

Original item by Laura Taylor

Ha ha - glad you posted it Dave. Not bad for summat you scribbled down in the Tudor. I love the blunt ending. x

Comment is about Lines written in theTudor House on the 30th Anniversary of the death of John Lennon (blog)

Original item by Dave Morgan

i'll go through this with you next time over some of the line endings, but content wise i think is lovely.. nice one xx

Comment is about Snowflake (blog)

Original item by MissLucy

phew - powerful stuff, luce.. well done - a very honest piece indeed - i like this a lot xx

Comment is about Sh*t Christmas (blog)

Original item by MissLucy

Yay - an ode to pit hair! *sticks left fist up and reveals pit hair* ;)

Fab stuff sir! You wouldn't wanna do that to me though, I am the master of armpit farting ;D That'd take you down (a peg or two, cackle)

Comment is about The Pit and the Pendulum (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

'Scuse my manners - thanks for your comment on my space pome.

Cislunar. Remember what it is now? ;)

Comment is about Dave Carr (poet profile)

Original item by Dave Carr

Very close to my own heart and life Melissa. You made it back - nice one sistah! Isn't life so much better now? :)

Comment is about Keep Fighting (blog)

A testimony of how Christmas can be, indeed. I like this very much.

Comment is about Sh*t Christmas (blog)

Original item by MissLucy

I have a strong feeling that I too, have been here before. As the child, and the father.

Comment is about Sh*t Christmas (blog)

Original item by MissLucy

re kissed , yes you are right , and this month is the first month i am beginning to see how to link ideas together in a poem ... watch this space i guess , :)

Comment is about garside (poet profile)

Original item by garside

Right, I'll get on the site and check it out. Thanks for liking the Wolf Man on my FB wall.

Comment is about Rachel McGladdery (poet profile)

Original item by Rachel McGladdery

Hi Greg Oz was brilliant in every way: People, Scenery, food and as for the weather - what a pain to go from 36 degrees in Brisbane to the 'big freeze' here! Managed to get one poem, too, and working on another one.

Comment is about Greg Freeman (poet profile)

Original item by Greg Freeman

feels like you could have carried on passed the word love and opened this work out...time is as time as I suppose x

Comment is about Kissed (blog)

Original item by Shoeless Carole

Hi Philip, good to see you on here! The lennon poems are now up on the Beatles Story website, think they're attached to the press release about the competition. Thanks again,
Rach
x

Comment is about PHILIP BURTON (poet profile)

Original item by PHILIP BURTON

Hiya Dave, the poems are up on The Beatles Story site think they're attached to the press release about the competition. As for the oem of the month thang, you deserve it, I bloody love that poem! :)

Comment is about David Cooke (poet profile)

Original item by David Cooke

my other half knows a lot more about Egypt than i do, so i will pass it onto her for a second opinion, but it looks fine to me... x

Comment is about I Dream of Egypt (blog)

i actually read the original line 'as careless whisper' by accident, dave - lol

but good one m8.. enjoyed it a lot

Comment is about unwanted wants (blog)

Original item by Dave Bradley

Thank you, Philipos.

Comment is about Friend (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Hi Larisa - I liked the acronym and the picture used to illustrate it

Comment is about Friend (blog)

Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska

Hi Dave - how true the last line - very cleverly phrased

Comment is about unwanted wants (blog)

Original item by Dave Bradley

My word!
This does seem to have attracted some interest very quickly.
I think I've discovered a new form of niche advertising.

Comment is about The Pit and the Pendulum (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Thank you. "Life is lived in the mind" because it is what defines who we are to become.

Comment is about Keep Fighting (blog)

Works a treat!

:-)

Jx

Comment is about Triolet de la Petite Mort (blog)

Original item by John Aikman

aye I used to enjoy the very same experience at the Cheshire Oaks but sadly never again..such a shame..loved the write

Comment is about Borders (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

well blimey..still laughing over the arachnid species..jeeez..dunno what to say really..cept she looks as if she conditions and combs!

Comment is about The Pit and the Pendulum (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Hi, John! I found this poem to be very interesting. Enjoyed listening to it. Liked the sound of your voice. But....as far as English is a foreign language for me I would like to know why you pronounced [if wimin soRinsaid menz maindz] Do you understand me? I mean that sound [R]

With warmest wishes,
Larisa

Comment is about The Pit and the Pendulum (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Very true to life and touching, honest stuff. We sometimes forget our life is lived 'in the mind.'

Comment is about Keep Fighting (blog)

Hi Rachel Just remembered that thanks to your good offices I'm 'poem of the month'. Thanks for that and for your kind introduction. By the way still haven't seen your prize winning poem yet.

Comment is about Rachel McGladdery (poet profile)

Original item by Rachel McGladdery

Hi again Ann just played the audio clip. A lovely rendition.

Comment is about ghazal (ruby slippers) (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Hi Ann I think you've struck gold with your ghazals!

Comment is about ghazal (ruby slippers) (blog)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

Goodness gracious! We haven't passed the watershed yet. :) Very entertaining. Is that arm pit hair? Or some arachnid species that David Attenborough hasn't discovered?

Comment is about The Pit and the Pendulum (blog)

Original item by John Coopey

Love it - under-stated, simple, just lovely.
Cx

Comment is about Kissed (blog)

Original item by Shoeless Carole

The usual Dave....quietly brilliant.

Thank you.

Jxxx

Comment is about unwanted wants (blog)

Original item by Dave Bradley

Hello Dave
Haikus don't generally do much for me.
This was an exception; so much so that I'd read it twice before I realised it was one.
Nice work.

Comment is about unwanted wants (blog)

Original item by Dave Bradley

hello Dave..what a profound haiku..i realy enjoyed that last line it made me think yup!..

Comment is about unwanted wants (blog)

Original item by Dave Bradley

such a gentle, intimate write. Lovely work.

Comment is about Kissed (blog)

Original item by Shoeless Carole

...thanks Andy...I get up and sing my songs here and there...not used to reading poems though,possibly best just read in silence!...cheers.

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

Original item by Andy N

Really enjoyed this, love it!

Comment is about THE OLD CROW (blog)

..hello Ann...yes, it is off-balance, but this is a girl who says what she wants, how and where, all the previous lines mean nothing..

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

Original item by Ann Foxglove

I like the humour of this satirical poem. Very much in keeping with the cartoons that manage to poke fun jibes very close to the bone in Westminster.

Well written, good targets, good fun...what isn't there to like?

I also strongly approve of the final line/thought.

Chris

Comment is about Tax the Rich (blog)

Original item by Freda Davis

Hi Bernadette, Thanks for your kind comment on my blog

Comment is about bernadette herbertson (poet profile)

Original item by bernadette herbertson