ghazal (ruby slippers)

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I tiptoe to your house in my ruby slippers

I have a date to dance in my ruby slippers

 

Twirling toes in holly halls take merry chances

Dervish dances in my pointy ruby slippers

 

Tie your bow tie, quick as it spins my darling

I’ll spin and spoon with you in my ruby slippers

 

I wade through frozen snow, they’re in my hand, held tight,

My own sparkly optimistic ruby slippers

 

I hide them in my mufti army surplus bag

Wrapped in plain brown paper, my two ruby slippers

 

I’ll give you an emerald tie pin, a present

To match the bling of my magic ruby slippers

 

Our karaoke poetry melts all the hearts.

I know all the words in my bright ruby slippers

 

Cinderella’s sisters will have no truck with me,

I twirl my petticoats, oh! my ruby slippers

 

With holly, ivy, mistletoe, we’ll pull crackers

And eat hot plum pudding from my ruby slippers

 

The last waltz will be Ann’s fandango made of love

As we jive forever in our ruby slippers!

Ghazal

◄ ghazal ( Fibonacci swirl)

plump blond girl ►

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Gus Jonsson

Sat 11th Dec 2010 15:48

Delightful Ann...

However I changed your Gaz line to Skimpy Knickers and reread the poem....

Forgive me but I prefer my adaptation...

Lots of love xx
Gus

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David Cooke

Thu 9th Dec 2010 20:58

Hi again Ann just played the audio clip. A lovely rendition.

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David Cooke

Thu 9th Dec 2010 20:56

Hi Ann I think you've struck gold with your ghazals!

<Deleted User> (6315)

Wed 8th Dec 2010 22:00

oh lovely Ann..point ruby slippers made me smile rather wistfully lol x

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John Coopey

Wed 8th Dec 2010 21:44

Ann
Can I watch?
Better still, borrow your slippers?

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winston plowes

Wed 8th Dec 2010 19:54

This sounds like a very exciting event! Where can I get tickets.

Seriously though... liked the jumping situations and red words. Lovely and light hearted Ann, Win x

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John Aikman

Wed 8th Dec 2010 19:07

Excellent stuff!...Ghazals though, so 'yesterday'.

:-)

<Deleted User> (8672)

Wed 8th Dec 2010 18:50

'Dervish (i.e. Sufi?) dances...' Interesting, considering the origin of Ghazals? Etc, etc. I like this, very clever, very topical. Must have a go at one sometime myself.

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