Triolet de la Petite Mort

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I know the places to caress

and kiss you to your little death

I'll slip my hand inside your dress

I know the places to caress

Let me alleviate your stress

until you pulse and catch your breath

I know the places to caress

and kiss you to your little death.

◄ Lost Ghazal

Love is a Stranger ►

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Lynn Dye

Tue 14th Dec 2010 15:24

Delightfully saucy, think that may work for me on occasions, lol.
Thank you John also for your lovely comments on my ghazal. x

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John Aikman

Thu 9th Dec 2010 22:26

Works a treat!

:-)

Jx

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 8th Dec 2010 18:11

What's a triolet then? Blimey, just nearly getting into them ghazal thingys! x

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Laura Taylor

Wed 8th Dec 2010 12:09

Isobel - that sounds like a challenge to me! ;)

Good stuff John - enjoyed this, must look up the form so I can torture myself a little more ;)

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Tue 7th Dec 2010 23:10

Like it a lot - a little risque

<Deleted User> (7789)

Tue 7th Dec 2010 18:15

Great!

<Deleted User> (6315)

Tue 7th Dec 2010 17:26

I do enjoy the odd triolet or three John...and this one works oh so well..

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Francine

Tue 7th Dec 2010 16:58

Très bien John ; )
Je vais en faire un...

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Isobel

Tue 7th Dec 2010 16:48

Are you absolutely sure about that Win?
Sounds like an irrisistible invitation John - though you struggle with erotic, you do saucy very well :)) x
Will we now see a wave of triolets sweeping across WOL I wonder?

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John Darwin

Tue 7th Dec 2010 16:20

Good one John you naughty boy :-)

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winston plowes

Tue 7th Dec 2010 15:43

Hi again John, not come across this form before, most interesting. Win x

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