I'm a fairly new writer, I've always jotted down verses I liked since I was little but only really started taking more interest in it in 2010. I think I have improved since then but I guess I'm on here to get some constructive criticism from those who know what they're talking about!! I mainly just do this because I enjoy it at the moment, but I'm hopefully heading to university next year to do a degree in English and Creative Writing where I will hopefully improve a lot more!! But for now, my poetry is whatever I want it to be! I hope you like them.
Peat's Silent Secret. An evil so dire Now lies in a hospital bed Time to dwell on thoughts From the past, Haunting Behind the eyes Of the near deceased Her evil lover, still As dire as always No remorse nor care For those who suffered From their terrifying actions Tearing apart their once happy lives A glimmer of hope For she who searches so dearly When a spark of good will Appears in her black heart Though not enough to be forgiven For the terror they caused A mother's tear, again Is shed for her child Long lost in the earth Silent sobs from her heart Shiver through her body As she relives the horror story Searching, Longing For a thread of a memory A clue, to where her angel lies Silently, covered in cold peat soil No hint from the wind As it sweeps across the moors Footsteps after footsteps And still not a trace Of the short lived angel She once held in her arms Years have passed But the pain is still deep Desperate for a sign Never giving up Losing her mind with worry Of never finding What longs to be found Waiting, lonely and cold Guided by his killer Never allowing the memory To die with the time But lying there still A love so dear The moor's silent secret.
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You belong to the wind now... (15/11/2011)
The Silent Lake (13/02/2011)
Sh*t Christmas (10/12/2010)
Rise and Fall (03/11/2010)
Thanks Mum (28/10/2010)
Freedom Competition Poem (24/10/2010)
Take me home (15/09/2010)
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