Kissed
Full on the lips
My heart was kissed
Gentle tongues,
Pushing against
Feelings long
Held tight
Thoughts flooding
Upon this watershed
Their gentle flow
carried me
to reveal a new
understanding of love
Comments
Well you know what I think about it ....dont ya?!!
Well done
Gus xx
Oh. That's strange. I posted a comment and it's disappeared!
Anyway. I said something like:
Mmmm. Warm, sensual and lovely. Love it :)
feels like you could have carried on passed the word love and opened this work out...time is as time as I suppose x
Love it - under-stated, simple, just lovely.
Cx
<Deleted User> (6315)
Thu 9th Dec 2010 19:38
such a gentle, intimate write. Lovely work.
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Lynn Dye
Tue 14th Dec 2010 17:38
This is lovely, Carole.