Full on the lips

My heart was kissed

Gentle tongues,

Pushing against

Feelings long

Held tight

Thoughts flooding

Upon this watershed

Their gentle flow

carried me

to reveal a new

understanding  of love


◄ Silver

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Lynn Dye

Tue 14th Dec 2010 17:38

This is lovely, Carole.

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Gus Jonsson

Sat 11th Dec 2010 14:58

Well you know what I think about it ....dont ya?!!

Well done

Gus xx

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Laura Taylor

Fri 10th Dec 2010 14:20

Oh. That's strange. I posted a comment and it's disappeared!

Anyway. I said something like:

Mmmm. Warm, sensual and lovely. Love it :)

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Fri 10th Dec 2010 09:36

feels like you could have carried on passed the word love and opened this work out...time is as time as I suppose x

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Chris Dawson

Thu 9th Dec 2010 20:37

Love it - under-stated, simple, just lovely.

<Deleted User> (6315)

Thu 9th Dec 2010 19:38

such a gentle, intimate write. Lovely work.

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