my mind wanders
places unexplored
outer space
mind-blowingly vast
beyond our galaxy
planets sparkle
billions of them
so many
light years away
and beyond the stars
I can’t comprehend
just space
utterly infinite
unfathomable
like this space
in my head
I like the way you tie the two spaces together. Space is quite scary - inner and outer! xx
nice one lyn. Need to look at that link again as it worked on my pc.. wonder why it didn't work here! x
I like the thought process of this, Lynn...
Just let your mind explore the possibilities
: )
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 21st Nov 2010 17:25
Lynn,you forgot the word'beautiful'in between the last two words-good read-Stef-xx
<Deleted User> (8672)
Sun 21st Nov 2010 15:56
Sometimes thinking is the best way to travel. It's certainly reduces one's carbon footprint! Very nice.
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Jeff Dawson
Fri 10th Dec 2010 18:14
Like this, great ending, the vastness does my head in, think I will write something, love space, the stars and concept of it all, good stuff Jeff X