Space

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 my mind wanders

places unexplored

outer space

mind-blowingly vast

beyond our galaxy

planets sparkle

billions of them

so many

light years away

and beyond the stars

I can’t comprehend

just space

utterly infinite

unfathomable

like this space

in my head

space

◄ Hallux Valgus

Ghazal ►

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Jeff Dawson

Fri 10th Dec 2010 18:14

Like this, great ending, the vastness does my head in, think I will write something, love space, the stars and concept of it all, good stuff Jeff X

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Ann Foxglove

Tue 23rd Nov 2010 18:13

I like the way you tie the two spaces together. Space is quite scary - inner and outer! xx

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Andy N

Mon 22nd Nov 2010 08:30

nice one lyn. Need to look at that link again as it worked on my pc.. wonder why it didn't work here! x

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Francine

Mon 22nd Nov 2010 04:32

I like the thought process of this, Lynn...
Just let your mind explore the possibilities
: )

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 21st Nov 2010 17:25

Lynn,you forgot the word'beautiful'in between the last two words-good read-Stef-xx

<Deleted User> (8672)

Sun 21st Nov 2010 15:56

Sometimes thinking is the best way to travel. It's certainly reduces one's carbon footprint! Very nice.

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